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Reviewer: Saya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2006 - 06:51 pm Title: CH 14

What! Bullshit! Why is Lindsey bad now, I really want an explanation because you have painted him to be a nice guy. He's stayed with her for five years and she didn't even love him. She's been a bitch to him and he still wants her. I think that Lindsey should at least have been angry at her and not the other way around because seriously Lindsey had all rights to be pissed because she was with her ex. You never gave an explanation to why everyone hate Lindsey, and from what i've read he hasn't done anything wrong at all. I've must have missed something. Sure i want Buffy and Spike to be with each other of course, but I still don't think it's fair to Lindsey. I mean he's told her he love her like a thousand times and she hasn't even replied to that. How the hell can she be mad at him. She should have ended it with him in the early stage because it's obvious she doesn't want to be with him.
And I think it should have been Lindsey who broke up with buffy and not the other way around.

Reviewer: Nerf Herder Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 06:20 pm Title: CH 14

I find myself disliking this Buffy and the way she has treated both Spike and Lindsey sooo much that I almost hope Lindsey sues her for palimony. She deserves it.

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 04:52 am Title: CH 14

YAY! I've very excited about this fic. It's really good and I can see it going to some really cool places. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Briana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 04:11 am Title: CH 14

this is so good as usual!! I can't wait till the next chapter is up!! Make it soon please! lol

Reviewer: Laura Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 02:35 am Title: CH 14

He needs to decide quicker!!!!! ;)

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 02:29 am Title: CH 14

Great update. I really enjoyed reading it.

Reviewer: Meagan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 02:14 am Title: CH 14

Buffy is still not looking too good here...she pretty much all but clearly admits that she used Lindsay to pass the time untill her and William got back together.
I personally think the divorce should go though and from there they should start again, because this marriage is practically non-existant, with no contact in eight years and one being in another committed relationship for five of those years. I think that if they do start over again, it should be with a clean slate. All symbolic and all :P

Hopefully Will won't wuss out and become the love sick puppy because he deserves way more then that.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 12:33 am Title: CH 14

Away from the computer for a few days and three chapters to read! Having Dru be the divorce attorney is a good twist, and thanks for not having them sleep together. I really like Angel in this story. His enthusiasm for wanting to see Buffy dump Lindsey was funny. I also enjoyed his supportive phone call to Will. I look forward to more.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 12:24 am Title: CH 14

Buffy still doesn't impress me in the slightest. The character traits she's shown so far are pretty horrible, and definitely not attractive. A pretty face and nice body means nothing when there's nothing sweet inside. I don't know if Will should want the person she's become.

I liked the phone call with Angel. You really do feel like they're long time friends.

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 12:18 am Title: CH 14

I don't know why, but it always squicks me when Spike sleeps with Cordy, Dawn (ew), Willow, Fred or Tara. Anyone else and I'm peachy with a side of keen. Even Xander. But not those five.

Sleeping with your best friend's ex? Way low. That is freakin' unforgivable (depending on the duration and emotional depth of the relationship. Though, ex-husbands and wives are completely off the list as possible partners). Seriously, I can't believe Angel remained friends with Spike.

Yeh, I'm a little miffed at Buffy for "breaking" things off with Lindsey. She's stringing him along. It really is shamefull. I just hoped she would have let him go the right way. I still understand and stand behind Buffy on her choices and reasoning in the beginning, though. The only quabble I have right this moment is that she isn't considering Lindsey's feelings (even though he's dumb with, dare I say love?) and is still hanging onto him in case she needs a security net.

