Date: 10/31/2006 - 04:38 am Title: ‘First Impressions’
Ooh, this is excellent! I'm obviously picking it up a bit late in the game, but I love what I've read so far! can't wait to see what happens next...
Date: 10/29/2006 - 01:26 am Title: ‘First Impressions’
oh my gosh!!!!i love it!!! i can't wait for a sequel!!!
Date: 05/16/2006 - 05:38 pm Title: ‘First Impressions’
More more more.
Date: 05/06/2006 - 11:47 am Title: ‘First Impressions’
i know this is wishful thinking but i wanna see buffy having a miscarriage n spike totally regretting his actions when he finds out the truth. still spuffy though!
Date: 05/03/2006 - 02:31 pm Title: ‘First Impressions’
Oh, you're killing me smalls!! Update all quickly-like, I really want to know what happens...
Date: 04/28/2006 - 02:56 pm Title: ‘First Impressions’
Ok good start,this looks promising.
Date: 04/26/2006 - 05:05 pm Title: ‘First Impressions’
Oh no you don't. You have to long of a time period when you up date this story. We DEMAND you update this in 24 hour period or less. :)
Date: 04/03/2006 - 03:47 pm Title: ‘First Impressions’
Good so far, will be reading the next chapters in a minute.
Date: 02/07/2006 - 05:23 am Title: ‘First Impressions’
A great start for your first fic. Love the dichotomy between the friends and Spike noticing Buffy, always of the good.
Date: 01/27/2006 - 05:48 pm Title: ‘First Impressions’
The writer doesn't take enough time to set the stage, describe the surroundings. Also, too glib at the beginning, starting with dialogue before I even know who these people are. Personally I think it's fine to speak outside the range of the "normal" character voices, but this sounds too much like it's written by a 15 year old girl.
Not that 15 year old girls can't write...
Date: 01/14/2006 - 10:11 pm Title: ‘First Impressions’
I like it very much!! keep up the good work!!
Date: 01/12/2006 - 06:55 am Title: ‘First Impressions’
liked it
Date: 01/12/2006 - 12:07 am Title: ‘First Impressions’
great first chapter, im totaly in love. i cant wait to see how great the next chapter is. love the story.
Date: 01/11/2006 - 10:36 pm Title: ‘First Impressions’
just a quick question..
how old is spike in this?
maybe i missed it somewhere
but im not sure..
thanks and keep up the good work
your story is awesome!
Author's Response: no telling! you will have to wait and see ;-)
Date: 01/11/2006 - 03:58 pm Title: ‘First Impressions’
cordy is gonna have a fit for some time since spike has his eyes set on buffy..... waiting for more!
Date: 01/11/2006 - 10:42 am Title: ‘First Impressions’
you left in a note from your beta...
Author's Response: oh jee, thanks for telling me. that's quit embarrassing!
Date: 01/11/2006 - 09:04 am Title: ‘First Impressions’
You're doing a great job! Keep it up and update soon, sweetie.
Date: 01/11/2006 - 08:08 am Title: ‘First Impressions’
Good start. Looking forward to more.
Date: 01/11/2006 - 07:14 am Title: ‘First Impressions’
I'm writing my first fic too, so I know first ones are scary, but you did a good job! I would love to see how Buffy's gonna act when she meets Spike, iis it going to be snarky or sweet?
Date: 01/11/2006 - 06:40 am Title: ‘First Impressions’
i can't wait to read more of your story!!! it is so pulling!! i am dying to know what happens when they meet!!!please update soon!!1 I LOVE IT!!!
Date: 01/11/2006 - 05:11 am Title: ‘First Impressions’
Congrats on an excellent start to your first fic! You're doing great, and I look forward to reading more. I can see lots of potential here... the inexperienced, reserved girl interested in the outgoing, hottie bartender.... I sense angst here!! Damn, it's only one chapter so far and *I* am jealous of all these women at the bar! ;)
Date: 01/11/2006 - 03:34 am Title: ‘First Impressions’
First chapter of your first fic is GREAT! You've got my attention..please keep going : D
Date: 01/11/2006 - 02:46 am Title: ‘First Impressions’
This is a great start - loads of potential!
Date: 01/11/2006 - 01:59 am Title: ‘First Impressions’
wow this is so great :) i can't wait to see how buffy and spike meet :) please hurry and update again soon :)
Date: 01/11/2006 - 12:44 am Title: ‘First Impressions’
Fine job on the first chapter. You've begun to introduce the characters, which does need doing. Will be watching for the next....