[Report This]Date: 01/21/2006 - 03:28 am Title: Chapter 16, part 2
I know exactly how you feel. I always feel sad when I end a story. You should be proud of this one and good things always have to come to an end eventually. I'm glad everything worked out with their parents. Great chapter, can't wait for the epilogue=)
Author's Response: I am proud of this story. I never imagined when I began it that it would turn out like this. Thank you, sweetie!
[Report This]Date: 01/21/2006 - 02:13 am Title: Chapter 16, part 2
You tied up all the plot lines well, and this was a very good story. . . hopefully the epilogue will be a very happy ending. Kudos on your first English story.
Author's Response: The epilogue will have a very happy ending, no worries about that. And thank you so much for all your support throughout the story!
[Report This]Date: 01/21/2006 - 02:08 am Title: Chapter 16, part 1
Lovely way to integrate Giles into the story. Great chapter.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 01/21/2006 - 02:05 am Title: Chapter 15
Nice information there, justice with Snyder and good way to keep the suspense going until the end.
Author's Response: Yeah, didn't want to give in too much. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 01/21/2006 - 02:01 am Title: Chapter 14
Nice action plotting there, and build up for the suspense. Very well written, and nice pacing. Sorry it took me so long to get to this, but I've been unable to sit for long periods and read/review. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you, Niamh and don't worry, same happens to me. I need more hours in the day. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/19/2006 - 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 16, part 1
wonderful part, god bless the cave, ya for Giles!! And poor parents, they're so worried, can't wait for part 2, updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee !!
I just love this story , you know that ;)
Author's Response: *lol* Thank you, cariño. And yes, I know you love this story and I thank you so much for that. *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 01/19/2006 - 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 16, part 1
After everything they've been through recently it's nice Spike and Buffy found a nice man like Giles to help them out. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, honey, I'm glad you approved. ;)
[Report This]Date: 01/19/2006 - 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 16, part 1
love the update and sad to see that the story is going to end.... waiting for more!!!
Author's Response: I'm sad, too. Thank you for your review!
[Report This]Date: 01/19/2006 - 03:36 am Title: Chapter 16, part 1
great updates
Author's Response: Thank you, honey!
[Report This]Date: 01/19/2006 - 03:28 am Title: Chapter 16, part 1
Hmm, I wonder who that could be. I'm just glad they're okay and that Giles will be helping them out. I'm glad you didn't think I was too harsh or something. It probably would have been better to say something before the end of the story, but I'm a chicken shit...lol! Since I had to go and bring the end of the story up, I'm gonna promise myself not to cry. That should hopefully be easy because it's not something I do often. I'm just gonna miss this story. Can't wait for more=)
Author's Response: Aww, thank you, honey. I'm really glad that you've enjoyed this story so much and no worries about being harsh, because really? You weren't and I thank you again for pointing those things out for me. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/13/2006 - 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 15
love the update! ans waiting for more!
Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie!
[Report This]Date: 01/13/2006 - 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 15
I just loved it so far and snyder gets just what he deserves ah ah! I m also reliecved by the two emerging figures, you had really scared me!
hope to catch ya later on yahoo, for now I just tell you THIS IS A BRILLAINT JOB
Author's Response: Oh, thank you, bella! I'm so glad you liked the chapter. *hugs you tight*
[Report This]Date: 01/13/2006 - 10:18 am Title: Chapter 15
Aww...It's a shame that it's coming to an end, i've really enjoyed this story....I do hope you do add an epilogue later on :)
Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie! And don't worry, there's going to be an epilogue, hopefully sooner than later. ;)
[Report This]Date: 01/13/2006 - 09:55 am Title: Chapter 15
It was very satisfying that Synder got caught and that Spike's plan worked. Wonderful chapter!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm so happy you liked that. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 01/13/2006 - 07:38 am Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter, dusty! Still as action packed as ever. I can't believe it... next chapter's last? Wow... this is kinda unexpected. Still, this is a fantastic story I've been following religiously and I hope you start another soon, dusty!
