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Reviewer: ~*~Tasha~*~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2005 - 02:34 pm Title: Future Shock

Excellent update. Very moving. Heart wrenching. You write the emotions of the characters very well. Look forward to the next update.

Author's Response: Thanks. Even I was tearing up as I wrote it.

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Date: 08/02/2005 - 07:43 pm Title: Equilibrium

So that was what Angel did that killed Buffy: She got infected by the virus. Really not so good. I hope because Spike did see something in his dreams, he'll be able to prevent it from happening.

Author's Response: Joni's changed it just by doing what she did. So it's possible she made it better. But she could have made it worse,too. Read and find out which!

Reviewer: M.G. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2005 - 02:30 am Title: Equilibrium

Who exactly does Angel think he is deciding he has the right to use the slayers as guinea pigs he has no medical training. Now I get why Spike doesn't trust him and Joni hates him. I'm really curious as to how all this leads to Angel killing Joni's family. It almost seems like Angel wants to destroy the slayer line. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Giles is about to tell Angel just how *smart* burning the evidence was. ;-)

Reviewer: ~*~Tasha~*~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2005 - 12:42 am Title: Equilibrium

Hmm ... I was a little bit confused in this chapter, but I'm sure it is just part of the set up. Excellent chat between Angelus and Giles. The whole virus part is what I'm confused about ... but they don't realize that Joni is from the future. Look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: No one in this timeline knows that. The only one who's got a clue is Spike, and he thinks he's gone a bit daft. Remember, Spike is dreaming things that happened in the other timeline, thanks to Joni's daddy. Please keep reading.

Reviewer: Lindsay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2005 - 09:56 pm Title: Equilibrium

I just caught up on all the updates, im so glad i did. Im still very confused but i think i might be strating to understand. It's beautifully written and i cant wait for more. great job with this it is absolutely incredible xxx

Author's Response: More will be explained soon. Hang in there.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2005 - 08:55 pm Title: Second-Hand Life

So Angel did something or has something that is important and he doesn't now it (The Ring? I don't think so). Lace? Mmm. Joni's blood did have antibodies? I wonder if her blood would have given the cure for Buffy's desease. Oh my - it's all about Joni! Looking forward to see if they (Buffy and Spike) will get her in time (to save her from Angelus)

Reviewer: riam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2005 - 08:53 pm Title: Second-Hand Life

nice chapter, why does buffy want to give angel another chance, i would have tought that she would have learned that that fuck is good for nothing. seeya FMS.

Reviewer: M.G. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2005 - 08:13 pm Title: Second-Hand Life

Looks like all the players are in place. Things are really getting exciting now! I hope Spike bests Angel this time around and saves his girls. Wouldn't it just be easier if he dusted Angel? Anyway love the story so far!

Author's Response: Oh but Angel's *such* an easy villian to write! If I dusted him, I'd actually have to think one up, and that is soo hard. Still, it *might * happen ;-)

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 08:32 pm Title: Tremors

Awe . WE are one (more like William Elisabeth are one, huh?) Sneaky Angel stole the things of Joni and discovered the wedding band - Spike'Ss? Buffy's? I still don't trust Angel (lol - and before I didn't trust Dru) - but Spike had a reason for Joni not coming near him - that's right.

Author's Response: What can I tell ya,Cordy? I'm a romantic and WE was too good to pass up. Joni's a Daddy's girl so the ring is probably Spike's.

Reviewer: M.G. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 05:48 pm Title: Tremors

Am I mistaken or did future Spike know how present Spike would react to Joni's death? Just curious. It's sad seeing Spike in so much pain i'm glad Buffy is there for him. It seems as though Angel didn't learn anything from his experiences in the previous story. But maybe i'm wrong. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Future Spike(A) knew how the timeline went the first time around. Joni changed things aa little because of what she did. But, remember the Spike of this timeline has been having nightmares. It's possible that Joni's Daddy did too, and tried to keep his nightmares from coming true. But, teenagers are funny creatures, so... As far as Angel, remember, Joni's Daddy didn't want him anywhere near her? There could be a reason for that. ;-)

Reviewer: ~*~Tasha~*~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 12:47 pm Title: Tremors

Wow, another fine chapter. What a place to end it. I'm chomping at the bit here for more. I saw the update and pounced on it right away. Look forward to the next update!

