[Report This]Date: 03/16/2006 - 06:33 pm Title: Fragments
Oz? That's certainly a surprise! Why is Oz here?
Go Dawn for actually sticking by Buffy and Spike here.
Author's Response: Well, it never made much sense to me that the demon community kept talking about how everyone could feel the shift of power in the world, but Oz never made an appearance. Plus, I like me some Oz. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 03/16/2006 - 04:33 pm Title: Fragments
So Excellent! Brilliantly written. I can't wait to see more about what changes Buffy's gone through and how she deals with that and Spike. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: We're gonna catch back up with her, next chapter. Thanks for the great review!
[Report This]Date: 03/16/2006 - 04:11 pm Title: Fragments
Great update, hope Spike brings Buffy home soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! Don't worry... We'll be seeing her soon. :)
[Report This]Date: 03/04/2006 - 08:51 am Title: Visions & Dreams
Brilliant chappie can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Will, hopefully, have the next chapter out soon.
[Report This]Date: 03/04/2006 - 03:52 am Title: Common Ground
OMG!! ahhh!! that was such a completely awesome chapter!! eeekk! okay, plzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzz update soon!! ergh! :D
thanks!
Author's Response: *L* I LOVE that you are so enthused! Hehe I'll get the next chapter out as soon as I can. :) Thanks so much for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 03/04/2006 - 12:42 am Title: Common Ground
How sad! Spike wants to help her so badly, but Buffy is too busy trying to *not* kill him. This was a very depressing chapter... one of my favs! I hope Buffy's new demon can come to trust Spike as much as Buffy herself does.
Author's Response: Ah, my fellow angst lover... Thanks for the great review!
[Report This]Date: 03/04/2006 - 12:40 am Title: Common Ground
What she has to realize is that if she's even able to say she doesn't want to kill him, and argue with the Slayer demon in her head, then she HAS the control necessary to not hurt Spike.
She won't learn to be better about it if she avoids everybody. That's not how it works.
Spike's right in thinking she's much like a fledgling vamp right now. She just doesn't have the same craving. I hope she realizes soon that the best person to help her is a Master Vampire that's learned to control his own demon.
Hope you have the next chapter coming soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the in-depth review! And, yeah, you have read into it, spot on! Unfortunately, our dear Buffy has quite enjoyed her life in the land of denial, so she's making things much harder on herself. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 02/27/2006 - 08:09 pm Title: Evolution
Holy crap!
That pretty much sums up my thoughts on this chapter. Scary stuff: the swirling demony thing speaking through Dawn, the barrier keeping Buffy's strongest allies from coming to her aid, the growling Buffy... again I say 'Holy crap!'
Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks. :)Glad you liked it! *Lol*
[Report This]Date: 02/27/2006 - 11:09 am Title: Evolution
Okay, everybody leave but Spike, so he can work with her demon to demon. It's going to take her a few moments to adjust.
Author's Response: Yeah... Buffy is in for quite a ride, now. Thanks so much for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 02/17/2006 - 04:44 pm Title: False Pretenses
what an evil way to finish up a chapter...*G* love this story and cna't wait for more
Author's Response: *yay me, for being so evil!* JK! Thanks for the review! Will get on next chapter ASAP.
[Report This]Date: 02/17/2006 - 02:53 am Title: False Pretenses
Great job! Can't wait to see if Buffy has any luck on her return trip to the portal. Also, I feel sorry for Spike's duster... =-(
Author's Response: Thanks! Things are finally heating up so that I can get to my main plot. *Whew!* It's been a long time coming. Don't worry 'bout Spike's duster. We'll get it all fixed up! *wink*
[Report This]Date: 02/16/2006 - 07:16 pm Title: Visions & Dreams
Oh really exciting, can't wait to see how Buffy gets on with the shadow men.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 02/16/2006 - 12:40 pm Title: False Pretenses
Yay, Andrew!
Author's Response: *L* Not often he comes up with something worth hearing, huh? Thanks for the review. :)
[Report This]Date: 02/09/2006 - 03:54 pm Title: Hero
I loved that image of Spike covered in gore with the axe on his shoulder... nasty, but cool! Plus, bonus points for having Anya and Andrew in this one!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! :) Now that things are picking up, there should be a whole lot more going on with the rest of the Scoobies.
