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Reviewer: MadBrillianT Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2007 - 04:14 am Title: Paying the Piper

lovely spot of the old ultra-violence, that

Author's Response: What can I say, I love to write fights. Thanks!

Reviewer: katakata Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2005 - 01:08 am Title: Paying the Piper

oooh the plot thickens...now what's a human mage doing in league (or simply using the services of more likely) with a bunch of demon minions? And how long have they been watching Spike to be sufficiently aware of his companion (Meret) and thus be prepared to catch her too? And is it Spike they're after or was it Meret all along (I remember your earlier reference to how coatl were hunted into extinction as their feathers were used in magical rituals)? Love it when a fic makes me ask more questions that it answers!

Author's Response: I'm going to have to sit on those answers for a bit. ;-) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2005 - 06:00 am Title: Paying the Piper

cant wait to know who those basket heads were....... and really love that lil Merret of his!!!!! waiting for more!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on it! :-)

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2005 - 11:57 pm Title: Paying the Piper

Ah, the jig is up, now. Giles knows about the coatl. The loyal little thing certainly wouldn't stay away when she sensed his condition.

Poor duster!

Author's Response: Poor duster indeed. :-) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2005 - 10:03 pm Title: Paying the Piper

That typo of mine was all your fault you know!

Memet should read Meret

*Gaaargggh! And I'm sober, honest m'lud*

Author's Response: I see my bad spelling is catching! Bwahaha! :-D

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2005 - 10:00 pm Title: Paying the Piper

Just one typo... "...mement..." should read moment. Apart from that, perfecto!

I wonder if that was the same Mage that lost to Spike in the Poker game? Hmmm? I wonder too, has Giles changed the shower curtain? Whose red eyes are those? Don't say Giles has corrupted Tara and they're both hitting the Scotch!

I'm loving this. Love that Spike has a friend in Memet. Love that you're taking time with the story. Hopefully, establishing some Scoobie relationships prior to their getting together will help Buffy overcome her misplaced shame at falling for Spike. He's already got Tara and Dawn on his side, if he and Memet can work on Giles that'll go a long way to easing things.

The fight in the sewers with the robed demons was fairly gruesome, but I think it was no more yucky than some of the scenes I've seen on the show. That's my opinion of course. I think the rule is to err on the side of caution.

Great update, pet. Thanks again!

Author's Response: Oops! All fixed now. (And why does the mental image of Tara sitting up with Giles, drinking Scotch, make me want to giggle?) Thanks for the proofread and the review!

Reviewer: bluebird Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2005 - 09:53 pm Title: Paying the Piper

Love your story please write more soon! Thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks! More will be on the way very soon!

Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2005 - 09:42 pm Title: Paying the Piper

Meret found him, did she?. I'm curious about the mage. . . and I can wait for healthy Spuffy. . . .

Author's Response: That she did. I had to let the cat out of the bag sometime. Thanks for leaving a comment!

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2005 - 08:22 pm Title: Paying the Piper

what a relief!!! so glad they didn't get meret!! i'm so in love with that coatl!!! :) je... anyhow loved the story!! and i agree with you about the spuffy theme... keep up the excellent work!! thanx

Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking her! Thanks for leaving a review!

Reviewer: Dark Eyed Seer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2005 - 07:33 pm Title: Paying the Piper

Yay! New chappie! I get so excited when I see this story on the Recently Added page. Happy belated Birthday, BTW!

I'm glad you put the 'worried' bit in for Giles. So many fic authors villianize him, I like Giles, despite the evil thing he did in Season Seven. (Of course, as pretty much everyone was out of character in Season Seven, maybe we can't blame him.)

Oh, pure Spike! I'm glad Meret got away. I'm eager to see Giles reaction to Meret!

Author's Response: I never pegged Giles for a villian. Stuck on his Watcher training? Yes. Saddled with a father's overprotectiveness? Definitely. Evil? Not so much. I'm glad you're liking the fic so much! Thanks for the review and the birthday well-wishing!

Reviewer: Champion Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2005 - 07:16 pm Title: Paying the Piper

I think that this fic being more Spike focused is a refreshing change, as so often the story revolves around Buffy. I'm really enjoying this fic and always look out for it. Kepp it coming.

Author's Response: I like Spike too much to not want to write from his perspetive. I'm glad you're like that I'm focusing on him. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Gail Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2005 - 07:02 pm Title: Paying the Piper

Another good chapter! As far as Buffy not being around so far, it will make the story all the more interesting when she does show.

Author's Response: Thanks for the vote of confidence and the review!

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anne Summers Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2005 - 05:53 pm Title: Paying the Piper

Heehee, he's impotent... lol *falls over laughing*

Author's Response: Don't you mean flacid? :-D (Sorry, I had to...) Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2005 - 05:52 pm Title: Paying the Piper

I like your story so far - but it's good to know we'll see more of Buffy later. I would miss it I must say. :) And good to see too that Spike noticed the danger for Meret too. So Spike beat the demons - but who is the last one standing? At last he know how to keep dry feet standing in water. But I'm glad Spike could escape the Mage and making it to Giles. *gg* And it seems too that Giles is now in the secret - Meret is there :-D

Author's Response: I'm glad you're still liking the fic. And yeah, the cat is right and truly out of the bad now. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2005 - 05:28 pm Title: Paying the Piper

Love the story, good chapter I'm curious about what the human wants with Spike and Meret.....or maybe it's just Meret he's really after.

I don't mind it being Spike centric, I find that it can be interesting to not have it all revolve around Spuffy stuff.

Author's Response: It's good to hear that the fact that the story really centers on Spike is not being seen as a bad thing. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2005 - 05:14 pm Title: Paying the Piper

The rating seems appropriate to me, if that’s what you’re worried about.

Personally I’m not concerned that this isn’t a Spuffy-centric fic. There are plenty of those already out there! I tend to agree that both our heroes need to mature for them to have a healthy relationship, and I’ve appreciated the direction you seem to be heading in this story. I will admit to anticipating seeing you develop a relationship between Spike and Buffy, but I’m happy to see you do it when it fits your story!

And poor, poor Spike! Though after his trek through the sewers I’d toss him in the shower too!


Author's Response: Whew, that's good to hear. I know how to rate movies, but writing, where fleshing out a scene if left to the reader's immagination? Yikes. Anyway, thanks for reviewing!

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