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Reviewer: amin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2011 - 11:47 pm Title: Chapter One

still a bit open

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2005 - 02:27 pm Title: Chapter One

Yep - first chapter was good.

Reviewer: Chelsea Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2005 - 01:37 pm Title: Chapter One

Good start.

Reviewer: ~*~Tasha~*~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2005 - 06:15 pm Title: Chapter One

More more more more ... {grins} Look forward to your next update.

Reviewer: Nichole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2005 - 01:10 pm Title: Chapter One

hey great start look forward to more..it didn't bother me at all about Buffy *69 back to LA..it's just a story of fantasy and creativity..i never would have caught that if someone hadn't pointed it out..but in the end it's your beautiful masterpiece and as its author you have the right to be as creative as you want...update soon...N

Reviewer: Janie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2005 - 01:40 am Title: Chapter One

It's an interesting start, but one thing REALLY stood out. You can't *69 in Rome and get a number in LA. That's just impossible. International calling doesn't work like local calling... You should probably figure out something else to do--maybe Buffy's got some kind of other way to track calls. Because as it stands, that's a glaring error...

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