Date: 01/30/2007 - 09:41 am Title: First Times
this storys so cool the suspence of them doing everythings slowly is amazing! way to go! keep writing more stories!
Date: 11/04/2006 - 04:15 pm Title: First Times
Be still my over beating heart! It's so sweet :-)
Date: 09/11/2006 - 11:49 pm Title: First Times
first kiss has been amazing
Date: 04/28/2006 - 05:10 pm Title: First Times
There first Kiss,I mean real Kiss.Wow!'
Date: 02/07/2006 - 05:54 am Title: First Times
Adorable Spike asleep on his paperwork. Such an image to intrude upon. Love their emotion. Already so much like a couple. Wonderful
Date: 01/23/2006 - 10:36 am Title: First Times
great build up enjoying your story
Date: 01/22/2006 - 07:45 am Title: First Times
Lovely chapter. Their first kiss was very sweet. Can't wait for more.
Date: 01/22/2006 - 04:27 am Title: First Times
wonderful!
please keep updating!
Date: 01/21/2006 - 09:44 pm Title: First Times
Great chapter!
Date: 01/21/2006 - 05:18 pm Title: First Times
I feel like you mention how there's no pressure on his side a little too often and obviously. He's a man, he has his desires, and his reputation. Overall, I think this is a great story, but try to more subtly incorporate the no pressure aspect of the relationship. Show, don't tell, something an english teacher of mine said a lot.
Date: 01/21/2006 - 04:46 pm Title: First Times
I felt something in the air that is so thick you can't cut with a knife. *LOL* Can't describe it. It's like I'm biting my nails watching those two. Anyway, great chappie! Update soon!
Date: 01/21/2006 - 06:41 am Title: First Times
Good story, but be careful in making Buffy almost too virginal. I think she would know someone was kissing her. :-) Other than that little note, I would say that this is an amazinf fic. I still cannot believe that this is your first fic. Yay for a fic writer that can mingle plot and character development in their first fic! Not all are that capable, I'm sad to say. I hope that doesn't sound snobby, but I've been a reader for a long time and there is most def a trend- sorry, I digress. Yay for the goodness that is this fic- take that much away from this very late night rant.
Date: 01/21/2006 - 04:04 am Title: First Times
ohh im so happy that they kissed and that she wasnt scared by it. love the chapter so much and im so glad they are starting a relationship. love the story and cant wait to see how there relationship evolves. please update as soon as ur able to thanx.
Date: 01/21/2006 - 02:25 am Title: First Times
GREAT story. great job writing, you're wonderful. can't wait for more.
Date: 01/21/2006 - 12:33 am Title: First Times
Oo, I love this story. Can't wait for a continued chapter.
~Ashley~
Date: 01/20/2006 - 11:39 pm Title: First Times
Oh, their first kiss was perfect. And you're doing more than okay, I love this story and it's pacing. Can't wait for more!
Mari
Date: 01/20/2006 - 10:41 pm Title: First Times
you're doing just great. That was so sweet. Timing is good. With Buffy's shyness, it wouldn't be realistic to get them in the sack right away. JUst my opinion.
Date: 01/20/2006 - 10:17 pm Title: First Times
Oh god, that was so sweet....awww!!! I want to hug them both lol. If that makes any sense. I love spike in this, he is the sweetest guy ever and Buffy is just too cute. :) Love it!
Date: 01/20/2006 - 09:32 pm Title: First Times
I think the story's going just ine...just enough slow advancement with their feelings to make sense as Buffy's wary of guys - i'm enjoying this fic very much
Date: 01/20/2006 - 09:20 pm Title: First Times
awww that was so cute. i love how you are having them go slow and not rushing things. it makes it seem more real mroe soon please
Date: 01/20/2006 - 08:58 pm Title: First Times
Great first kiss-
Date: 01/20/2006 - 08:45 pm Title: First Times
Perfect! Great first kiss!!! I can't wait for these two to get together again... maybe do some sexy dancing at this club?!
I think you are doing an excellent job.
Date: 01/20/2006 - 08:38 pm Title: First Times
It was a perfect kiss. Thanks for a fine update.
Date: 01/20/2006 - 08:20 pm Title: First Times
I really like this story. I can't wait to read more. The first kiss was perfect.
Date: 01/20/2006 - 07:51 pm Title: First Times
First kiss was great! Definately Spuffy worthy..The build up is going great..and the pace is just fine..
Looking forward to more : )