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Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2006 - 12:25 am Title: Chapter 38

Oh, my.....I see so many plotting badness that can happen, LOL. Demon chit had better stay in her bedroom and stay the hell out of William's, LOL.......Good on Darla, she's a clever one and I can't wait for the Spuffy moment and Maria having a bit of a talk with the not so bad pirate Spike........

Author's Response: *lol* Oh, much plotting badness is a-coming, hopefully I'll be able to intermingle some Spuffy goodness with it. ;) Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Amelia-Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 10:45 am Title: Chapter 38

I loved this glimpse into Darla's head, no one could ever accuse that woman of being a dumb blonde. That was one fine performance Darla put on with Joyce, she really played her beautifully.
I enjoyed the Spike/Buffy/Maria interaction. I like the way Maria keeps making Spike nervous.
Aimée is really in for a rude awakening, I can't wait for her to find out about Darla's plans. I'm kinda worried about Aimée's plan to talk to Buffy, I hope she doesn't cause too much trouble. Fantastic chapter!

Author's Response: Hee! I'm glad you liked Darla's performance, it was awfully fun to write it. I'm liking her much more than I anticipated in fact. ;)
Hee, I love that María can make him squirm, bad Mari, I know, but it's fun. ;)
Oh, I can guarantee that Aimée will create trouble, not as much as she'd like though. ;)
Thank you so much for your comment, darling!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 04:21 am Title: Chapter 38

Wow! Darla is one cunning master manipulator, she really thinks well under pressure. Gotta say her plan is a good one, I can't wait to find out how everything turns out! Great chapter!

Author's Response: Oh, yes, she's all that, definitely. Aimée should be taking notes. ;) Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked the chapter!

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 04:19 am Title: Chapter 38

Just read the last 2 chapters and what a wealth of information. Must give Darla her due. She's very cunning and this should work nicely for Elizabeth and William. But then we have self-centered Aimee thinking he's only treating Elizabeth this way because he wants to make her jealous. You just know she's going to spill the beans to Elizabeth. (More than likely before William tells her himself). Just love Maria. God bless her. Looking out for our two. So looking forward to next and all updates.

Author's Response: Hee, and the information that's still coming. I don't know when I'll be able to finish this story at the rate it keeps growing. *lol* Oh, yes, Darla will be helpful (this time, at least) and Aimée will create havoc and try to impede the wedding by telling some things to Elizabeth. And yes, María is all for helping our two. :D Thank you so much, darling! I'm glad you're still enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Klai Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2006 - 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 38

These last 2 chapters are very VERY interesting, I just LOVE the way you show us Dona Darla De Alcazar...

Yes, this woman is a bitch. But, what a bitch! Let's admit it, she has a brain, and knows how to use it. The way she stays cold-blooded, perfectly calm with William's arrival, and the way she observes in the same time, everyone's reactions... Somewhere, I can't help myself to admire her.

I mean, you can hate an ennemy, but in the same time, recognize his talents. Darla analyses perfectly everyone's behavior, and starts to make plans. For example, she has so easily read in Joyce, guessing with success her stepsister's enthusiasm to be, for the second time, stepmother of a De Alcazar's son ;)!

Joyce, let's admit it, who is not as good actress than Darla, "feigning an innocence she was far away from feeling". And when she says: "“I think it might be better if I ask William what he thinks about it first, so he could court her. To give her the illusion that this will be a love marriage? You know how Elizabeth is with these things.” That's rich ;)!

Is it funny, or sad? It seems that Darla knows better Buffy than her own mother...

So yes, in a way, I prefer Bad Darla rather than Insipid Joyce ;)!

What a twist in the story :)! Darla acting like the perfect godmother, being the one who will give to William his real name, marrying him with Buffy...

Maybe...

Little Aimée has a lot of things to learn, no doubts ;)! Little Aimée who is, as always, incredible. So sure that William is jealous, loves her. And that he uses Buffy to make her jealous! ARFF :)! So many things in a so little head... But even little capricious girls can be very dangerous...

Since William has presented himself to the family De Alcazar, the story takes a new rythm. A new turn. The characters are now all on the same stage. And the word "battlefield" comes in my mind...

Let's the war begin?

Author's Response: Hee, can I just say that I love your reviews? I always love reading your insight in the story. Thank you so much!

And you're right about Darla. I don't know how it happened, it just did, she just took over with this new plan and boy, if she isn't planning some more surprises. ;) I think it's sad for Joyce that she actually doesn't know neither of her daughters and that even Darla being as she is, knows Aimée and Buffy even better than their own mother.

Oh, Aimée is not very bright, but as you point out she could be very dangerous and probably will be. ;)

Lol, you're probably right about the battlefield, we'll see, I guess. ;) Thanks so much again!

