Date: 12/15/2005 - 06:47 am Title: Chapter 12 You’re surrounded by Sunshine
Loved both of the chapters. Well except for the parts where everything is going to hell. I can understand Spike and Dru not breaking up, maybe. But the owning him part? And the Riley thing is even worse. You have to make him die or something really soon cause just the thought of Riley makes me want to lose my cookies. More please.
Date: 12/13/2005 - 09:48 am Title: Chapter 12 You’re surrounded by Sunshine
what the...?!!!?!?!?!? why ?!?!?!? this is my first review of your fic and i'm sorry for the first thing that you'll have to read when you read mine but c'mon...she's asking riley out..you gotta do something about it please...
Date: 12/13/2005 - 02:32 am Title: Chapter 12 You’re surrounded by Sunshine
NOOO!!! Damn timing.
Date: 12/13/2005 - 01:48 am Title: Chapter 12 You’re surrounded by Sunshine
oh! stupid spike!
Date: 12/12/2005 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 12 You’re surrounded by Sunshine
Bit cliche but good. I hope the trying to make Spike jealous by seeing Riley blows up in Buffy's face. She should tell Spike how she feels instead of going out with someone else.
Date: 12/12/2005 - 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 12 You’re surrounded by Sunshine
Aw, that's horrible! Buffy and Riley shouldn't be together! Her and Spike should! I know you'll fix it in the end though, because we all need our favourite bleached couple together! I hope things get worked out between them and they realize they do need each other! I can't wait for the next update! Awesome job!
Date: 12/12/2005 - 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 12 You’re surrounded by Sunshine
Yeah go buffy!, ya don´t need no man like spike!
Great story, 4 stars out of 5
Date: 12/12/2005 - 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 12 You’re surrounded by Sunshine
I really, really, really don't like Dru...and not liking William/Spike so much for not seeing at least some of what she's doing...he better get smart about some stuff very soon.
And poor Buffy...she really does seem to be trying to make things right and then stuff happens that hurts her so she never does it and William/Spike is angry with her for not doing it....lovely, vicious cycle they've got themselves in here....but you know what would help? Getting rid of Dru ;)
Excellent update and once again, thank you for updating so soon.
Date: 12/12/2005 - 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 12 You’re surrounded by Sunshine
No, DeNile is not just a river in Egypt :D Loved the update
Date: 12/12/2005 - 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 12 You’re surrounded by Sunshine
nooooooooo, that is so wrong on so many levels :( come back and fix it please !!!!!!!!
Date: 12/12/2005 - 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 12 You’re surrounded by Sunshine
I gotta tell you, you leave us with more cliffhangers than a mountain climber!
Anyway I'm always a sucker for HS fics and it's nice that you've blended present and past together.
On another note... I HATE DRU! Please more Spuffy soon... please, please, please?
Great story!
Date: 12/12/2005 - 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 12 You’re surrounded by Sunshine
ACK!! Not Riley!! *groans*
Anyway, great chapter... I know things will get better soon. Can't wait for the next chappie!
Date: 12/12/2005 - 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 12 You’re surrounded by Sunshine
On nonononononononoooooooooooo!!!!
You cannot be serious! You're cruel! You just tore Buffy's heart in shreds you cruel author you... bow down your head in shame. frowns fiercely*
Go straight back to your secretary's notepad and re-write that scene pronto, wattie. Make sure Spike suffers Brewers Droop and drops Dru on the floor.
Apart from the unfortunate ending, that chapter was a doozy. Thank you.
Date: 12/12/2005 - 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 12 You’re surrounded by Sunshine
Bad timing with Buffy going to Spike's room..Can't wait to see how you are going to fnally bring these two together..
Good chapter!
Date: 12/12/2005 - 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 12 You’re surrounded by Sunshine
You're killing me here. Ripping my heart out and killing me...but I can handle it! I will persevere!! LOL. Intense chapter....sad. :( I hate Dru.
More!!
Date: 12/12/2005 - 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 12 You’re surrounded by Sunshine
So it is like I thought, after they had sex Buffy avoided him and treated him as usual, why would Spike think that Buffy loves him?
