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Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2007 - 05:35 am Title: Chp 14 Hope (Final chp)

wonderful story ! i enjoyed it from beginning to end!

Author's Response: thank you very much.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2007 - 08:30 pm Title: Chp 14 Hope (Final chp)

Oh therefore the world was like Disney's for Buffy. That makes a lot of sense. Same for Arabella. She'll have a lot of running to do now. Reminds me of the bad stepmom in one (of Grimm's) fairytales where the bad stepmom had to dance till death. So she (Arabella) was responsible for sending Hope away too, all the time. ~ Unexpected twist with Dawn; loved it.
Kind of Spike to leave the lockets; a chance for Arabella to go home.
Loved the story :)

Author's Response: So pleased you liked the story, Cordy. Yes, I think Spike left the lockets to give his cousin a chance to escape at some time.

Reviewer: jennybean Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2007 - 06:35 pm Title: Chp 14 Hope (Final chp)

Great ending. I never would have guessed Dawn was Hope. And I loved Anya and Div'vid together - definitely a match made in heaven.

Author's Response: So glad you liked it. Yes, I thought Anya and Div’vid certainly were right for each other.

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2007 - 06:13 pm Title: Chp 14 Hope (Final chp)

I love it when a story ends, not because I am glad to see the back of it but because you have taken the time & energy to see it through to the end. well done a good story, its a shame we won't be seeing Arabella again, she was a good foil for Buffy

Author's Response: Pleased you enjoyed the story...not see her again? Well, dont be too sure about that! I think she might move heaven and earth to get her revenge on them all.....

Reviewer: J Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2007 - 10:02 pm Title: Chp 13 Puzzles

Nice update, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2007 - 12:02 pm Title: Chp 13 Puzzles

Still loving this and can't wait for more though I hate to see it end.

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2007 - 10:22 pm Title: Chp 13 Puzzles

It seems as if there are two pairs now that have opened their eyes to see the other: Anya and Div'vid; and Xander saw Willow.
Awe, and whatever it was that made the room so full of magic, it opened Spike's eye too. He really saw Arabella now, the way she is. It's all about her. But the room made Buffy and Spike sure of themselves. ~ Two figures? I guess that means that there is somebody with Hope? ~ Looking forward to more (even if it is only one chapter).

Reviewer: katamaphone Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2007 - 07:31 pm Title: Chp 13 Puzzles

I'm always happy, when I see that you've updated any of your stories, cause I love them all. I'm hoping that, in the next chapter, Arabella's end is gruesome in the extreme(grin)!! A girl can hope, right? Anyways, I'm looking forward to seeing how you wrap this all up. Everyone seems to have had an epipheny. Curious , very curious to see where everyone ends up and if the new pairings are permanent............Can't wait::))

Author's Response: so pleased you’re enjoying the story. Will try and get to the end fairly quickly. It’s writing itself without a lot of help from me at the moment!

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2007 - 03:51 pm Title: Chp 13 Puzzles

wonderful, i have really enjoyed this story and am looking forward to the last part. i hope Arabella gets what's coming to her

Author's Response: She’ll certainly get something

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2007 - 09:14 pm Title: Chp 12 Choices

I'm glad that Spike decided to trust Buffy and think twice about Arabella. She's a clever liar indeed. And looks good when crying? Wow...
Ah the little animals again. I wonder if that has something to do with Hope? I don't know how she could do it but maybe she sensed that Buffy is there to help. It's her job to protect the innocent; Hope still is that, I think.
Div'vid thinks that Arabella isn't there anymore? Normally I would be glad but I fear then Buffy and Spike are gone too. Yet the found what they came for! The pendent opened the way, right?

Reviewer: jennybean Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2007 - 04:06 am Title: Chp 12 Choices

Uh oh. That doesn't sound good for Buffy & Spike either.

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2007 - 09:29 pm Title: Chp 12 Choices

I absolutely love this story. You have created such wonderful characters and the interaction between them all is fabulous.

One of my favourite lines in this chapter: "Demons are getting so tired of Disney World and Las Vegas." Heehee!

Now, where have the chipmunks taken Buffy, Spike and Arabella?

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2007 - 09:00 pm Title: Chp 12 Choices

It is about time Spike realized that Arabella isn't all she pretends to be. He's still much to lenient with her though. Is wherever the chipmunks/snake/rock sent them going to lead them to Hope?

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2007 - 04:32 pm Title: Chp 12 Choices

Sorry, can't stand Arabella. She is only out for herself and Spike belongs to Buffy...

And Anya and Div-vid ---belong together.
Must be a world seen by the eyes of the beholder.

Enjoyed.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2007 - 10:19 pm Title: Chp 11 Two by Two

Loved Buffy trying to console Spike.
And how does she think the little animals coming in pairs mean something? *is clueless*
Ah.. too bad Arabella didn't burn *g*
But really bad is that the locket is gone now... Could be difficult to get Hope.
Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 - 11:32 pm Title: Chp 11 Two by Two

I do love this story!

The compelling characters that you've created, the wonderful history; I'm completely drawn in.

Things don't seem to be going too well for dear Cousin Arabella. Oh well. Her thoughts regarding Hope reflect mine. I wonder...?

Btw: Div'vid's herd line was a scorcher!



Author's Response: Glad you’re having fun reading this story. Arabella does get under your skin, doesn‘t she?

Reviewer: J Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 - 06:06 pm Title: Chp 11 Two by Two

Oh gees Buffy, just admit to him that you love him! I swear she can be so hard headed. Great update, please update soon!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 - 01:40 pm Title: Chp 11 Two by Two

Animals around Buffy... wanting her love and attention ??; and Arabella almost in flames.. too bad.

Now that the locket is lost maybe Spike and Buffy can catch up and find what is causing Arabella's distress.

Loved the update. Oh, yes .. Sounds like Anya and Div'vid make a nice couple.. not herd !!

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 - 01:00 pm Title: Chp 11 Two by Two

The three of them would make a nice little herd

That was the best line ever. I totally broke up over that. So glad you updated.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the chp. Hope to update again soon. Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2006 - 11:40 pm Title: Chp 10 Two for Gold

I'm so glad to see an update on this story. I do enjoy reading your work and hope that you're able to add another chapter soon.

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2006 - 10:24 pm Title: Chp 10 Two for Gold

What a sneaky little vampire she is!! excellent chapter!

Reviewer: J Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2006 - 09:51 pm Title: Chp 10 Two for Gold

OMG, i hope Arabella dies a slow and painful death!! friggin hoe! I can't wait for an update. I read the first story Cousin Arabella and was just waiting for a sequel. Thanks for going through with it!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2006 - 09:44 pm Title: Chp 10 Two for Gold

Spike sister means more to him then his childe... he really would be able to kill Arabella? Div'vid is against it, normally behavior, she's his wife. And when Buffy wouldn't have gone between them those two would have fight.
Strange.. Spike thinks it is getting dark? Not for Buffy. (Maybe because he lost hope?)
Seems almost as if Buffy made see Spike a bit clearer, especially that she is jealous of Arabella and she, Buffy, is jealous too. Oh Spike really loved that (Buffy being jealous) :))
And Dru looked right through Bella. She knew Bella were lying. Spike forget that. In his eyes Arabella can't do something wrong *sigh* Oh when he only knew what she is planning.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2006 - 08:36 pm Title: Chp 10 Two for Gold

Stupid Spike.. men can be so dumb.

Enjoying the update.. waiting for more.

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2006 - 04:47 pm Title: Chp 10 Two for Gold

I gave a big scream when I saw you updated. I so love this story. Thanks for this.

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