Reviewer: Slayer rock chick Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 09:37 am Title: Chapter 37

I absolutley LOVE this story update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you and I'm about to update a few minutes from now. :)

Reviewer: Amelia-Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2006 - 02:33 am Title: Chapter 37

I enjoyed the reactions Spike's introduction caused. I also liked Spike's interaction with Darla, i'm glad he's enjoying making that shrew uncomfortable.
Sure didn't take long for Spike to go back on his promise to Maria... lol! I can't wait for their upcoming talk.
*sighs* I have no doubt Spike and Buffy's road to the alter is gonna be a rocky one, what with Darla and Aimée in the mix. Can't wait to read more. Loved the chapter! :D

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed their reactions and I think maybe you'll like Darla (just a little bit) on the upcoming chapter. ;)
Hee, yeah, I couldn't resist, or rather, he couldn't. ;) And the 'talk' is coming next chapter (39), since muse decided to add another twist to the story.
And yes, it might be a tad rocky, but they're getting help from the most unexpected person. ;) Thanks so much for reviewing, darling!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2006 - 12:31 am Title: Chapter 37

I enjoyed reading everyone's inner thoughts as Spike was introduced to the group, their reactions were also very interesting. So many new plot lines opened up in this chapter, I can't wait to find out what's in store for Spike and Buffy before the marry. Great update!

Author's Response: Oh, yes, many plotlines are opening and more are coming to life in the new chapter, since muse is set on making my life more difficult. ;) Thank you so much for your review!

Reviewer: effection Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2006 - 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 37

I can't wait until Aimee finds out that they're engaged. I love it when the villain's jealous and finally put in his/her place.

Author's Response: *lol* Well, she will find out very soon and I warrant she won't be too happy that she would be unable to do much to impede it. *hint hint*

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2006 - 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 37

It's so good to have you back.....I truly love this story and can Angel drop demon seed on her ass on the way up the stairs? I would give him something to think about, while she gets jealous that her sister has the best man......LOL

Author's Response: It's so good to be back :D and it seems muse is in kind mode to Mari, so hopefully I'll be able to update a little more regularly from now on...Hee, you're too funny, but no, Angel is not going to do that...yet. ;) Just wait a little bit and you'll see. Thanks for your kind words!

Reviewer: Slayer rock chick Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2006 - 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 36

This story is bloody awesome!!! I read it on Spuffyonline (as well as fire on fire which i will review also because it rocked too) and i had to come here so i could review it (not a spuffyonline member) and add it to my favs so i would get an e-mail when it gets updated (soon hopefully!!)
Aimee is a character i truly love to hate! And i love your story because it is so unique and fully of Spuffyness as it should be. Please update soon before i go nuts!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your awesome review, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much. Hee, I love to hate Aimée too. Hopefully you'll like what I have in store for Spike and Buffy in future chapters. :D

Reviewer: Klai Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/15/2006 - 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 36

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE :)!!!!!!!

So happy to read again your story :)! And with the hints you let in your last answer, it's an euphemism to say I have the head full of questions :)! I just love it!

So strange, when you have your own story decided to live its own path, doesn't it? And the characters decided to have their own lives... Magic of the writing ;).

This chapter reminds me the previous chapters where we saw Buffy and Spike discovering and claming their love for each other. An interesting interlude where Maria seems to resume, explain all the expectations, questions we could have. And in a way, it looks like a plan of batlle.

What will happen when Darla and Joyce will see the new administrator of Campo Real? How will Mummy dearest react, learning that her daughter wants to marry a former pirate, illegitimate son of her former brother-in-law Rodrigo and the so-much despised Anna?

I just love Maria's reaction when she sees the two lovers in the garden "with any luck the love that Elizabeth and William felt for one another and which was obvious to anyone that might see them together, would be strong enough to overcome all the obstacles that would come before them".

To be too optimistic can be not very wise, not very careful, but let's agree with Maria :)!

Good to see you and read you again :)! And I hope you recovered of your cold and planning your daughters’ first communion goes well ;)!!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you, darling! You're just too sweet to me! *big warm smile*

Yep, it's strange and magical, but so fulfilling, especially when one receives wonderful reviews such as yours.

It's supposed to be precisely that, kind of a reminder to what has happened before, a plan of battle as you very well call it.

*lol* Those questions will be answered very soon, I promise. ;)

Yep, María is optimistic up to a certain extent, she knows that things won't be easy, especially is Spike confirms her suspicions.

I'm glad to see you, too, thank you so much for your review, and yes, I'm fully recovered from my cold now and first communion went very well. :)

Reviewer: Deb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/15/2006 - 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 36

Great job on the update. So glad that your muse is feeling much better (as well as yourself). Can't wait for the reactions. Great set up!

Author's Response: Thank you, Deb, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2006 - 05:26 am Title: Chapter 36

love it and sitting on the edge of my seat about how everyone will react. glad you are back.

