Date: 11/09/2005 - 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
I think this is a great premise for a story and well written. Just one thing bugged me a little and that's the way Joyce uses british phrases like calling buffy 'love' and saying 'tea-time' things she really wouldn't ever say.
Other than that though i think this is a really good story with a lot of potential.
Date: 10/24/2005 - 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
I don't like this Maureen person already! She's going to turn out to be a tactless bitch, I fear. Great chapter and looking forward to more! Kisses
Date: 10/24/2005 - 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
I hope Buffy give Maureen a swift kick in the a** with her skate on!
Date: 10/24/2005 - 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
you stopped, why? loved it....keep up
Date: 10/24/2005 - 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh i could SO bang Maureen and Hank's heads togther!!!
Date: 10/24/2005 - 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
i feel like slapping maureen...hard. love the chapter though!!!
Date: 10/24/2005 - 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
now i feel like giving that maureen one helluva slap to her face..
Date: 10/24/2005 - 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 2
Is it wrong for me to want to smack a pregnant woman? OK, then I'll just smack Hank! This is a great story. I can't wait for more.
Date: 10/24/2005 - 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 2
OOh - that Maureen - and Hank! Poor Joyce! I'm really enjoying this! More please, and soon