Reviewer: ~*~Tasha~*~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2005 - 01:07 am Title: Beyond Love

Excellent update of this one. Look forward to seeing what you have up your sleeve next, and what they will find out to save Buffy later. Looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response: Thanks! I look foward to having you find out what's next.

Reviewer: M.G. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2005 - 12:13 am Title: Beyond Love

Thanks for giving the "Patient Zero" hint. I searched it on the net, and it helped me to understand a few things about Joni. Not everything of course but a little. Great chapter by the way!

Author's Response: You're very welcome. Keep reading.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2005 - 05:16 pm Title: Beyond Love

Oh - I loved the update. But know I'm even wondering more: Why did Spike say to Joni: I think you may have just helped...me save your Mum I wonder what it was she did... and she's know with Spike and Buffy in the INTERREGNUM, right? You have always some riddles in your fics. But I love it. :)

Author's Response: Yep. That's where Joni is, for now. But keep reading and you may judt figure it out before I can finish the story.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2005 - 08:58 pm Title: Hearts In Retrograde

Oh I hope Spike's plan (idea) will work :) It's sad to think they're gone...

Reviewer: M.G. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2005 - 11:12 pm Title: Hearts In Retrograde

That was one interesting chapter so much was going on! I'm really worried about Joni. Can't wait to find out what Joyce and Spike are up to and what happened to Joni.

Reviewer: ~*~Tasha~*~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2005 - 10:36 pm Title: Hearts In Retrograde

Yeah, we're back to Spike and Buffy ... nice show into their purgatory or heaven. I look forward to the next chapter to see just what Joyce has done or will do.

Author's Response: Did you really think I'd go too long without Spuffy? *tsk tsk* Tasha.

Reviewer: lindsay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2005 - 01:26 am Title: Starlight, Star Bright

wow im totally sucked into this, im glad to see my reviews are showing too. I cant wait for the next update, this was amazing, please post soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm along for the ride too, when I write. So, I figure if I'm not bored, neither are the ones who take time to read!

Reviewer: ~*~Tasha~*~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2005 - 09:29 pm Title: Starlight, Star Bright

Excellent story ... excellent. I am eager to find out what comes next. I'm curious as to what point of history she is returning to, or if she is heading to a whole nother plane of existence entirely.

Author's Response: She may have inadvertedly started a chain reaction.

Reviewer: riam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2005 - 09:09 pm Title: Starlight, Star Bright

nice chapter, so many questions, can't wait for the story to unravel. ps:Love the relationship between spike and his daughter, she's really a daddysgirl. seeya

Reviewer: M.G. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2005 - 08:58 pm Title: Starlight, Star Bright

Every chapter keeps leaving me with more questions. I like that. I can't wait to find out more about Joni and what happened to Buffy and Spike.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2005 - 08:36 pm Title: Starlight, Star Bright

Oh my - there's a lot in this chapter. I don't know if I remember to mention everything: So Spike was human when he died, because of that brass ring. Joni is the slayer, can do magic too. Wants to see her father again. Spike wanted Willow to protect Joni - what for? Not to do what she did? Seems she's going back in time. Oh - and Wilow thinks it's her fault Spike had to die.. when whatever it was that happened. Well - as I thought before: I hope Joni can make it right -and won't do it more wrong!

Author's Response: Ever hear of someone called "Patient zero"? Joni just became one. ;-)

Reviewer: lindsay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2005 - 12:56 am Title: Daddy's Girl

wow, i cant say i totally understand just yet (but i did read paryers for a poet, i dont know why but for that fic everytime i posted a review it never showed, hopefully the same doesnt happen here. It was an amazing story btw) but i am def. intrigued. I love the way you write. The way you describe things makes me feel like im right there. Great job and i cant wait for more!!!

Author's Response: Well so far so good. I've gotten your first post. I hope there will be more. As for the confusion, pay attention to the dates at the beginning, they should help. As far as the plot? I never like a story that gives the reader the answers right away. I think they're boring! Please enjoy;-)

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2005 - 08:24 pm Title: Daddy's Girl

Oh m< - Jonina Dustin. Spike's and Buffy's girl? And both dead. Mmmh - I would like it if Jonina could change that again... seems not fair for both to be dead now. Looking forward to what will happen and what happened.

Author's Response: Joni will *try* to change it. Of course, things may get worse before they get better. Hang in there! :-)

Reviewer: Tam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2005 - 07:29 pm Title: Daddy's Girl

YAY!! more more!

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