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Reviewer: Amelia-Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2006 - 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 32

Wow! Spike's arrival at Campo Real is really gonna rock everyone's world. I can't wait to see how everyone reacts to him and how he reacts to them. Hmmm... I can't help but wonder if Darla is gonna find the mysterious vial or the contraption Aimée is hiding. Fantastic chapter as always!

Author's Response: Oh, yes, it certainly will rock everyone's world. It will create a very interesting chain-reaction, I think. You'll find out about that in chapter 33. Thanks so much for your comment, Cariño!

Reviewer: Melissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2006 - 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 32

I just knew that invitation thing was gonna come back to haunt them!
You're a great writer.
Please update soon, i can't wait to read bout Spike's 'adventure' in Campo Real.
Mel

Author's Response: *lol* Thank you so much. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, Mel. :)

Reviewer: Klai Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2006 - 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 32

"Oh, dear Lord, what have I done?”

OH YES GILES! I wouldn't have been able myself to say better ;) !

So, we have our William on the edge of the crisis. No doubt the way to Campos Real and Buffy will seem very long to him. Make sure that our friend will be soon reassured;)...

But I feel the 2 lovers William and Buffy will meet a difficult time. Some things will have to be told, some difficult truths revealed. After 3 months of separation, another test to be faced. But I have like an idea that William and Buffy are strong enough to succeed ;).

Little Aimée... Bad time goes on for her. I remember a proverb: "If Gods want to punish you, they fulfill your dearest wish", something like that.

She is so sure to have had the perfect revenge on Buffy, thinking: "she had everything her sister ever wanted and she wasn’t about to give that up, no matter what she had to do". How ironic that it's absolutely not the case. The day she will understand that, that she married Angel, and refused William, all that for nothing, I have to say it, I will feel some sadness for her...

I can understand Aimée's bitterness, feeling herself always second after Elizabeth. But I wonder if it was the reality, was she really " the spare, disposable daughter, the one whose existence didn’t matter" in the past? A confrontation between Aimée and Joyce would be interesting...

Well :) a great chapter and as you say "Let the games begin!".

No need to say I can't wait the next chapter. I feel like a mosquito who drank 8 cups of coffee ;)!

Author's Response: Hee! Poor Giles, he was sickly, it wasn't really his fault. ;)

Oh, Spike will be reassured soon enough, don't worry. ;)

And you're very perceptive and that's all I say about William and Buffy. ;)

Hee, that proverb seems to fit Aimée perfectly and the day you will feel some sadness for her is coming, very soon. ;)

And again I say you're very perceptive and there'll probably be a confrontation between Buffy and Aimée about that.

lol, you're too sweet, thank you so much for your review!

*hugs*
Mari

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2006 - 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 32

Oh, now this chapter was just way too short. I can see you leave us hanging about William, but so wanted to know about the wedding night. You know, with Tegua''s remedy. I'm going to be on pins and needles until the next update. I hope your muse gets all fired up and compelled to write an update really soon. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Hee! Sorry it was short, but I'll make up for that with the next chapter. ;) And to tell you the truth, I never intended to write about the wedding night. I'm going to write about the aftermath of the wedding night though and then you'll find out all about Tegua's remedy. ;) Thank you so much for reviewing. :D

Reviewer: katakata Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2006 - 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 32

Oh lordy that's just hilarious - in an 'ok I know it's not SUPPOSED to be funny but COME ON' kind of way. I can't wait to see what happens next update.

Author's Response: *lol* I'm glad you thought so. :D I was thinking the same while I was writing it. ;) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2006 - 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 32

Hmm I can't say I didn't see that one coming. The misunderstadning is always a key ingredient it would seem :)

Author's Response: Yes, it is, and it's not like I haven't been hinting at it for a while now. ;) Thanks for reviewing. :D

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2006 - 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 32

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Hee! Hope to have it ready soon. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Klai Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2006 - 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 31

Let's have 1 second (not 1 minute, 1 second !) for little Aimée, who is experiencing a very cruel moment.

Second finished!

Bad time for the girl. First, illness and pain. Second, disturbing thoughts about her future life as young Dona De Alcazar, happily married with money and prestige, and unhappily married with a man she apparently (?!) doesn't, can't and won't love, or even be lightly attracted by.

