So is this story finished at all?? I mean I see it on adultfanfiction.net and it's got 13 chapters and on here it's got 15 so what's the what is it somewhere else done and all endy and stuff??? I'm just wondering because I really like it and would like to finish it. Write me back and let me know.

Author's Response: I plan on finishing it. I've been working on a new chapter, but I can't say when a new chapter will be posted.

So, I read this entire story, up to this point, today. Additionally, I received info on how to give feedback to authors (which is something I try to do but makes me rather nervous), today. So, please know that I am trying to be constructive with my feedback and that you are, in essence, getting all the feedback from the previous chapters up to now- hence the length.

1) I like the story. I think it's rather entertaining and, while not unique, it is a different story.

2)I like that your Buffy is different from Joss's, but that she still has that 'Buffy' edge of Joss's. Same thing about Spike. Also, having Angel as Buffy's brother is something that i rarely see and I like the way you've written that.

3) I think you should look into getting a Beta, though. As someone who had an English teacher that was a right bastard, some of the editing mistakes (such as too/to, hear/here and comma usage) makes this good story a little hard to read in spots. These small things interrupt the flow of a good story, and I think a Beta would really be able to help you out.

4) I like the way Dawn and Spike are brother and sister. It's funny, though, that Buffy and Dawn get along- for some reason, I always just picture Dawn pissy at Buffy, so to see this in the story is really cool, but makes me laugh in my head.

5) Don't worry about the time it takes to update. i know that a lot of the readers would rather have an author take a little longer to get an update out and still have it quality rather than have a reader crank out bad writing everyday. If it takes a week because Real Life is being a pain in the ass, your readers will stay loyal and will come back. You might get a few grumblers, but you can't please everybody- just don't let them get you down.

I hope that was good feedback, and I hope it wasn't harsh!

Author's Response: Sorry it took so long for me to reply, I had a personal lost and had to deal with it. ^_^ Nope, one should never ber nervous when giving feedback, cause hey, even though the author took the time to write if he/she had messed up, needs work, etc, the readers are who helps, right? 1) Not unique *gasps* no just kidding. I started this fic way back last summer I think, or maybe it was spring, I really can't recall. But it was a story I was doing with my video game the sims, and decided it would make a cute Spuffy fic, so that's how I based it. *did that make sense?* 2) Thanks, thanks, and thanks again. 3) Finally got a beta. Like I said I, or maybe I didn't lol. This was my first fic ever written and I had no idea about betas etc. But I know I put in my authors notes on this chappie, than I'm trying to get the whole thing beta'ed, so I can repost the update version here and on my web site. I know it will take some time, I just hope everyone can wait for it! ^_^ 4) That's good,lol. I really did start out with Dawn not liking Buffy, but when I started to type it they decided they wanted to be friends. 5) Yeah, I'm with you on that. My new fic I'm working on. Really taking my time, working with my lovely beta, making sure everthing is readable and lovely, err, well, I hope so,lol. This was way better than just good feedback, with was aswesome feedback!!! Nope, not to harsh1 ^_^

I shower you with praise!!! :) Great update.

Author's Response: :P Thanks, Opal.

I love it. Update again soon

Author's Response: Thanks, I plan too.