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Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2007 - 09:41 am Title: First Times

this storys so cool the suspence of them doing everythings slowly is amazing! way to go! keep writing more stories!

Reviewer: becky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2006 - 04:15 pm Title: First Times

Be still my over beating heart! It's so sweet :-)

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2006 - 11:49 pm Title: First Times

first kiss has been amazing

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2006 - 05:10 pm Title: First Times

There first Kiss,I mean real Kiss.Wow!'

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2006 - 05:54 am Title: First Times

Adorable Spike asleep on his paperwork. Such an image to intrude upon. Love their emotion. Already so much like a couple. Wonderful

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2006 - 10:36 am Title: First Times

great build up enjoying your story

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2006 - 07:45 am Title: First Times

Lovely chapter. Their first kiss was very sweet. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Ella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2006 - 04:27 am Title: First Times

wonderful!
please keep updating!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2006 - 09:44 pm Title: First Times

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Tracy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2006 - 05:18 pm Title: First Times

I feel like you mention how there's no pressure on his side a little too often and obviously. He's a man, he has his desires, and his reputation. Overall, I think this is a great story, but try to more subtly incorporate the no pressure aspect of the relationship. Show, don't tell, something an english teacher of mine said a lot.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2006 - 04:46 pm Title: First Times

I felt something in the air that is so thick you can't cut with a knife. *LOL* Can't describe it. It's like I'm biting my nails watching those two. Anyway, great chappie! Update soon!

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2006 - 06:41 am Title: First Times

Good story, but be careful in making Buffy almost too virginal. I think she would know someone was kissing her. :-) Other than that little note, I would say that this is an amazinf fic. I still cannot believe that this is your first fic. Yay for a fic writer that can mingle plot and character development in their first fic! Not all are that capable, I'm sad to say. I hope that doesn't sound snobby, but I've been a reader for a long time and there is most def a trend- sorry, I digress. Yay for the goodness that is this fic- take that much away from this very late night rant.

Reviewer: melissa g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2006 - 04:04 am Title: First Times

ohh im so happy that they kissed and that she wasnt scared by it. love the chapter so much and im so glad they are starting a relationship. love the story and cant wait to see how there relationship evolves. please update as soon as ur able to thanx.

Reviewer: anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2006 - 02:25 am Title: First Times

GREAT story. great job writing, you're wonderful. can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Romanticnightmare Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2006 - 12:33 am Title: First Times

Oo, I love this story. Can't wait for a continued chapter.
~Ashley~

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2006 - 11:39 pm Title: First Times

Oh, their first kiss was perfect. And you're doing more than okay, I love this story and it's pacing. Can't wait for more!

Mari

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2006 - 10:41 pm Title: First Times

you're doing just great. That was so sweet. Timing is good. With Buffy's shyness, it wouldn't be realistic to get them in the sack right away. JUst my opinion.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2006 - 10:17 pm Title: First Times

Oh god, that was so sweet....awww!!! I want to hug them both lol. If that makes any sense. I love spike in this, he is the sweetest guy ever and Buffy is just too cute. :) Love it!

Reviewer: chris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2006 - 09:32 pm Title: First Times

I think the story's going just ine...just enough slow advancement with their feelings to make sense as Buffy's wary of guys - i'm enjoying this fic very much

Reviewer: daisy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2006 - 09:20 pm Title: First Times

awww that was so cute. i love how you are having them go slow and not rushing things. it makes it seem more real mroe soon please

Reviewer: Nicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2006 - 08:58 pm Title: First Times

Great first kiss-

Reviewer: Michele Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2006 - 08:45 pm Title: First Times

Perfect! Great first kiss!!! I can't wait for these two to get together again... maybe do some sexy dancing at this club?!

I think you are doing an excellent job.

Reviewer: gaillee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2006 - 08:38 pm Title: First Times

It was a perfect kiss. Thanks for a fine update.

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2006 - 08:20 pm Title: First Times

I really like this story. I can't wait to read more. The first kiss was perfect.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2006 - 07:51 pm Title: First Times

First kiss was great! Definately Spuffy worthy..The build up is going great..and the pace is just fine..
Looking forward to more : )

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