So, Angel is very incredible ;)! So happy and proud of his talent to play the matchmaker... I feel an urgent need to furiously shake the boy, screaming "Open your eyes and WAKE UP!". Yes, Buffy was right, men can be so gullible. Angel shows us that he has no limits concerning naivety. In love AND in friendship!

Riley... It's a beautiful portrait of perfect ass you have made here ;)! God, not only he is a dowry-hunter, but he seems very gullible too, "he didn’t think the girl would be half as beautiful as her sister or as doña Darla De Alcazar". I feel an urgent need to shake furiously the boy, screaming "Before judging, you have to see, moron!". Not that I want to see him with our Buffy, of course! It's just that I want to defend the reputation of our girl... always second after Aimée :(

Not doubt that Riley has quickly changed his mind after seeing Buffy. "Love at first sight". With her? The dowry? Both, certainly.

I just love the idea of little Aimée who, without wanting it nor knowing it, helps her sister. If only she knew what she had really done, she would be green of rage!

May I add I think that Riley and Aimée would be a lovely couple ;)?

I can't wait the next chapter. No doubt that William and Buffy will have a lot of things to talk about. And think about! (Will I have an urgent need to shake William ;)?)

Thanks :)!

Author's Response: *lol* You're too funny. I just adore reading your reviews. :D

Yes, and things won't get better for Aimée now that she's married, if anything they'll get worse. ;)

Hee! Angel, poor Angel, when he opens his eyes he will wish he'd been left blind. ;)

Oh, I hate Riley, so it was either him or Parker for this part, but considering how he will end up, I decided to continue with Riley. ;)

Oh, yes, he sure changed his mind, not that he would have minded if Buffy wasn't beautiful, he's mostly after the dowry any way. ;)

*lol* Yes, they would be perfect for each other. ;)

Next chapter will be posted by tomorrow (Friday).

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 31

Damn it was just getting good and the story stops.....I can't wait....seems Aimee is not so happy with her choice after all....I have a feeling she will end up with nothing at all.

Author's Response: Hee! I'll have more posted by tomorrow, I promise. ;) And yes, it seems Aimée is not that happy, and who knows, you might be right. ;) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 7

I don't have a clue what this is based on but since it's set in the time of the old west I'm hoping for some serioius gun slinging and cool Clint Eastwood one liners....before people get killed :)

Author's Response: Hee! There are not many killings in the future, but I hope to have a bit of action in future chapters. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Kmber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 12:05 am Title: Chapter 31

I cant wait until vile creature gets a stake in her heart,... well if it's big enough to find......maybe some one will get lucky and find it after three or four hundred stabs at it..........

Riley, I spit on him, LOL

I feel sorry for Angel, he is SO blinded by love, or the thought of being in love.....I truly pray it's the later.

William, please find the letter and come to Buffy's aid. I think she will need it with Angel trying to matchmake and brown nosing vamped whore Riley wanting to use her to better position himself with Angel.......

Come home William, come home soon.....I know he's in the next chapter....doesn't mean spuffyage to be had, LOL

Kimber

Author's Response: Hee, a stake in her heart, eh? You're giving me very good ideas for her demise. ;)

Author's Response: Hee, a stake in her heart, eh? You're giving me very good ideas for her demise. ;)

Author's Response: Argh! Sorry, for the double response, my computer is being weird. Anyway, here's the rest:

*laughing along with you for the Riley bit* ;)

I feel sorry for Angel, too. It won't be easy for him to accept how wrong he was by chosing Aimée.

You'll find out what will happen with William in the next chapter, which I'll post as soon as I have time to revise the beta'd version.

Thanks for reviewing.

Mari

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2006 - 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 31

i am really looking forward to spike's return and his reunion with buffy! please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I hope to have another update by Friday. :)

Reviewer: Amelia-Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2006 - 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 31

Even though i'm kind of angry at Angel for his matchmaking, I actually feel sorry for the poor guy. Sure he's no Spike but he's hardly repulsive, it's a shame he's entering into a loveless marriage and doesn't even know it. It's awful of me, but i'm really enjoying the side effects of Tegua's treatments. *bites nails* I can't wait for everything to hit the fan when Spike gets to Campo Real. Fantastic update!

