Date: 09/14/2006 - 03:53 pm Title: A new beginning
Hey,
I really like this one...are you sure you wanna leave it like that? There's so much potential for more chapters or a sequel. I hope you'll give us an epilogue at least. Think about it...love your work
Take care
Date: 10/31/2005 - 02:47 pm Title: A new beginning
I found a few bits of this unrealistic. Like a house coming with a scholarship etc. And having it specially decorated wouldn't happen.
I also found this chapter a little fast moving.
Don't get me wrong i think the premise of the story has a lot of potential. But i would suggest slowing thepace a little and revising one or two details.
Good luck!
Date: 10/11/2005 - 11:42 pm Title: A new beginning
I really like this!!! I cant wait to see the two blond's reactions when they meet each other! Please update soon! :) Lighter
Date: 10/11/2005 - 10:07 pm Title: A new beginning
Looking forward to more.
Date: 10/10/2005 - 04:28 am Title: A new beginning
loved it. great job. can't wait for more. great start. post soon.
Date: 10/10/2005 - 03:40 am Title: A new beginning
You have me hooked already. Can't wait for more=)
Date: 10/10/2005 - 02:57 am Title: A new beginning
Great start! Can't wait for Spike and Buffy to meet. Good on Buffy for making friends! :)
Date: 10/10/2005 - 12:25 am Title: A new beginning
Great start it looks like it's gonna be a good one! I can't wait till the next chapter!
Date: 10/09/2005 - 09:21 pm Title: A new beginning
I like the start! I'll try and catch the other chapters too.
Date: 10/09/2005 - 08:18 pm Title: A new beginning
Anya is also a Russian (Spelt with a 'y' ) thought you might wanna know... This is pretty interesting, it would be nice to see something unusualy done with the gone to college fic and I hope you will!