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Reviewer: frederique Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2006 - 11:45 am Title: CH 22

love it !!

Reviewer: Nerf Herder Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2006 - 10:08 am Title: CH 22

I'm having trouble with the idea that a divorce will be some kind of magic bullet that will put them on a bright, shiny, new path with each other. I know this is fiction but in real life It's not realistic for a couple to just draw a line in the sand and say this is where we start over, ignore their emotional baggage and not have it sneak up and bite them in the ass down the road. Their dynamic really hasn't changed. It's a disfunctional relationship imho and instead of placing such importance on the legal status of their union I'd advise them,
to paraphrase the bard, Get thee to a Marriage Counciler. Pronto! Otherwise a happy spuffy ending isn't going to make sense or ring true. At least not for me. -Nerf Herder

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2006 - 12:21 am Title: CH 22

That was GREAT!!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 10:42 pm Title: CH 22

absolutely loved it

Reviewer: ChrissNicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 10:31 pm Title: CH 22

I love the whole idea of starting over

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 09:57 pm Title: CH 22

One other thing......you can't forget the past, when they had a arugment she left town and had a 5 year affair without a blink in the eye and still feels no real guilt for it, not really. He left her be for 8 years and never once tried to find her. She's the one that came back then getting all wigged out that Spike might have been in a relationship. He has given in to her way to easy, about the house and now this. Starting over needs to include working out what happened in the past so the future doesn't repeat itself. They are not on equal playing field either.....and I can't wait for Spike to realize Lindsey if going to be still VERY much a part of Buff's life.....and no starting over will or should make him accept that......I think if any thing THEY both need to learn compromise...and we still have many chapter to see how all this plays out. .....

Reviewer: Briana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 09:05 pm Title: CH 22

DIVORCE!!!!! WTF!!! lol!! i get it yes I understand!! but a spike and buffy that is not all the way spuffy??? whoa sorry such a hard concept for me to understand. lol great chapter... love it.. waiting for the next one.

Reviewer: Nicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 05:19 pm Title: CH 22

I mean this in a totally platonic and admirable way...I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THAT CHAPTER :)

Reviewer: Deege Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 05:18 pm Title: CH 22

Not too sure about this. He's not being hard enough on her. She cheated on him, she left him. She's not even working for it or him she's just crying.

They didn't hurt each other she hurt him then when she believed him to be doing what she's ALREADY been doing she gets all pissed off.

I'm really not liking Buffy at all in this.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 05:13 pm Title: CH 22

That came too easy. I don't know.

Reviewer: Laura Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 04:53 pm Title: CH 22

Now thats something I love to here...that your not even half way through the story!!! an't wait to see the next twists and turns :P

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 04:35 pm Title: CH 22

Uh-huh... not only halfway through? Well that can't go well then (or it would be over soon). ;-) Yes, even the begin of the chapter here was a bit bumpy. Buffy almost went out of the door for good. Wow.. a real roller coaster of feelings. So on to the divorce now. I wasn't thinking so wrong back then. And I cross my fingers for them. When they have to fight getting real life done.. that is when it turns out they'll make it or they won't make it. it won't be easy. I hope they will make it! But they haven't really talked about what happened. ~ Loved the chapter, you don't have to ask. :)

Reviewer: Danielle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 04:26 pm Title: CH 22

Can't believe that William could take her back so easily. She hasn't told him she broke up with Lindsey, she cheated on their marriage for 5 years, and she is still so selfish that she hasn't apologized for the cheating. She even had the audacity to pretend that they each hurt other equally, when she clearly has done more to him than he ever did to her. Hope she grows up soon otherwise William is just headed for more heartache.

Reviewer: Spikesluv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 03:26 pm Title: CH 22

Awesome hon! :) But I personally don't like Buffy's line about hurting each other very much. I mean she left him and she hurt him the most. I really hope she will actually apologize at some point!
Otherwise, great writing as ever :)

Love&Hugs,
Sabrina :))

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 03:26 pm Title: CH 22

Fantastic chapter! I'm so glad Buffy and William finally talked things out. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 03:17 pm Title: CH 22

Nice Spuffy loving......and I so agree they need to start over....and that's part of live and relationships is the ups and downs.......and both are stubborn people so I expect it not to be easy.....but I also hope that William is not the only one giving and bending.......and when did she start wearing the ring? I'm sure she hasn't worn it for 5 years with Lindsey? You can't mistake another man's wedding ring around your live in girlfriend's neck....hmmmmmm.

Reviewer: spuffette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 03:14 pm Title: CH 22

Very good, I hope the angst is really done.
I'm not sure if I'd go through with the divorce though.
Maybe just set the papers aside and....no, wait a minute, burn them!

Loved it,
spuf

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 03:04 pm Title: CH 22

Big huge grin on my face here.. I like where this is going! Though.....with your parting comments...you're just not going to let us relax are you?~! LOL

YOu wrote that chapter perfectly..very hot, emotional, and I actually see a light at the end of the tunnel : D
~THANK YOU!~

Reviewer: Spikeshunny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 02:46 pm Title: CH 22

Aww i loved it. Hopefully they can work out there differences and all will be good.

Can't wait for the next installment. !!!!

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 02:44 pm Title: CH 22

whooo hooo------great job !! I knew it would be saucy !!
I am ready for more thanks

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