Date: 12/24/2013 - 04:09 pm Title: End of the Road
Cute story idea, but a good beta could make it a much better read.
Date: 12/24/2013 - 03:34 pm Title: Las Vegas
Another little note: Las Vegas doesn't have a subway.
Date: 12/24/2013 - 03:29 pm Title: The Plan
Cute story, but so many errors. Grammar needs a lot of work, and after 2.5 hours of driving, they'd be well outside of Sunnydale, not on the outskirts. And 143 would be on the 1st floor, unless this is some crazy hotel (the "hundreds" of a room number tell you which floor - 243 would be 2nd floor 1443 would be 14th floor, etc.). And dawn is sun up, dusk is sundown.
[Report This]Date: 06/08/2009 - 11:40 am Title: End of the Road
haha really sweet, i really liked the plot, this is the first amnesia fic ive read =]
[Report This]Date: 08/07/2008 - 01:30 am Title: End of the Road
Great story! I loved every word of it!
[Report This]Date: 11/27/2005 - 03:15 am Title: End of the Road
You're right it is a great song. Your story was really really good also.
D.E. Kane
Author's Response: Thank you, I haven't had many comments on the song! I'm glad you enjoyed it. If you liked this story then check out my new one, "Dirty Little Secret!"
[Report This]Date: 11/03/2005 - 10:16 pm Title: End of the Road
o that was the end... lol. sequeal please!!
Author's Response: Thanx for reviewing. I was thinking about a sequel, but I'm not sure yet. I guess it depends on how many of you guys want one!
[Report This]Date: 11/03/2005 - 10:15 pm Title: End of the Road
wow what a good song!! luved it!! oh of course I luv this story os far... can't wait till i finish!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the song. One of my close friends that I miss very much gave it to me. I think it's a wonderful song. Thanx for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 11/03/2005 - 04:06 am Title: End of the Road
What an amazing ending! I totally loved this fic! You did an awesome job and I hope you write another story soon!
Author's Response: Thank you soo much! I really appreciate you reviewing! I'm glad you liked the ending, and
Author's Response: And I hope to be writing more soon!
[Report This]Date: 11/02/2005 - 05:45 pm Title: End of the Road
This was a fun and light hearted story that I enjoyed reading. Good luck with your future writng projects.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm happt to hear that you liked it. I'm going to keep writing when I think of stuff!
[Report This]Date: 11/01/2005 - 10:02 pm Title: End of the Road
Awe - loved the way it ended. I had fun reading it! BTW - fats = fast, or? At last I think it means that. Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the ending. Thank for reviewing, I hope to write more stories soon. So keep a look out!
[Report This]Date: 11/01/2005 - 07:42 am Title: End of the Road
This has been a really nice little story that I've enjoyed very much. Thx for writing it.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 11/01/2005 - 06:38 am Title: End of the Road
good ending
Author's Response: Thank You!
[Report This]Date: 11/01/2005 - 04:23 am Title: End of the Road
This story was cute and very very sweet. Loved it all. ; )
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm happy that you loved reading it!
[Report This]Date: 10/29/2005 - 05:16 am Title: Fun 'N Games
good updates more please
Author's Response: more should be on the way! I'm just having a little difficulty with something!
Author's Response: more should be on the way! I'm just having a little difficulty with something!
[Report This]Date: 10/18/2005 - 04:56 am Title: Fun 'N Games
Really good one. I can't wait to see Buffy's reaction to Spikes friends and how the Sunnydale crew react. Awesome job so far!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Thank you for reviewing, more to come shortly!
[Report This]Date: 10/17/2005 - 01:07 am Title: Fun 'N Games
It was great to see them just having fun. I just love this story and can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'll try to get more out soon. I'm just a little busy right now.
[Report This]Date: 10/16/2005 - 09:39 am Title: Fun 'N Games
*gg* I can see Buffy had fun going shopping :) Buffy meeting the friends in the next chapter? I think they'll like her a lot - because she makes Spike happy. More than the Scoobies will love Spike :)
Author's Response: I'm thinking everyone will be reunited in the next chapter. But I'm not completely sure on it yet. But I'm working on it! Thanx for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 10/16/2005 - 04:20 am Title: Fun 'N Games
Looking forward to everyone meeting. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thnx for your thoughts. They should be meeting soon!
[Report This]Date: 10/16/2005 - 03:20 am Title: Fun 'N Games
Good update.
Author's Response: Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 10/13/2005 - 04:27 pm Title: The Fun Begins
I think that the term would be that Buffy was being "evil". {chuckles} That bit with the jewelry clerk was funny. Love Spike's friends. Look forward to when Buffy meets them. I keep getting scared that Angel is going to turn up in Vegas at the same time here. So when I say the Fun Begins, I was getting worried. {chuckles} Worried in a good way of course. Look forward to the next update.
Author's Response: First of all thanx for the awesome review! And also don't worry about Angel! Riley is enough to deal with, trust me. Glad you liked it and had a little laught. Next update should be soon. I'm trying to make the chapters longer!
[Report This]Date: 10/11/2005 - 09:32 pm Title: The Fun Begins
Money to spend - and nobody can stop Buffy *gg*
Author's Response: Lots of money to spend! lol. I had to make Spike cool with the money thing! Thanx for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 10/11/2005 - 04:13 pm Title: The Fun Begins
this is gonna get more interesting as the chapters go by waiting for more!!
Author's Response: Glad you find it interesting! Thanx for reviewing and please keep it up!
[Report This]Date: 10/11/2005 - 02:06 pm Title: The Fun Begins
Hehe. Too cute. I'm really enjoying this fic. It's an excellent chapter.
Author's Response: Thanx. I'm glad you liked it,keep reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 10/11/2005 - 07:56 am Title: Road Trip
Accept, not except.
Author's Response: Thanx
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