Date: 02/19/2007 - 06:55 am Title: Chapter Ten
wow i liike it. i love how its not shallow. Its actaully deep..lol. I love the chapter of buffy's point of view it was really well written! Good job dude >_
Date: 01/26/2007 - 03:17 am Title: Chapter Ten
And that is exactly how death of a loved one is. one thing i have noticed while reading is that you dont start sentences with the same word often, which is good. and for an internet story this is written mighty well. obviously for a book im sure you would put much more detail into it, but since youre dealing with peoples short attention spans while online, i would say the detail level and chapter length is right.
Date: 01/24/2007 - 08:09 pm Title: Chapter Ten
I hope January treats you better *hugs* :)
Loved Spike's sight of the events too. And now he noticed that he is in love with Buffy *g* I wonder what he'll make of it.
Date: 01/23/2007 - 11:31 pm Title: Chapter Ten
What a vile time you'e had. All the best for the New Year; I do hope things improve for you.
As regards your latest chapter...oh my! Yet again you have portrayed the emotions so vividly that I find myself to be quite weepy. Then, in sublime contrast to the gravity of the previous scene, the one-word ending is perfect. "Bugger". So very Spike!
Thank you for such an enjoyable read.
Date: 01/23/2007 - 05:10 pm Title: Chapter Ten
I was delighted to see updates for this wonderful, atmospheric story. The attraction and friendship between Spike and Buffy is a joy to read, and I'm really enjoying the details in the farm work and landscape. Buffy's emotional vulnerability in the last two chapters were lovingly detailed, as was Spike's instinctual response. I'm looking forward to more of this.
Date: 01/23/2007 - 02:59 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Wow ... just found your story. Blown away. Very well thought out and written. Love this spike and Buffy. I look forward to the additions.
Date: 01/23/2007 - 07:57 am Title: Chapter Ten
Great chapter hon. You've done really well with this one. Can't wait to see what happens when Buffy wakes up.
Date: 01/23/2007 - 07:48 am Title: Chapter Ten
wonderfl. many thanks for continuing the story, well worth the weight
Date: 01/23/2007 - 04:55 am Title: Chapter Ten
oooh more please!! great so far
Date: 01/23/2007 - 03:27 am Title: Chapter Ten
more please
Date: 01/23/2007 - 03:20 am Title: Chapter Ten
Great chapter with so many emotions. it seems that Buffy just instinctively trusts Spike with her feelings. God to see Spike finally realizing how hard he's falling for her. Can't wait for the next chapter:)