Date: 10/10/2005 - 03:34 am Title: Plans
Grammar is spelled with an A not an E.
Date: 09/20/2005 - 04:24 am Title: Plans
Great start on this one. I like it so far, but I'm not hooked yet. Probably could be persuaded with some more chapters though. *hint hint* ; )
Author's Response: I promise u this story gets better please just stay with me u wont regret it!!! and thanks for the review
Date: 09/19/2005 - 05:47 am Title: Plans
good so far
Date: 09/19/2005 - 02:53 am Title: Plans
WOW! I so cant wait to see what they do now that they are free! I would be jumping for joy!!! Great chapter and Im really liking the fic! I cant wait to read the next chapter. It IS awesome! I was really nervous when I posted my first fic. I dont know if its your first but its really good! I cant wait to see what happens next! Please update soon! :) Dell
Date: 09/19/2005 - 02:46 am Title: Plans
Great start! I am very interested in seeing where this will go! Kuddos girlie and i can't wait for more!
Date: 09/19/2005 - 02:38 am Title: Plans
hey im first reveiwer! yaay!! it sounds interesting. more soon.