[Report This]Date: 02/08/2006 - 10:47 pm Title: Living in Your World
I just read this and my god it's really good! I'm not a big seventh season fanfic fan but this is excellent-can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks so much! :) I have another chapter that should be posted sometime today. It has already been added, I'm just waiting for it to go through, after review. Hope to hear from you again!
[Report This]Date: 02/08/2006 - 03:18 pm Title: Living in Your World
I like Dawn's line: "A normal guy could lie to you all day long and tell you they would walk through hell for you, and you would fall all over him. But let someone actually do it, and you just turn up your nose!"
So true! I like how you've given Dawn so insight into the Spike/Buffy relationship. I'll be looking for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! I'll be posting chapter 12 sometime today. :)
[Report This]Date: 02/08/2006 - 12:25 am Title: Living in Your World
Nice work here. I'm looking forward to Spike's reaction to Buffy's continued residence in the Land of Denial. What she said about them...ouch.
Author's Response: Yeah, Buffy isn't all that sharp sometimes. You can be sure something is going to come to a head before all is said and done though. After all, would Spike ever not have his say? Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 02/07/2006 - 04:55 pm Title: Living in Your World
This story is amazing it reminds me so much of the show it isn't funny. I don't know how you are doing it, but your doing a fantastic job with it. I can not wait for more of this story. It's the best! so pretty please update soon.
xxx,
Amanda
Author's Response: Thank you SO much for wonderful compliments! It may be a day or two before I get the next chapter out, but I am working on it. Hope to hear from you again, next chapter! :)
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2006 - 05:22 pm Title: Escape
Aww! Where's that box of tissues? =) I love the part you wrote about Spike comparing Buffy's eyes to a storm and the 'emotional downpour' that was coming. Great work, as always!
Author's Response: ... *passes tissues...* I keep them over here in the corner. :p Thank you! Hopefully I'm on a roll now, and chapters will be coming out more frequently.
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2006 - 12:35 am Title: Once Upon a Day
I don't know why I bother writing this, because you already know I love this fic! This episode was one of my favorites from season 7. I was so wishing that Wood was going to go after Spike again... I didn't like Wood much, can you tell? Anyway, good work!
Author's Response: Ummm... You do it, because I love you for it? Thanks, again for reviewing! My reads and reviews have been going down, instead of up. It can be a little dis-heartening, so your continued encouragement really helps. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2006 - 04:12 am Title: Early one Morning
This makes you really want to bitch slap the First. Of course, it's intagible so that's impossible.
Author's Response: Don't you just hate that? Damn incorporeal evils! I guess I did my job though, because I really wanted to make him/her/it a real ass! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 01/26/2006 - 08:08 pm Title: Early one Morning
Oh no! Psycho Spike is coming!! I LOVED the whole confrontation with Buffy and the First. I could picture that spooky grin on Spike/First's face! *scary* Also, I'm glad I could give you a writing boost... especially when the product is such a good chapter!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! My writing ego has been shaky, lately. And my muse has been moping and whining *stupid vampiric muse* Anyway, your encouragement was helpful, so I felt you deserved some Kudos. Thanks again! :)
[Report This]Date: 01/26/2006 - 06:03 pm Title: Early one Morning
I do like this story, season seven always bugged me and it's good to read another version. Already it's a big improvement on the show.
Author's Response: Season 6 was my favorite. There was a lot of emotion during that run, that I thought 7 lacked. It's nice to know that someone thinks I've managed to escape some of 7's hum-drum. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 01/23/2006 - 04:40 pm Title: Reflections of Me with You
What?! Arg!! *deep breath* Ok, I think I'm better now... except I'm not sure I can wait for the next chapter! I love the whole comparing Spike to a turkey thing, very original. And it was sweet that Dawn was the first he shared that HUGE secret with. I wish she and Spike had made nice again at some point in season 7, and I think you've taken care of that here. Good job!!
Author's Response: *Jumps up and down* Thank you for the wonderful review. Now I'm all warm and fuzzy! You just made my day! So glad that you liked this chapter. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/23/2006 - 09:02 am Title: Blame
Awesome story so far. I love it. I like how you don't neglect any of the characters. I felt like they just gave up on the Dawn/Spike friendship on the show. She threatened him, they never spoke again and that was it. It was sad. Glad you mentioned it in your story.
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks for the compliment. I always thought the Dawn/Spike dynamic was pretty cool, and missed that on the show. Thanks for the review! Hope to see you around again, next chapter!
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