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Reviewer: katakata Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2005 - 11:36 am Title: Chapter 1: The Fall

Intense beginning...tres cool. Loved the Batman reference, now if you could just work in the "I like to ask that of all my victims" part somewhere I could introduce Cake to Icing, lol. The family dynamic between William and Angel (and their girls) is interesting (bet there's gonna be lots of material you can use in that) and the way it's echoed with Buffy and her (deceased) brother (who is still a presence in this chapter because of how his death impacted her) is a good touch. Will follow this with interest.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2005 - 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Fall

Oh my! It's great so far, and I like it.

Write more and update soon, yeah?

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2005 - 09:39 am Title: Chapter 1: The Fall

quite captivating! i think you have well delineated buffy and spike's charatcters... this is gonna be a great story! pls write soon... and happy xmas!

Reviewer: MarstersGirl13 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2005 - 05:35 am Title: Chapter 1: The Fall

it was a really good start..looking forward to more!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2005 - 02:47 am Title: Chapter 1: The Fall

great so far

Reviewer: Jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2005 - 01:54 am Title: Chapter 1: The Fall

I really love this story. It's got a great plot and I can't wait to see it develop. Can't wait to see Buffy and Spike work together. Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: GreenAppleSweety Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2005 - 01:48 am Title: Chapter 1: The Fall

Hey, Great story. I really like the plot too. You're doing a wonderful job! Hope you can post soon!!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2005 - 01:47 am Title: Chapter 1: The Fall

Hey...great start! I definitely can see a good story in the works here. I'll be looking for your next post! :)

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