Date: 05/27/2006 - 05:45 am Title: Nineteen
This was an excellent chapter. From the beginning of this story, it seemed that things just kept falling apart and breaking even more. This chapter though felt different. Like things were starting to be righted. Can't wait for more.
Date: 05/24/2006 - 06:14 am Title: Nineteen
Do you know how much I love this story? You do such a great job of not making the next several chapters completely obvious-- It is a rare treat to read something this good, this publish-worthy. I can't wait for more! I realize that good fiction takes time, but please hurry back with the next chapter. Spike trying to figure out who is messing with him, and all the characters' internal dialogues, are so very real. Keep up the excellent work!
Date: 05/23/2006 - 09:16 am Title: Nineteen
Been thinking more about it, and if it really was Willow doing this, then he would have smelled her in the crypt, besides Dawn. And what he had noticed distinctly was Dawn. So, I know you want us to think Willow, 'cause that's what Spike is thinking, but that seems a bit too convenient, now. Too simple.
And going to Willow by yourself, Spike? Really not a smart idea. She has enough power to do you serious harm, if not outright get rid of you.
Xander and Buffy's conversation was well done. Him figuring out that it was really about Dawn. Pointing out to Buffy how bitter she's being. His resolve to be civil and try to be mature about the whole thing.
Date: 05/23/2006 - 06:09 am Title: Nineteen
So, so good. I love it. Another fantastic chapter.
Date: 05/23/2006 - 03:36 am Title: Nineteen
Well, Willow lied and the chip isn't working?! Well, you just love those twist and turns, and I love them too. I'm glad that the only evil Dawn was into was kidnapping his things. Poor little girl. Looking forward to getting to the bottom of this one. Fabulous chapter. Please, update soon!
Date: 05/23/2006 - 02:31 am Title: Nineteen
No chip?
So, it is Willow...I'd had a feeling, but you did well with the Dawn distraction.
Hmmmm...