Date: 12/06/2006 - 12:27 am Title: Chapter Four
I'm really enjoying your story. Loved how Spike disliked Xander until he found out he wasn't competition and no reason to be jealous of. Love how the sparks are flying between Buffy and Spike already.
I'd really like to thank you over how you've portrayed Riley. In a few sentences he came and went, which is obviously important to the story but you didn't put him down or make him to be a monster. Thank you for that. Far too many people delight in Riley bashing and I happen to be a big fan of his.
Date: 12/22/2005 - 03:41 am Title: Chapter Four
cant wait for the next chapter
Date: 12/21/2005 - 09:46 pm Title: Chapter Four
Uh-huh.. way too early to rise for Spike as it seems *gg*. Loved the conversation.
Date: 12/21/2005 - 08:41 pm Title: Chapter Four
Yay. Glad to see this chapter posted. And I can't wait for the Spuffy in the next chapter.
Date: 12/21/2005 - 06:08 pm Title: Chapter Four
i was glad you updated this i really got interested after the first couple of chapters! update soon please!!!
Date: 12/21/2005 - 05:32 pm Title: Chapter Four
A nice, long chapter filled with excellent detail and interesting back story. Spike and Xander's sniping was well written, and I liked that Spike suffered for not taking Xander's advice. Buffy's reaction to a sweaty, shirtless Spike was priceless. The dialogue was well written and the chapter flowed from scene to scene smoothly. I'm happy you worked through your writer's block, this story is delightful.
Date: 12/21/2005 - 04:34 pm Title: Chapter Four
Love this story. Love all the characters. Hope I don't have to wait too long for an update. Marta
Date: 12/21/2005 - 07:35 am Title: Chapter Four
great job so far! Your story has me hooked now :)