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Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2005 - 03:29 pm Title: Chapter Three

The scroll, as in the Shanshu Prophecy scroll?

How dare Andrew make Spike think Buffy knows and doesn't care! That little bastard. I don't know how he could think that Spike was involved with something evil, either. Hello! The guy went through near death to earn his soul! He wouldn't do that, and certainly not with Angel, who he didn't get along with.

Like the foursome team here, though. It's a good group.

Author's Response: Oh, there will be answers as the story progresses......is Andrew acting on his own or is someone else and he is at a crossroads himself and just doesn't know it yet. hmmmmm.

Reviewer: Mole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2005 - 02:37 pm Title: Chapter Three

Glad to see some movement here, 'though it's not what I expected . I like the re-write so far though I'm missing the part where Illyria gave Spike her blood as it was in the first version.. I wasn't completely sure about Illyria's intentions toward Spike then, but now, I think there is a gap. If I hadn't read the first version.... I don't know, but there seems to be something missing.

Author's Response: Spike still feed from Illyria, it's in chapter one....LOL I even had to go back and read it to make sure it was still there.......and Thanks for staying with me on this one

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2005 - 01:12 pm Title: Chapter Three

I can't tell you that there is much difference to the first version but I love it so far. Thanks for updating again.

Author's Response: Hey Cordy, I knew I could depend on you....The first chapter is unchanged plot content. There is new things added and other things moved to more appropriate times.

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