Reviewer: frederique Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 10:22 pm Title: CH 14

please update soon i want to see what happen when they see each other again !!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 10:14 pm Title: CH 14

great update

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 09:27 pm Title: CH 14

Yeah.. Lindsey seems to forget that Buffy is married. Still married for now at last and in the past. Am I bad for being glad that Buffy is pissed at Lindsey now? Whatever.. but I am. Huh? Spike and Cordelia? *wonders* I mean what do you say to the person whom you’ve shared a bed with for five years and never even considered sharing your heart? Good question. ~ I love this Angel :) Hurray for him to try to bring Buffy and Spike together. But I wonder if this will Spike cancel the divorce. Maybe he thinks that he and Buffy need a fresh start together? Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: smitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 08:48 pm Title: CH 14

awwwwww i love angel in this story

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 07:50 pm Title: CH 14

I'm very glad that Buffy asked Lindsey for a break and that Angel told Will. I really hope that now that they've seen each other, they find some common ground to restart their relationship. Wonderful chapter!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 07:46 pm Title: CH 14

Ya know..I was wondering about Angel and Spike's friendship..They did used to be best friends.
I love how Angel is trying to open the door for William by encouraging him to meet his nephews. Angel is a little devil here..he sure doesn't like Lindsey. lol

THANK GOODNESS Buffy is extracting herself from this relationship with Lindsey. She is still way in denial though. By now..does she really think anyone other than Willam is ever going to make her happy? Don't get me started on Lindsey! He has got to be the biggest wimp ever..I mean DUH Lindsey...she's NEVER gonna love you. You've had 5 years to figure that out!
Thanks for the great update as always! Looking forward to more..

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 07:38 pm Title: CH 14

Oh and the Spike, Cordy, Angel thing....that is just eww, LOL.......I would think that alone would've killed the friendship in high school.......I wonder if Buffy knew that William had slept with Cordy? I'm sure this was before he and Buffy fell in love.........

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 07:34 pm Title: CH 14

Man, Buffy is still a selfish twit here.......etiher break it off and let the man go......again stringing the man along to have after things are done after Will. If you don't love him by now, you never will......it's just not there......he was just someone to whiddle the time with until......LOL.....

Angel did a bad thing, LOL.....I think enough people have lied to William, he didn't really need to add to the list......Does Will have anyone that really cares for him?

And do you want to even care about a man that thinks love and ownership goes hand in hand......hell you walked out of a man's life that tried that, Oh wait that was your husband, LOL without giving him a by your leave or goodbye.......seems she's grown up and bit....but then if she's not snuck around on Lindsey he'd not be the overprotective cow........insecure now caveman cow.........he was a touch more likeable as the lovesick moo cow......

it will be interesting how you have these two come together......because how is William going to trust that his Wife won't go on the road be gone for a few months and cheat on him if they have a harsh argument...hmmmmm. Trust on both parts will be hard to reesablish......fidelity the biggest of all. Will he ever come to understand her straying, when he hadn't. Even in his darkest moment he fought the tempation......(and yes there are men, and women out there that have no matter what remained faithful. It took one of my male friends 10 years (with three kids) to even consider sex with another woman again after his wife died. My cousin 6 years after her divorce......cause she thought he'd come back.....it took him remarrying to open her eyes and move on.......William I think troughly believed she was coming back to him once she found her dream or gave up and found she could be a wife.

More please......excellent chapter, I just wished Buffy knowing she can't give her heart after five years is still basically keeping him on the side.....instead of telling him the truth that more then likely she will never love him.....and giving him the choice of as he said, wasting 5 years.......

Reviewer: Spikesluv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 07:06 pm Title: CH 14

Loved it, as always hon :) And I like the fact that Lindsey pointed out that Buffy is afraid to realize it is over between her and Will ( but we all know not for long, eh hon ;)) I think this is the push she so badly needed. Can't wait for more. God I so love this story! :)
You're such a great writer *bows head*!

*Love&Hugs*
Sabrina :))

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 06:37 pm Title: CH 14

Hmmmmmm.....

I wonder, who is it that Spike's calling and is it to get closer to Buffy?

Good chapter. I'm disappoined about Spike and Cordelia, but hopefully it was before any of them were married?

spuf

Reviewer: aspikefan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 06:24 pm Title: CH 14

You and your cliff hangers. Now you have me anticipating the next chapter and I have so little patience. Good chapter as always please keep up the good work

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