Reviews For Torn Between Loves
Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2006 - 12:09 am Title: Introductions/ Arrivals
Date: 01/06/2006 - 12:09 am Title: Introductions/ Arrivals
really interesting beginning...though i recommend you separate the story in more paragraph cos it looks too crowded... but other than that great story so far!! thanx so much! hope you update soon!
Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 10:33 pm Title: Introductions/ Arrivals
Date: 01/05/2006 - 10:33 pm Title: Introductions/ Arrivals
great so far
Reviewer: Brat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 10:27 pm Title: Introductions/ Arrivals
Date: 01/05/2006 - 10:27 pm Title: Introductions/ Arrivals
Good start! :) Just a note that you might want to break up the dialogue and paragraphs. Makes for an easier read. Will we get flashbacks of Spike's big reveal of feelings to Buffy?
Reviewer: MarstersGirl13 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 10:18 pm Title: Introductions/ Arrivals
Date: 01/05/2006 - 10:18 pm Title: Introductions/ Arrivals
good start. just wondering..i may have missed it but how old is buffy and the gang??? hoping for more soon!
Reviewer: PhotographyNut Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 09:49 pm Title: Introductions/ Arrivals
Date: 01/05/2006 - 09:49 pm Title: Introductions/ Arrivals
Great chapter! I'm starting to feel sorry for Spike already. Please update soon!
Reviewer: Meagan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 09:48 pm Title: Introductions/ Arrivals
Date: 01/05/2006 - 09:48 pm Title: Introductions/ Arrivals
Good start, I like how you started with the "big reveal" already done, so we can see where they go from there. Can't wait for more.