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Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2006 - 03:40 am Title: 10

I am glad to see Spike and Buffy avoided a train wreck

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2006 - 06:53 pm Title: 19

I loved Spike's line "...the boy would demand they rescue him, and then attempt to devour them in gratitude." Jesse was very well written - cold and cruel. He served the purpose of alerting the gang to Spike's capture, though. Spike's murderous hallucinations were vivid and violent. I'm looking forward to his real reaction to the gang when they come to the rescue.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2006 - 06:36 pm Title: 18

Another excellent chapter, peppered with vivid imagery. The inner musings of Spike, Buffy and Jesse were well realized, and I especially liked Jesse playing possum while delightedly waiting to drain his former friends. Buffy's agitation was palpable, as was Spike's struggle to remain sane.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2006 - 12:29 pm Title: 19

Dang. Well someone has a naughty childe. Jesse really is a class A jerk. Whew.

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2006 - 03:43 am Title: 19

So nice to see an update. Great chaper.

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2006 - 04:20 pm Title: 19

Good chapter. I hope that after they use Jesse to find Spike that they stake him. There doesn't appear to be any redeeming qualities in him. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2006 - 04:16 pm Title: 19

great chapter. I hope Spike makes it out okay.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2006 - 01:36 pm Title: 19

Well I remember it, don't worry :) ~ Sorry, but Angel is an idiot. Did he really think coming back would get him in good graces? He didn't help Jessie and he refuses to help search for Spike. Really ... or should I say a bit selfish? ~ Jessie, yeah.. seems as if only the demon is left in him. But he is their best hope to get Spike back! I hope they'll try it out... and are careful because I think Spike is right: Jessie will try to kill them later. ~ Good to see the update; loved reading it :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2006 - 01:01 pm Title: 18

I think I commented at LJ or another side? Wherever it was: Good chapter :)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2006 - 06:30 pm Title: 18

Buffy's waiting game was tense and never dragged. The portrait of Jesse's awakening was vivid and menacing, right up to his realization that he's chained up. How is he going to be able to help his sire, I'm sure the gang is going to take anything he says as a plan to escape.

Reviewer: Taylormaid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2006 - 05:01 am Title: 18

Oh dear. Jesse is gonna be a problem and Spike's suffering is really getting to me. More REALLY soon please!

Reviewer: Deb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2006 - 02:43 am Title: 18

I love it . I cant weigth for more.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2006 - 02:29 am Title: 18

Gosh I love your stories, it's so exciting to see that you've updated!

Really god chapter! I love how you did Jesse's awakening, so awesome. And if he needs to die, then he needs to lead them to Spike first, then he can die.

Once again, really wonderful chapter, looking forward to more! =)

Reviewer: Mali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2006 - 06:33 am Title: 17

How long will it take Buffy to break away and realise Spike needs her help? Hm, good chapter.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2006 - 02:29 am Title: 17

Poor Spike. He is having quite a difficult go of it.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2006 - 03:48 pm Title: 17

I'm still glad Buffy knows why Spike did i (Jessie) and isn't mad. Because Spike wanted to help. Giles found a prophecy? What prophecy? Buffy dying? (Because Giles didn't tell.) ~ Oh my.. Spike. I hope Buffy will find him soon!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2006 - 06:18 am Title: 17

*Whimpers* Man! Poor Spike! I know Buffy's feeling helpless and alone right now, but I so want her to hurry the hell up and rescue Spike! Really good chapter, so lovely to see you update! =)

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2006 - 01:58 pm Title: 17

Of course , she's gotta find out he's in trouble to go save and she's kinda busy right now.

Giles actually took that well. I wonder what prophecy he's thinking about?

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2006 - 08:48 am Title: 16

Dru *sigh* Being tortured by an insane vampire isn't my favorite waste of time. Poor Spike! And he gave up now. ~ I'm glad though Buffy knows Spike did it out of love, turning Jessie. imagining what kind of future there would be for them all I'm looking forward to find out! I hope Buffy has time to search for Spike; she doesn't know yet he got captured.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2006 - 05:22 am Title: 16

Well well isn't Xander a perseptive little guy? Poor Spike, he's taking more than his fair share of hard licks. I wonder if Angel will find him first? Good chapter.

Reviewer: Jennifer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2006 - 12:53 am Title: 16

Another great chapter! I can hardly wait for the next one! Thanks for sharing Peta

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2006 - 06:59 pm Title: 16

Spike's "...to be condemned was to be condemned, didn't much matter who took care of the sentence..." was heart wrenching. He believes he deserves to die for all of his actions, past and present. Good job outlining his feelings of guilt and resignation.

Xander's "...he may struggle with the technicalities, but he tries to do the right thing - if he can work out what that actually is..." concisely summed Spike up.

Jesse's transformation fills me with anticipation Will Spike's siring have any positive effect on Jesse's demon? It didn't work for his mother, and he sired her out of love...I'm looking forward to finding out!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2006 - 05:59 pm Title: 15

I love that Spike immediately flashed back to siring his mother, and the completely awful results. His self loathing and fear of consequences were very well written, spurring this retreat believably.

The line "Her other hand clutched her stake, and she marvelled briefly that it hadn't even known the thrill of piercing an undead heart tonight, and yet the devastation of death was rife in the little room." really resonated.

Buffy threatening Angel with "...it will be you who gets to feel the wind rushing through more than your hair..." made me grin. Little do they know that Angel may be their best bet in finding kidnapped Spike!

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2006 - 06:33 am Title: Arrival

I hope Buffy finds Spike before he does anything silly. Great update.

Reviewer: Taylormaid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2006 - 04:14 am Title: 16

Oh noooo. Poor Spike. Please let Buffy come to the rescue soon!

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