Awesome story so far. I love it. I like how you don't neglect any of the characters. I felt like they just gave up on the Dawn/Spike friendship on the show. She threatened him, they never spoke again and that was it. It was sad. Glad you mentioned it in your story.

Author's Response: Wow!  Thanks for the compliment.  I always thought the Dawn/Spike dynamic was pretty cool, and missed that on the show.  Thanks for the review!  Hope to see you around again, next chapter!

Usually, I'm not a big Dawn fan. I thought she was waaaaaay too whiney on the show. But I like how you're handling her character. She's still got that hint of complainyness, but she's also insightful. Plus she's worried about Spike, which is always a plus! I'll be looking for chapter seven!

Author's Response: Thanks for your take on Dawn.  I yo-yo'd, over her character, from season to season.  But, I always though there was a lot of great potential for her, that the writer's just wrung out, in the seventh season.  And I've always liked the Spike/Dawn dynamic.  Thanks again, for reviewing!