Date: 04/02/2006 - 06:48 am Title: Chapter 2
Overall I think this story has promise. It is unfortunate that I am unable to see around Xander's characterization long enough to finish it. I find Xander's "Gangster Rapper" depiction a bit insulting. I am not flaming you, just giving you some feedback.
Stereotypes Dehumainze.
Furthermore most rappers are entertainers, they don't always actually communicate like that. I appreciate you sharing your story.
Author's Response: I'm sorry you couldn't see past Xander's character. Yes, I know how rappers sound and act in real life. They are entertainers, and my fic is also for entertainment. This was a story, Halloween based, and a bit comical, not to make "stero types". If I had decide to make Xander a Arab terrorist with bombs, I wouldn't be saying that all Arabs are terrorists, because I know that is not true. As well as I know all rappers don't act in this fashion. Again, its a story, not real life.
Date: 08/22/2005 - 02:35 am Title: Chapter 2
lol that was fun to read. Great job.
Author's Response: Awww, thanks. Glad you liked it, it was fun to write too!
Date: 08/01/2005 - 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ghetto Xander...hehe...I find myself wishing for an action figure. :)
Author's Response: rofl, that would be funny to see and have!
Date: 08/01/2005 - 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 2
LOL!!!!!!I fell out of my chair laughing at Grand Master Xan!
Author's Response: Yay, that's what I wanted you to do!!! *nods head* Yup, total lose of being lol.
Date: 08/01/2005 - 07:03 am Title: Chapter 2
Gangsta Xander is hilarious....and is Willow going to become more like her outfit like Buffy or Xander?
Author's Response: Dn't you just love his dog tags rofl. you'll have to wait and see, but i think u'll like willow. ^_~
Date: 08/01/2005 - 06:43 am Title: Chapter 2
ROFL! Grand Master Xan :D His dialogue is priceless! I am so enjoying this - more,more,more!
Author's Response: lol, yeah he throw me for a loop too. i couldn't stop laughing while writing. ^_^
Date: 08/01/2005 - 06:00 am Title: Chapter 2
that was a great chapter. kinda funny. really funny actually. loved it. can't wait for more. post soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! I really enjoy writing this story, it's so much fun! I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Date: 08/01/2005 - 05:42 am Title: Chapter 2
lol! This is good so far! Nice spin on all the costumes! Update soon!
Author's Response: thanks! i really wanted something that broke the mold with them. ^_^
Date: 08/01/2005 - 04:50 am Title: Chapter 2
ghetto xander cracks me up!
Author's Response: lol, i laughed the whole time while i wrote him. i'm glad you're enjoying him.