Date: 09/10/2005 - 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 3: 'Steppin' Out; Or Steppin' In It!'
Oh.. seems more what Buffy wanted from Holden. He has money. Dawn with her truth telling is very refreshing.
Date: 09/03/2005 - 08:37 am Title: Chapter 3: 'Steppin' Out; Or Steppin' In It!'
Nice work =0)
Author's Response: Thanks.
spuf
Date: 09/03/2005 - 08:00 am Title: Chapter 3: 'Steppin' Out; Or Steppin' In It!'
Cute chap, with Spike and Dawn. I just can't get over Dawn's blue eyes. Are they a hidden message of some kind? Don't feel forced to give a spoiler, I'm just wondering....
Author's Response: Thanks.
I'll give you a spoiler:
No, Dawn is not Buffy or Spike's child, through blood.
There are some surprises in store however.
Thanks,
spuf
Date: 09/03/2005 - 02:43 am Title: Chapter 3: 'Steppin' Out; Or Steppin' In It!'
This really is a great story, don't be discouraged by the lack of reviews. I think you are oding a wonderful job on this fic. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you.
I appreciate your reviews.
spuf
Date: 09/02/2005 - 06:43 am Title: Chapter 3: 'Steppin' Out; Or Steppin' In It!'
This story continues to be deeply cute! I'm loving the Dawn/Spike interactions; but then I'm a sucker for Dawn and Spike as a general rule.
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks. It's supposed to be fluffy, a little angst, later.
spuf
Date: 09/02/2005 - 02:36 am Title: Chapter 3: 'Steppin' Out; Or Steppin' In It!'
excellent update and cant wait to see what the offer is
Author's Response: Thank you!
spuf
Date: 09/02/2005 - 12:46 am Title: Chapter 3: 'Steppin' Out; Or Steppin' In It!'
aww thats so cute, im so happy that spikes starting to like dawn and that buffy came, even though he was being kind of mean but i hope taht it gets better. i love this story and am so happy that u updated. i really hope that spike and buffy start to get together and they fall in love again. also i hope that she breaks up with angel soon he dosnt deserve her even wen shes a bitch. please updaate as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more and see wat happens next thanx
Author's Response: Thanks.
The fact of the matter is that Spike and Buffy still do love each other. They're just too damn stubborn to admit it!
No, Angel does not deserve Buffy, however, Buffy needs to be a little more honest with her feelings for Spike!
Along the way, we'll meet a cast of colorful characters: Xander, who've we met. Rupert Giles, the wise sage of the group; Riley and Jesse, the thugs who are loyal to Spike; Ethan 'Doc' Rayne who might just have a soul after all and alot of others.
Buffy has her reasons for what she did and the anvil in this chapter was when she told Spike he was the better man.
In the next chapter, Buffy will make Spike an offer he cannot refuse. However, his acceptance of Buffy's offer just might come with a price! Tee hee!
Angel won't be making an appearance again, until close to the end of the story. Even he has a place in this!
Thanks again,
spuf
Date: 09/02/2005 - 12:43 am Title: Chapter 3: 'Steppin' Out; Or Steppin' In It!'
Loved the whole 'dark prince' 'princess' and 'court jester' analogies there lol. Made me chuckle. Can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response: Thanks.
I'm hoping to hold onto the sarcastic one-liners from the old movies. These guys were the best at this kind of thing!
spuf