Date: 02/02/2006 - 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 3
I like Dawn's attitude.Future brother in law!"O yeah.As far as Buffy, let us remember she no longer wants to be a good girl.So it looks like Spike comes into her life to prvide the bad boy.I also like the conversation with the guys.Contiinue please.
Date: 01/15/2006 - 11:01 am Title: Chapter 3
I noticed my two previos reviews have been omitted, too negative or are you just too sensitive. These reviews were not meant too hurt your feelings...they are just contructive criticism like other people have reviwed!! This is a tough job, hell I dont want to do it...however we still have a right to read and review as we wish..I think this story has heaps of things going for it but you have to SLOW it down...also getting rid of bad reviews doenst make the reviewer very happy:(
Date: 01/15/2006 - 06:30 am Title: Chapter 3
i liked this chapter much much more. just a suggestion and not trying to hurt your feelings but you might want to make the relationship progress a little slower than the last ch. not that there is any indication that you were going to start going faster. hope to read more soon. good job.
Date: 01/15/2006 - 04:43 am Title: Chapter 3
there goes the classic buffy move... well waiting for mroe!!
Date: 01/15/2006 - 12:46 am Title: Chapter 3
great story so far! can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 01/14/2006 - 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 3
I just want to say that I was really shocked in the last chapter that it all happend so fast, but this chapter was better. I love the story and think that it can be good later on. Keep up=)