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Reviewer: Olinka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2008 - 06:29 am Title: CH 12

Yeah, exactly my point - Why is that William is one to give orders and Buffy should just take them and follow through?

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2006 - 11:09 pm Title: CH 12

I don't know that it is bad phone call decisions what I think it that Buffy wants to have her cake and eat it too. Her husband is set on a specific course all thorough school she knows it but decides to throw down an ultimatium that she knows he can not comply with. She forms a long time sexual relationship with someone else but can't bear it if he does the same. Also she is willingly ripping the heart out of her new beau on a regular basis but her unwillingness to make a commitment to him. She's a real heart breaker. There's a name for women like her and it starts with b and rhymes with witch. Good bit of story telling I loathe Buffy utterly.

Reviewer: vitalis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2006 - 02:59 pm Title: CH 12

ooohh Bad William! Stupid Buffy,!!!

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2006 - 02:10 am Title: CH 12

There should be no flames, as this is not shocking- in fact, for him to run to Dru make perfect sense with his character. So, if anyone flames you, bring out the extinguisher and say, "What the hell did you expect?" And then write, "But, remember, it is a Spike/Buffy fic!" :-)

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2006 - 12:59 am Title: CH 12

Dru?!!! Really?! DRU?!!!!!!!!!!!!! wow. wasn't exspecting that but I completely understand it. Buffy has some major making up to do. She did spike wrong and even though he was in the wrong as well, she's got WAY more to make up for. loved it so much.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 10:11 pm Title: CH 12

Interesting turn this chapter took. I can't wait to find out what these two are gonna do next. Good update.

Reviewer: Nicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 10:07 pm Title: CH 12

Oh no, he's making a booty Call. Bad Choice William, but Buffy is sleeping with someone else, so....
Can't wait to read another chapter!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 09:56 pm Title: CH 12

Thanks Beasleysmom!

I appreciate you answering that question for me. If you are able, posting another update tonight would be great! God, I feel like we are all a bunch of greedy, hungry, snapping wolves..hehe lol *MORE, MORE, MORE * : D

This particular greedy wolf is very appreciative..So Thank you : )

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 09:48 pm Title: CH 12

With the intensity that Wiliam loves her......I expected him to act so.......and in the end she always thought she'd come back to him...man thats one for the have your cake and eat it too category....LOL......seems like someone has been trying to win Wil's favor and now he's taking the bait.......rebound...is thy name William.......hope he uses a rubber....

and we have to wait all weekend.....you bad girl.....I usually hate Mondays, but for the next chapter I guess Monday will be a good day, LOL

And if Lindsey don't grow some balls and walk away, he is so *ussy whipped call him Mr. Buffy Butter.......LOL

I hope one day they can meet and talk without all the hurt and anger so they can really say what they want and not what the emotioins and the need to protect themselves....interupt

Reviewer: caatje Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 09:20 pm Title: CH 12

*picks up heavy object* ... damn girl, please update soon, you have me feeling all sad like, and i want to know what happens next. Great chapter, good portion of emotions as well. keep it up! :)

Reviewer: ................ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 08:58 pm Title: CH 12

I really don't think he should do anything with Dru, because that might ruin any chance of him and Buffy. Please don't drag this out too long, we all know they both want to get together, and frankly it's getting kind of ridiculous. Update again tonight, and maybe actually write something we want to see, than dragging it out. You didn't have a Spike/Other warning either.

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 08:53 pm Title: CH 12

I'm sticking with this mainly because I have a perverse sense of riteousness that wants to get to the end and say... 'Told you so, Chrissie... these two people aren't nice at all, they're shallow and weak and not the sort of man or woman I'd ever want my children to get involved with.'

Neither of them seem to have any moral fibre, or maybe they don't consider fidelity to the love of their life a worthy enough stance? If you truly, absolutely know that you love someone above all other you do not betray that love by finding comfort in shagging someone else. Nor do you torture the other person. If you truly love someone, you love them above your own self.

Buffy has been with Lindsay for five years... that is NOT a comfort shag and, as far as Lindsay is concerned, neither is it a light relationship... he seems to think they are in a serious relationship. Buffy must have given him reasons to believe that... that makes her shallow in my book.

Spike too seems shallow now that I've read this chapter. He's driving away from Buffy, the woman he professes to love more than anyone else in the world and the first thing that pops into his head that will make him feel better is to call Dru and arrange to shag her... and from the way he's familiar with her number and the intimate familiarity with which they conversed, this liaison will not be the first.

Both of them... if they'd truly loved each other that much would not have left it five years to try to reconcile. They just wouldn't. Couldn't.

You're a fine writer, pet to have triggered this sort of emotional reaction to a story... but I'm finding it hard to put much credibility on this Love thing. My concept of true love is way different from your, I fear...

I reiterate though, you do write well. There's a good balance between narrative and dialogue, and with the Spike/Dru dialogue at the end you really captured their characters superbly.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 07:34 pm Title: CH 12

keep up the good work

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 06:29 pm Title: CH 12

Definitely not down on Dru. Sounds like he could use
a little TLC from an old friend.

Waiting to see how things work out for Buffy and Spike.

