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Reviewer: tillie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2005 - 06:27 pm Title: chapter one

i like it, you're good. keep it up.

Author's Response: Thanks, but alot of the credit gose to my beta. Shes amazing but im glad that you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2005 - 07:23 am Title: chapter one

oh, this is gonna be so good. can't wait for more. loved it. great job.

Author's Response: Thank you so much I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2005 - 04:34 am Title: chapter one

great story

Author's Response: thanks :) I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: lee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2005 - 03:32 am Title: chapter one

This is not a flame but I think you need to correct the obvious typos in this. The indentions also make the post difficult to read. There seems to be no difference from your narration to her thoughts so I think you might need to correct that also.

Author's Response: I'll explain this one out, my microsoft isn't working at the moment so I have a beta helping me out. Even though this is no excuse for my typos, I'am sorry about that.,and i will try to do a better job for you. Thanks so much for the review

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