Date: 12/27/2005 - 11:36 am Title: Chapter 1: The Fall
Intense beginning...tres cool. Loved the Batman reference, now if you could just work in the "I like to ask that of all my victims" part somewhere I could introduce Cake to Icing, lol. The family dynamic between William and Angel (and their girls) is interesting (bet there's gonna be lots of material you can use in that) and the way it's echoed with Buffy and her (deceased) brother (who is still a presence in this chapter because of how his death impacted her) is a good touch. Will follow this with interest.
Date: 12/23/2005 - 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Fall
Oh my! It's great so far, and I like it.
Write more and update soon, yeah?
Date: 12/23/2005 - 09:39 am Title: Chapter 1: The Fall
quite captivating! i think you have well delineated buffy and spike's charatcters... this is gonna be a great story! pls write soon... and happy xmas!
Date: 12/23/2005 - 05:35 am Title: Chapter 1: The Fall
it was a really good start..looking forward to more!
Date: 12/23/2005 - 02:47 am Title: Chapter 1: The Fall
great so far
Date: 12/23/2005 - 01:54 am Title: Chapter 1: The Fall
I really love this story. It's got a great plot and I can't wait to see it develop. Can't wait to see Buffy and Spike work together. Keep up the great work.
Date: 12/23/2005 - 01:48 am Title: Chapter 1: The Fall
Hey, Great story. I really like the plot too. You're doing a wonderful job! Hope you can post soon!!
Date: 12/23/2005 - 01:47 am Title: Chapter 1: The Fall
Hey...great start! I definitely can see a good story in the works here. I'll be looking for your next post! :)