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 06:25 pm Title: CH 12

Just to add to that note:

It's sometimes difficult for readers to read about our fave duo with anyone but each other. I'm kind of that way, however, as a writer? My attitude is different.

It's up to the writer to develope their plot line as they wish to and if these little pesky 'others' have to show up? Well, then so be it.
Sometimes you have to kiss alot of male and female toads before you find the prince or princess you belong with! (believe me, I know that!)
hugs...spuf

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 06:20 pm Title: CH 12

I get the feeling that William/Spike has been 'there' before (Drusilla I mean). However, I also get the feeling that it was sexual and nothing else?

Maybe Drusilla is more a professional at this and Spike is a customer?

I ask because I think the moving on thing in his mind is due to the fact that Buffy has been in a relationship with Lindsey. It isn't just sex to her, like this Dru thing probably has been for years.

I still feel that Spike is being somewhat of a hypocrite and that there are 2 sides to this.

Spike loves Buffy; Buffy loves Spike but that road is never smooth, is it?

Nice chapter, but I am disappointed about Drusilla. Only because I don't like her and don't want Spike with her, ever.

spuf

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 06:09 pm Title: CH 12

You are too funny. That warning is hilarious. You have them hooked now keep posting so they can get to all the good chapters.:)

Reviewer: dragontiff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 06:06 pm Title: CH 12

keep them comming....... its killing me...
i love your story

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 06:02 pm Title: CH 12

Oh wow! I just read the twelve chapters in one go. And I'm loving this story. I really can't wait to find out what's going to happen now.

Reviewer: duckies2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 05:45 pm Title: CH 12

Yeah....i still like it...luv it even but i wanna kill you i mean DRU come on..lol.....UD soon

Reviewer: frederique Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 05:24 pm Title: CH 12

can't wait for more !!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 05:10 pm Title: CH 12

I have a quesiton..I think some of us read that chapter differently. OK..Here it is..

Has Spike been with Dru before? It kinda makes a difference in the whole storyline. That way I read that phone call.. well, to me it sounded like they had been together before. Maybe sexual partners?

See, I get the feeling that William is more upset with the idea that Buffy has someone special in her life..(not that he's not upset that they are having sex too) But you know..it looked like she has a "I love You" relationship..Like he has been replaced..

Any clarification on this would be great...Or perhaps you'll tell us in your next chapter, which is fine too. ; )

Author's Response: OKay just to let you all know, Will has not gone outside of his marraige since he and Buffy have seperated. I will explain who Dru is to him in the next chap so that might clear up some questions as well. Seeing that y'all are so anxious to see what happens next I might be able to post the next chap alte tonight before I go to bed. Kuddos!

Reviewer: Meagan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 05:04 pm Title: CH 12

It was a little frustrating that Buffy is the one who wanted to talk, but when William wasn't gonna be the sympathetic ear to her, she got all cockney and bitchy and decided that she was too tired to talk at that moment. What did she honestly expect? Yes it was William who said he wanted them to go to England, but she sure as hell didn't try very hard to compromise or even reason before she was packing her bags and ran to make her dream come true. To play the victem to William's villan is extremely manipulative and shows how naive and selfish she was through out the time they have been seperated. SHE HAS A BOYFRIEND WHO SHE HAS BEEN COMMITTED TO FOR 5 YEARS! Did she think Will would never find out? Did she really think that he would be okay with it and get back together with her in the end? Her surprise to his anger and hurt and the divorce says alot about her at this point.

William going to Dru for comfort at this point is not surprising, although I know I wish he would hold out a bit longer, but he's justified in his hurt and in his need for physical comfort. He thinks this is the absolute end for him and Buffy.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 04:59 pm Title: CH 12

Soo..It seems that William hasn't been Mr. celibate for the last 8 years..And who the heck can blame him, NOT I !!
No more than anyone could blame Buffy...She has never given her heart to Lindsey, and never led him on to think that she had..Sounds like they just picked someone so that they wouldn't be lonely.

I'm still seeing two sides to this..and I just don't see this whole thing being only Buffy's fault.

Sounds to me like the some things were said on Williams part that sent Buffy running. Was that the right thing to do on her part? HELL NO! She should have stuck around and worked things out..and by leaving things like she did, she has been unfair to herself and all the people involved. No Doubt.. but people make mistakes..and William made a mistake that caused Buffy to make a bigger mistake..and now here they are...

I just hope that soon there somehow will be some Spuffyness going on. LOL I hate reading Spike/Dru..and I really hate reading Buffy/Lindsey..Hopefully soon, Buffy will start facing the situation head on and take steps to put things right..FIRST BY BREAKING THINGS OFF WITH LINDSEY..I think I feel it coming. (I hope)

Excellent update~!!

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 04:30 pm Title: CH 12

You know, I really liked this Spike and I found it so wonderful that he resisted all that time and stayed true to his heart. It´s a shame you take that away now.
I also think that the confrontation at the house was weird. If you let both of them move on and no real talk takes place, well, normally, that´s it. You´ve got to work hard now if you want to get those two together in the end, because at this point, the thing between them is dead. And btw, did it have to be Dru? Ugh, well, it´s your story, just ignore me and write on.....

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