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Reviewer: Nicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2006 - 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 4

I love this story. One of the most original stories I've read on this site! Excellent and can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Lu82 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2006 - 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 4

Woow amazing job as always, i like Xander and Dawn a lot in this fic, plus I liked when Buffy talked about who she met in the Limbo. more and soon pleaseeee

Reviewer: kimbclar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2006 - 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 4

I love it! This is fast becoming one of my favorite fics. Thanks for the update. I can't wait to hear what Xander has to say to Angel.

Reviewer: Jackofspikes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2006 - 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 4

Brilliant...I love the scooby interplay...and making use of Anya's knowledge is always of the good in my book.
I can sense and Angel slapdown coming and I am very happy! Your Xander portrayal actually makes me like him...something I never thought would happen...another great read....MORE PLEASE.

Reviewer: Kat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2006 - 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 4

Amazing chapter. yay I love reading new chapters.

Reviewer: Nancy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 03:57 am Title: Chapter 3

It's a very good story. Please add more soon. I want to see what Buffy and Spike do to Angel and Giles.

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2006 - 09:39 am Title: Chapter 1

Brilliant update really love it.

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2006 - 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 3

excellent!

Reviewer: Lu82 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2006 - 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 3

great chapter, all the' time jumps ' were a little confusing, but I liked it anyway, II just adore Dru who wants William and sunshine together aww!! And Spike isso caring with Buffy esp when he bits her without drinking not to make her too weak, that's love!!!! and i hate giles for what he did, I hope he won't make the same mistake now that he's coming back, grrrrrr!!

update soon

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2006 - 11:43 am Title: Chapter 3

a totally interesting story!! love it and waiting for more!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2006 - 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 3

good update

Reviewer: dihcar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2006 - 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 3

very nice orginal story, i like how you excplained how neither of them got dusted or killed over the years.
Wow, giles has alot of courage to be coming to sunnydale, cus i don't think that spike is gonna be happy with that f**£%ker aroound. I'm now really glad that jenny is dead, so he knows that it pretty much all his doing. Cus of him spike and buffy have slept with other people. Spike with drussila and harmony , buffy with angel,parker and riley.
I don't count the episode "i will remeber you" cus that doesn't excist anymore, the day didn't happen so they never slept with each other again, all that remains is angel having the memory of it, THANK GOD. My only complaint would be spike being subdued by angel? They are now of equel force , it comes down to willpower and if i was a betting man i would bet on the natural born fighter(spike).

seeya

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2006 - 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 3

great chapter

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2006 - 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 3

Of couyrse since Angel remembered since coming back from Hell, he's going to have to explain why he slept with Buffy when he was human for a day. Unless Buffy didn't see that too.

Reviewer: Blazing Fire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2006 - 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 3

You have done a wonderful job of bringing the characters to life. This explains a lot of the things that happened between Buffy and Spike. I love it. Too bad the recommending won;'t allow you to say that. Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2006 - 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 3

Dru is sorry for Angel? So what did he do? Oh my.. I see. Giles decided what is best for Buffy again, but he didn't ask her. Spike and her were so happy *sigh*... How could he do it? *sigh* Stupid watcher; but Angel did indeed his part. The Spell broke for Angel earlier then for the others.. because he had gone to tell and came back? I think so. ~ Angel had it in his hands to change (maybe break) the spell and has done nothing.. Spike won't be amused. ~ Good chapter! Loved it.

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2006 - 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 3

Great story. You have done a very good job of creating a back story on the past episodes. I can't imagine where this story is headed but I will keep reading because it is so good.

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2006 - 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 3

i gottta know what happens next!!! please update soon. can't wait for the confrontation between buffy, spike, angel and giles.

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2006 - 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 3

This keeps getting better and better.......

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2006 - 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 2

you've done a great job here.....don't think I've ever read some an orginal redo of the Buffy verse.......awesome work

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2006 - 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 3

Well, that makes things interesting.

I don't think Angel's going to come, though, at least not willingly. He's gonna want to run and hide now. I suppose his sin is worse than Giles', since he didn't feel right about the spell, but didn't do the right thing, anyway. Giles made his decision based on Council dogma, and now he has to feel more guilt over Jenny. Pride cometh before a fall...

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2006 - 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting and great start.....I wonder who played with their memories.........who came through the door? Me hooked......

Reviewer: romero Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2006 - 05:13 am Title: Chapter 1

I love this story. What a rat Giles is. I hope you update soon.

Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2006 - 03:04 am Title: Chapter 2

Hey, this is a great fic so far. The idea is very original, so it's somethinng different, and it's been incredibly well written so far. So, keep up the amazing work, and please update soon!

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2006 - 01:07 am Title: Chapter 2

i am in love with your story! if only joss had written it this way! please update soon!! i am dying to read more of what happens and to find out who cast the nail polish!!!

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