Author's Response: *lol* Thanks! I really hope I don't disappoint you with their reactions. :D

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 36

Welcome back! Maria has deeper connections than we originally thought..Very interesting. Her run down of everyone's positions and thoughts are very close to being spot on. Once again..good thing she is an ally to Buffy and William!

Loved the scene of Buffy and Spike in the garden. I could imagine them being so wrapped up in one another that it would be hard for someone to get there attention. How in the world are they going to keep their feelings for one another under wraps?! Great update :D

Author's Response: Thank you for the welcome and your lovely words! Hee, yes, María demanded to be heard now, so she is going to have a bigger role than I thought at first. ;)

I loved writing that scene in the garden, I'm so happy you liked it. :D And I don't think it will be an easy task to keep their feelings under wraps, as you'll see very soon. ;) Thanks again, honey!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 03:42 am Title: Chapter 36

María is such a great character, she's so resourceful and formidable. I really like this new twist that she was in love with Spike's father. I look forward to her upcoming talk with Spike, and I can't wait for Spike to make this presence known. Wonderful update!
Glad your back and feeling better! Congrats on your nominations! =)

Author's Response: Yep, María's resourceful alright. I'm loving writing her and Tegua, they're too fun. :) I'm glad you liked the twist that she was in love with Rodrigo, my muse refused to back down on that one. ;) Oh, and talk with Spike is coming on chapter 38. Hee, poor Spikey! And thank you so much for reviewing and your congrats!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 03:09 am Title: Chapter 36

Oh , lovely another great chapter......and what can I say about Maria, other than she is one tough bird.......poor Spike better beware........oh what a trickly sticky mess ole Spike has himself in.....LOL........


Kimber

Author's Response: Oh, yes, Spike better beware of María, she's going to make him sweat on chapter 38. ;) Thanks for reviewing, honey!

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 36

Oh, so glad you're back. And that you're feeling better. Was surprised who Maria was in love with. So glad she is on our couples side. They're going to need all the help they can get with all the devious plots going on. So looking forward to the meeting coming up. Can't wait to see the reactions of Aimee, Darla, Joyce and Snyder. Love the story and so glad to see an update.

Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie. Hee, I knew I could still surprise you with that. And you're right they're going to need all the help they can get. ;) Confrontation coming, hopefully next week. Thank you again and I'm glad to see you're still here with me. *hugs*

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 36

Nice to see an update.

Summary: It's a western with pirates and no gunfights :)

Author's Response: Thank you! and *lol* over the summary, we might have a duel or two. ;)

Reviewer: Amelia-Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 36

I enjoyed reading María's musings throughout the chapter. I like how she knew about everything that's been going on around her, yet she kept it all to herself. I guess Aimée didn't do such a great job of keeping her secret hidden... lol. And wow! The twist that María was in love with don Rodrigo was so interesting. Loved her reaction to finding Buffy and William together. Can't wait for Spike to meet the welcoming committee. Fantastic update! :D
Sorry to hear about your cold, it's good to know you're okay now. And congratulations on your nominations!!!

Author's Response: You'll read more of María now than originally planned with this new twist. It just felt right. :) Hee, Aimée was sloppy in more than one account and she'll pay dearly for that. *lol* Thank you for your comments. *hugs*

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 36

I am so glad you are back, I love this story, and can not wait to see what tricks Maria may have up her sleeve to help our couple to their happiness. I think Darla may have a stroke, (can't happen to a nicer person) and revenge could be so sweet with Snyder. Not to mention when all find out who the true heir is, I chuckle just thinking of the look on Aimee's face will be. Great chapter, missed you and thanks

Author's Response: Thank you, honey. I'm glad to be back, too. Oh, María has tons of things up her sleeve. ;) And yep, I agree about Darla, but Spike might have understimated Snyder and her. Oh, Aimée's going to be very surprised (not too pleasantly for her, btw) by many things in the future, and not only about Spike. ;) Thanks again, I missed you, too. *hugs*

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 36

Seems I came back just in time huh? Just when your muse came back :) How cute are they, by the way? I really am afraid with the foreshadowing how things are going to end up coming to pass with William and Angel and Darla and well, everyone. It seems the fates are conspiring against our favorite couple - hopefully Buffy's faith in him is stronger, and her faith in herself to keep him.

Author's Response: Yep, it seems you did. :D About the foreshadowing, I'll just say that things are about to get very interesting for everyone involved (I hope at least). I think Buffy's faith in Spike is stronger than his faith in well, anything, and that can create some troubles for them. Thanks for your comment!

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 35

Let the good times roll lol. This should be good, in the bumpy way lol.

Author's Response: You're very right, there's a very bumpy way ahead. Thanks for all your reviews, honey!

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 34

Whew! finally!

Author's Response: *lol* At least on that account. ;)

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 33

The suspense is killing me. I'm so happy I have two more chapters to go :)

Author's Response: Hee, I created suspense, yay! :D

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