Date: 01/15/2006 - 12:49 pm Title: Inmate 17
you're not a bad writer!! I love this story so far!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 11/24/2005 - 08:00 pm Title: Inmate 17
Lets all kill Riley, LOL. Love the story so far, will have to watch the movie.
Author's Response: LOL. Yeah, let's castrate Riley! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/11/2005 - 04:35 pm Title: Inmate 17
Hi, my friend Lu82 recced this story to me and so far, I'm loving the premise and I think that for this being your first fic, it's very good. I think it could get better though if you found a beta to help you with the few spelling/grammar mistakes I detected. Aside from that, in my opinion, the story is flowing quite nicely and the characterizations are very close to the ones we're used to. Keep up the good work! Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I know what you mean, I really need to find a beta. So if any one offers to fill the position, i'll gladly accept. Thanks again. :)
Date: 11/06/2005 - 07:36 am Title: Inmate 17
I loved the longest yard and i think this spuffy spoof of the movie is a really great concept. I can't wait to see what characters from Buffy you'll be making into the other prisoners. Looking forward to the next chap!
Author's Response: I'm really happy you like it. I loved the longest yard also. Adam Sandler movies are always great. I'm not sure who to make the gay guy. It might be Lorne or Andrew. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/06/2005 - 01:54 am Title: Inmate 17
plz update soon
Author's Response: I'll try to update soon. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/06/2005 - 01:49 am Title: Inmate 17
good update
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/05/2005 - 11:42 pm Title: Inmate 17
Awesome chapter! I cant wait to see where this goes!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it.
Date: 11/05/2005 - 11:05 pm Title: Inmate 17
more soon!
Author's Response: I'll try to add more soon. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Date: 11/05/2005 - 10:27 pm Title: Inmate 17
Wooow, I'm loving this FF , it's very refreshing!
i love Spike and his thoughts (LOL), his reaction when he sees Buffy ( AAAAaahh he's already in love with her) , her reaction to him ( AAAhh she already likes him), and.. that's not a news.. I HATE RILEY and his damn Captain attitude, ggggggrrrrrrrrr!!! Buffy, his future wife?!!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH, poor stupid guy!!
keep updating, I'm sure more people will review because this FF really deserves that! ;)
ehmm by the way, I already added the second part of chap XI of BNF ! ;)
you are a very good writer, understand?! And trust me, you shouldn't judge it by the number of reviews.. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much for your supportive words. I'm glad you like this fic. Riley is a dick huh?LOL.Thanks again! (Also, I love your fic BNF. It's just so cute!)