Author's Response: Yep, next chapter will be the last, might be an extralong one, though I still have a few things to resolve. ;) Thank you for your support, you've been reading and reviewing since I posted the first chapter and I appreciate it more than I can say with words. And yes, I'll start another story soon. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/13/2006 - 02:39 am Title: Chapter 15
Man, I didn't realize it was almost over. Do you want me to cry? I swear, I'll do it...lol! Okay, all is good. I liked this chapter and I'm glad they survived the fall. Ha, I knew the bastard would get locked up. Just a few things though, Snyder's name is Bob, not Charles. But you could have already known that and figured you just didn't like that name, which would be understandable. And also, it's just Robin Wood, no s at the end. I didn't wanna say anything before because I didn't want to seem like a bitch. I know that people don't usually like to be corrected, but again if you already knew that, then just ignore me. Don't hate me too much, still love the story=)
Author's Response: *lol* You are too sweet, thank you for your comments and your observations. I already replaced Woods to Wood in all chapters (I hope, at least). About Snyder's first name? I really don't like how the name sounds, so that's why I changed it. And you're not a bitch and I definitely don't hate you, not even a little bit. ;) Thank you again for pointing this out to me and for still liking the story. It makes me happy to know that you do. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/11/2006 - 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 14
ooohh there's the evil cliff you talked about!! arrghh you gotta hurry up, suspence is gonakill me, anyway that's very spectacular!
damn helycopter and mostly damn Snyder, gee he's so evil, but I'm happy Spike didn't kill me, he's right, it would never be over otherwise.
I also liked the speech between Joyce and Hank in last chapters!
now I just keep my fingers crossed for my adored blondies, but you know I trust you, dear, it's a brilliant job so far
Author's Response: Yep, there it is. And next chapter is up, so you don't have to wait to long. ;)
*lol* I think you'll like what happens to Snyder in this new chapter.
I loved writing that part, I'm delighted you liked it!
Thank you for your trust and your review! ;)
[Report This]Date: 01/11/2006 - 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 14
love the chapter and what a cliffhanger!!!! and dont worry nothings gonna be thrown towards ur direction as long as u update it when u promised....
Author's Response: *lol* I did already, no problem with that. Thank you for your review!
[Report This]Date: 01/11/2006 - 09:43 am Title: Chapter 14
Exciting chapter! I just love the suspense. Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie! Next chapter is up. ;)
[Report This]Date: 01/11/2006 - 09:14 am Title: Chapter 14
Wow... action packed chapter! I can practically see it in my mind's eye. Love it, dusty! Update soon...
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for your review, honey!
[Report This]Date: 01/11/2006 - 04:15 am Title: Chapter 14
keep up the good work
Author's Response: thank you for your review! and i will (hopefully)
[Report This]Date: 01/11/2006 - 03:04 am Title: Chapter 14
God, I need to know what happens next. Spike had something planned and I hope they'll both be okay. Snyder is a little freak, he's the one that needs to be locked up. I hope the bastard gets what's coming to him. Maybe their parents could give him hell or something. This was a great chapter, you had me at the edge of my seat. I always thought it had a Romeo and Juliet feel to it. I'm just hoping they have a better ending. Can't wait for more=)
Author's Response: Well, I think you'll like the new chapter I posted then. ;) I just hate Snyder and I had fun in this chapter. And don't worry, I don't like unhappy endings, so this story definitely won't have one. ;) Thanks for your kind words, honey.
[Report This]Date: 01/05/2006 - 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 13
really wish that snyder would juz get into a freak accident... waiitng for more!
Author's Response: lol, patience, he'll have what he deserves soon. ;) thanks!
[Report This]Date: 01/05/2006 - 07:32 am Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie!
[Report This]Date: 01/05/2006 - 06:19 am Title: Chapter 13
I'm glad the meeting between the parents went so well. Can't wait to read more. Great update!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked. Thanks!
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