Date: 12/21/2005 - 01:06 am Title: Chapter 2 – What changed?
cant wait for more!
Date: 12/21/2005 - 12:53 am Title: Chapter 1 – A wise Christmas wish
good start next chappy!
Date: 12/20/2005 - 05:20 am Title: Chapter 2 – What changed?
good update
Date: 12/20/2005 - 04:01 am Title: Chapter 2 – What changed?
I'm glad to see another chapter and I still think this will be really interesting. I especially liked the bartender's take on their relationship. They really are like two schoolchildren, teasing and pulling hair to show they like each other. Too cute!
Date: 12/20/2005 - 01:12 am Title: Chapter 2 – What changed?
luved both chaps. i think u should probably get a beta reader, to check grammar n spelling, but i'm really liking the story ;) pls more!! lol ;)
Date: 12/20/2005 - 01:08 am Title: Chapter 2 – What changed?
um, okay, this really needs a lot of work.
Date: 12/19/2005 - 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 2 – What changed?
Yes now what did just happen?? They always migrated towards each other even back then.
Date: 12/19/2005 - 01:13 am Title: Chapter 1 – A wise Christmas wish
Great chapter! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 12/17/2005 - 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 1 – A wise Christmas wish
A promising start. I hope you'll update soon
Date: 12/15/2005 - 07:17 am Title: Chapter 1 – A wise Christmas wish
good update
Date: 12/15/2005 - 12:06 am Title: Chapter 1 – A wise Christmas wish
Oooh, can't wait to see where you take this! More soon, please.
-Lisa
Date: 12/14/2005 - 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 1 – A wise Christmas wish
good start, but you need to proofread. (her punched were stronger ) should be 'her punches were stronger' that could be a typo but tong is the wrong spelling for tongue keep up the good work, I suggest geting someone to beta for you.
Author's Response: Hi Jeanie,
I'm sorry for the typo's, I changed them immediately. See, I’m not English, so I hope you can forgive me for some typo’s here and there =P But thanks for letting me know! And thank you for liking my fic =P
Date: 12/14/2005 - 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 1 – A wise Christmas wish
OK, you've got my attention. This sounds really interesting. I can't wait to read more.
Date: 12/14/2005 - 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 1 – A wise Christmas wish
I'm very intrigued! I hope you will continue with this one.
Date: 12/14/2005 - 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 1 – A wise Christmas wish
Has promise. Keep going