I can understand why he would still be with Dru after the little display Buffy did when she went to visit him, Spike wasn;t acting like a prince either, but after their conversation earlier, I can see why he would want to get Buffy out of his mind, she's done nothing but hurt him since they had sex. She never admitted to having feelings for him. Just because she decides on a whim todo it now doesen't make her justifiable in the way she's acting.
Cause she's acting like he cheated on her when he knew she had feelings for him. Spike asked her straight out and she couldn't deliever. When he asked Dru though she did, why would he not sleep with Dru then.
I guess at this point I'm thinking Buffy hurt herself big. She didn't admit her feelings for him when she could have the first time so he was depressed and someone found him who could love him like he wants. Then the second time she could have admitted her feelings for him she blew it with past accusations and left Spike feeling the "not-so-love" from her twice fold, so he's with is fiance to make him forget.
I don't see Spike as the bad guy. He ain't no prince, but he did nothing wrong. Infact, I think he did almost everything right concerning Buffy, he complied to her wishes to sleep with her asked her straight out what her feelings towards him were. He was not a kept man and was free to do as he wishes...just because Buffy's feelings were hurt that he wasn't pining over her doesen't make him the bad guy.
I think Buffy brought all the pain she feels from the past...upon herself.
Date: 12/12/2005 - 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 12 You’re surrounded by Sunshine
no, please make this better. i don't want spike with dru and i definitely don't want buffy with riley. this is really starting to piss me off. why do they both have to be so stupid? i never understood what the hell spike saw in dru. she's a total freak. please make this better, a part of me is starting to regret that i ever started this story. i've been seeing it for a while and never wanted to read it before, i just hope things get better with them.
Date: 12/12/2005 - 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 12 You’re surrounded by Sunshine
eeew, riley.... eeeew! i have faith you will fix it and thus won't complain too much, but.... eeeeew!!
Date: 12/12/2005 - 11:38 am Title: Chapter 12 You’re surrounded by Sunshine
I love this story, I wait impatiently for each new update :) So can't wait for more!!! :)
Date: 12/12/2005 - 10:17 am Title: Chapter 12 You’re surrounded by Sunshine
stupid spike , stupid buffy . stupid stupid stupid .........
but thats why we love them.
great chapter .
Date: 12/12/2005 - 10:06 am Title: Chapter 12 You’re surrounded by Sunshine
Gross. Apparently, Spike's made his choice. I'm glad Buffy's moving on . Unless Spike has a personality transplant, I don't want him with her anyways. He's not bright and strong enough to go for what he wants and he is allowing himself to be manipulated by Dru. He apparently is in love with Dru or uses her for sex. I want something better for this Buffy.
Date: 12/12/2005 - 09:58 am Title: Chapter 12 You’re surrounded by Sunshine
So Buffy and Spike admit that they did have feelings for each other so long ago; and then Spike immediately jumps Dru telling her he misses her and that he is hers? Well, there's Buffy's answer - and I'm glad she's deciding to move on. Spike obviously has.
Date: 12/12/2005 - 09:46 am Title: Chapter 12 You’re surrounded by Sunshine
Poor Spike... forever William. So sad. Dru is able to hit him where it hurts... Buffy doesn't .. and I made you..
Communication breakdown... Hopefully something will get our starcrossed lovers back together.
Angst !! Waiting for the next update.
Date: 12/12/2005 - 09:19 am Title: Chapter 12 You’re surrounded by Sunshine
that was so sad!! damn dru!!! i bet she knew what buffy was thinking and she plotted all this... grrr arggg... and spike!!! he just fell for it... they are so stubborn... great though sad chapter :( thanx... hope you update soon... i'm in pain here :P
Date: 12/12/2005 - 08:43 am Title: Chapter 12 You’re surrounded by Sunshine
Oh yeah...Dance puppets! Dance!! *MANIACAL LAUGHTER* Sooo loving this story Wattie, you're playing our characters like a Stradavarius but OH what a heart-rending tune it is. BTW I think Spike's actions with and regarding Dru, though reprehensible (I mean it's all internal but still, his to-ing and fro-ing about his feelings for Buffy are making me dizzy) are quite realistic. The silly things we'll do sometimes to defend our oh so vulnerable hearts! More soon please.