I think you really have the makings of some great stories here, the concepts and the stories themselves are great, the only thing that takes away from it is the grammar. I think once that is corrected, they'll be great. If you need any help, I can help you out or direct you to the right place to get some help.

Author's Response: hey thanks for the review. I would really like your help finding a beta. if you wouldn't mind. I did put my stories through spellcheck on my computer but i guess it didn't work so well cos I thought they were all fixed up....but i guess not. Still i'm glad you liked it. let me know about the beta things. Thanks. Bye