Date: 12/13/2005 - 03:09 am Title: Prologue: Lets talk about Sex
Well this started out with bang.Er, LoL.Yeah a BANG. now thats funny!" Er sorry.,I couldn't help it.---Next.
Date: 12/05/2005 - 11:57 pm Title: Prologue: Lets talk about Sex
It's been obvious from earlier chapters that Dru is obsessed with him, but he's not into her like that. The band seems to know what's really going on with all parties.
He clearly thought it was just sex to Buffy, and her avoiding him later just confirmed that. He ends up broken hearted, so he drowns his sorrows, and falls prey to the harpy that saw him as an easy target.
Not much reason why he would think Buffy would be hurt by that, just from his behavior. She probably wouldn't talk to him after she saw that, so why would he stay in town when there was a better offer? Buffy has no one to blame but herself.
People aren't mind readers, Buffy.
Date: 11/05/2005 - 07:09 am Title: Prologue: Lets talk about Sex
When I first saw your story I thought it was familar and I just figured out why. Blondiebear has a story with the same title. The plots are different but yall have the same title.
Date: 10/28/2005 - 04:05 am Title: Prologue: Lets talk about Sex
Nice start you've made to this fic. We've got a background starting point and a not so positive impression of Buffy and Spike's current relationship which just makes us want to pull our hair trying to figure out - how did they get here, and how did things come to this? Looking forward to seeing how you'll fill out their backstory and whether a few years of separation and (hopefully) maturation can enable them to find a way back to each other, whether that be simply as friends or (please, please, please) perhaps more. Well done.
Date: 10/26/2005 - 05:42 am Title: Prologue: Lets talk about Sex
okay you definitley lured me in with this one. i can't wait to read more of this story. I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHERE IT GOES AND WHEN SPIKE AND BUFFY MEET UP AGAIN. GAH! I LOVE IT.
Date: 10/26/2005 - 01:32 am Title: Prologue: Lets talk about Sex
Hmmmmm. Very interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 10/26/2005 - 01:10 am Title: Prologue: Lets talk about Sex
good so far
Date: 10/26/2005 - 01:05 am Title: Prologue: Lets talk about Sex
He's got the right idea, and she really doesn't understand what this will mean.
Date: 10/25/2005 - 10:12 pm Title: Prologue: Lets talk about Sex
Oh, yes. I see the beginnings of a great story here!
Date: 10/25/2005 - 07:39 pm Title: Prologue: Lets talk about Sex
good first chapter
Date: 10/25/2005 - 07:32 pm Title: Prologue: Lets talk about Sex
Love it=) keep up
Date: 10/25/2005 - 07:09 pm Title: Prologue: Lets talk about Sex
You've got a great idea here, but be careful not to bog down your story with British references (such as "footballer" and "Mills and Boon")--it can throw the reader out of the narrative.
Keep going!
Date: 10/25/2005 - 06:32 pm Title: Prologue: Lets talk about Sex
i love this! never come across before to a first time together for both of them... And i totally agree with buffy... if u are not in love, choose someone u love and who loves u back! (and if he happens to wear spike' s body... who's going to complain? lol)
Date: 10/25/2005 - 06:31 pm Title: Prologue: Lets talk about Sex
i love this! never come across before to a first time together for both of them... And i totally agree with buffy... if u are not in love, choose someone u love and who loves u back! (and if he happens to wear spike' s body... who's going to complain? lol)
Date: 10/25/2005 - 06:10 pm Title: Prologue: Lets talk about Sex
Excellent beginning! Can't wait to read more.
Date: 10/25/2005 - 05:54 pm Title: Prologue: Lets talk about Sex
OMG! I love it! I really cant wait to see what happens next! Please, Please, Please update soon! Lighter
Date: 10/25/2005 - 05:30 pm Title: Prologue: Lets talk about Sex
Promising, look forward to more.
Date: 10/25/2005 - 05:21 pm Title: Prologue: Lets talk about Sex
I am definitely interested to see where you go with this story idea. I love how even though Buffy and William do not love each other "that way" yet, William is quick to tell her no when she suggests she can just ask someone else. I look forward to seeing how their feelings for each other develop. A good first chapter; update soon please.
Date: 10/25/2005 - 02:47 pm Title: Prologue: Lets talk about Sex
loved it!! please some more soon!! thanx...
Date: 10/25/2005 - 02:21 pm Title: Prologue: Lets talk about Sex
nice start. can't wait to see how it goes. more soon please
Date: 10/25/2005 - 01:40 pm Title: Prologue: Lets talk about Sex
I like the start of this one. They are both friends and they don't love each other romantically yet...Its gonna be very interesting to see both of their feelings for each other start to manifest in the later chapters and see how their first time with each other will affect the rest of their lives.
Good premise and keep up the good work!!!
Date: 10/25/2005 - 12:40 pm Title: Prologue: Lets talk about Sex
looking great! update soon!
Date: 10/25/2005 - 12:19 pm Title: Prologue: Lets talk about Sex
A very interesting set up, please continue
Date: 10/25/2005 - 10:04 am Title: Prologue: Lets talk about Sex
Such a difficult task for our Spike Pure Heart.
Waiting to see how your story goes.