Date: 10/23/2005 - 08:15 am Title: Chapter Ten
Lovely chapter. I liked the way you made Buffy handle the situation , realizing how much she needs William more and more , but afraid to let her true feelings coming out. Yet I was happy to see her talk to him , after the amazing , very naughty sex scene.
Poor William , who's trying to persuade himself that being a sex god is enough.
They are absolutely endearing there.
Wonderful installment !
Date: 10/23/2005 - 08:03 am Title: Chapter Ten
i loved this chapter..william becoming a little more aggressive and buffy trying to open up. great chapter
Date: 10/23/2005 - 07:37 am Title: Chapter Ten
This fic is excellent so far, I can't wait for more! :)
Date: 10/23/2005 - 07:28 am Title: Chapter Ten
Well the story is slowly moving forward and I'm really looking forward to each new chapter. Keep up the good work.
Date: 10/23/2005 - 07:26 am Title: Chapter Ten
awww, very sexy chapter, i still feel bad for Buffy, trying so hard to be share-girl and william always unintentionally upsetting her...
still enjoy the good chapter, look forward to more, take care
Date: 10/23/2005 - 06:58 am Title: Chapter Ten
Awesome story. Keep up the good work. I'm loving this fic.
Date: 10/23/2005 - 06:50 am Title: Chapter Ten
The first part was hard to read because of all the doubt going on in both their heads. Those silly kids are crazy about each other! Although I was completely involved in the story before, I even am more so now. I hope Spike tells her how he feels soon. It was low-grade angst, but enough for my heart to hurt a little for them. The sex scene was steamy as usual! :-)
Date: 10/23/2005 - 06:11 am Title: Chapter Ten
more please. biffy has to take william shopping and then show him off. bleaching his hair and nicknaming him spike could be good also. would love to see teh reaction of cecily and william's mother at that.
Date: 10/23/2005 - 05:57 am Title: Chapter Ten
Loving this story! Keep it up!
Date: 10/23/2005 - 05:51 am Title: Chapter Ten
Thanks for getting the chapters up so fast! I love getting a new everyday!! Love the fic!
Date: 10/23/2005 - 05:29 am Title: Chapter Ten
"you made me come so hard I blacked out"...LOL...loved it and I'm glad I stayed up to read the new update. Don't worry...you'll get your groove back...maybe you should give yourself a break not a big break but just enough to rejuvenate so you can bang (no pun intended...lol) out a few more chapters. I'm really loving this story and I appreciate the frequent updates.
Date: 10/23/2005 - 05:24 am Title: Chapter Ten
Encouragement is here! I'm totally loving this story. The chemistry between William and Buffy is awesome. I love how they're both so insecure about the same thing, but they both feel the same way talk about trouble communicating! Please update soon!
Date: 10/23/2005 - 05:01 am Title: Chapter Ten
I love the way a plot is weaving into the story. I just knew that your tough Buffy would be end up being as tentative as innocent William, makes for an interesting blend. Really appreciate the daily updates, I know they're hard to do. Can't wait to see how their plot unfolds.
Date: 10/23/2005 - 04:57 am Title: Chapter Ten
Excellent chapter! I like how careful both of them are. She's not really telling everything and he's holding back as well. They have to see that's it's not about the sex..
Date: 10/23/2005 - 04:40 am Title: Chapter Ten
Wow.. Totally Hot. Naughty William is fun! Hope he comes out more.
Date: 10/23/2005 - 04:31 am Title: Chapter Ten
This is the best story to read before going to bed. Makes me dream all sorts of wonderful times. Honestly, it is a great story. I know you started it as a PWP and now a slick plot has gotten involved somehow. Keep writing I enjoy it and from the amount of hits the prior chapters have other readers do to.