Author's Response: *lol* Angel is just doing what he thinks is right for his future sister-in-law. He feels guilty for not marrying her and prefering her sister. Hee! That's not being awful, Amelia, she's just beginning to experience the consequences of her actions. ;) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2006 - 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 31

So happy for another update. Just love this story. So Aimee doesn't even like to kiss Ange. Life's a bitch. And she doesn't want to even see her sister have any happiness at al.. Of course we don't want her to get together with Riley. At least that part of her selfishness turns out OK. Glad Spike will be back in next chapter. Worrying about Giles. Is he still Sick or was he just not at home?Loved Tegua's treatment. So looking forward to next update.

Author's Response: It makes me so happy to know you love the story. :D Hee! I know and if Aimée knew that she was actually doing Buffy a favor by not letting Angel talk on Riley's behalf, she'd probably have a stroke. ;) Giles was just sick and not at home, but you'll find out more in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2006 - 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 31

Man..You know I am SO NOT wanting anything between Riley and Buffy..but I can't believe how jealous Aimee' is! I mean I do believe it by now..but it's hard to accept that she doesn't hold ANY love for her own sister. What would it be to her if Buffy had a decent suitor? I cannot wait til' Aimee is faced with the fact that William is in love with Buffy! It is going to drive her insane : D

So...Spike returns next chapter! Can't wait!


Author's Response: Oh, Aimée would be jealous of anyone that she considers a threat. She simply doesn't want anyone but her to shine or be happy. And there's no one she considers more of a threat than Buffy, so you can imagine what she might do to stop her from being happy with William once she finds out who he is and that he's preferred her sister over her.

Reviewer: Mali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2006 - 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 31

Oh, the plot is twisting and I'm so happy I chose to come along for the ride. This was a gorgeous chapter, dealng with several different things, and I really can't wait for the next one

Author's Response: Hee! I'm glad you chose to come along for the ride, too. Thanks for your kind words. :D Hope to have the next chapter ready for the weekend. :D

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2006 - 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 31

Aimée having second thoughts, Riley wanting to marry Buffy, Buffy and María not being able to get a hold of Giles? This can't be good.
At least Aimée's selfishness at not wanting her sister to have any happiness might work in Spike and Buffy's favor to have Angel not speak of Riley's intentions towards Elizabeth until after Spike comes back.
Can't wait for his return. Great update, can't wait for the next.

Author's Response: Yep, Aimée's having second thoughts, but she won't back up from marrying Angel, not when she's so close to get what she ever wanted. ;) About the rest, you'll have to wait and see, I promise it won't be too bad. ;)
Hee, yeah, at least Aimée is good for something, even if it's to stop Angel of speaking on Riley's behalf with Joyce and Buffy. Hope to have another chapter ready for the weekend. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2006 - 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 31

Oh heavens, I look forward to the day the everyithing comes crashing down on Aimee !! And the fact that she is marrying a man she doesn't love, and doesn't even like kissing, oh well, too bad, so sad NOT !
Even better, she she finds out that Buffy will be marrying the man that stirs her passion, ( not to mention mine as well ), AND that he will be the true heir, does it get any sweeter ???? Great chapter, look forward to the return of Spike and thanks !

Author's Response: Oh, that day is coming very soon. At least the start of it, since there will be a lot of crashing down for her. I guess she never expected to not feel anything for Angel when he kissed her.
Oh, I agree. But Aimée won't let them be happy without putting one hell of a fight. ;)
Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 30

Oh, Lord. Don't tell me Angel is going to try to get Buffy and Riley together, as he is giving a dowry to Buffy and offered to help her find someone. Please let Spike get his butt home. I just wonder what Teguas's last treatment will do to Aimee. Looking forward to that one. I guess all hell will break loose when everyone gets to the ranch. Spike hasn't told Buffy the extent of his relationship with Aimee. Aimee is sure to rub that into Buffy now that she's done with her treatments till later. Buffy still has Maria at her back. Will hope for the best, but not expect it. Good update.

Author's Response: Hee! Yes, I'm sad to tell you that Angel is going to try to get Buffy and Riley together, but it won't come to fruition, so don't worry. ;) Spike is coming back on chapter 32. And you'll find out about what the treatment will do to Aimée on chapter 31. ;) As you guessed, yes, all hell will break loose now that we've moved the action to Campo Real. ... And I can tell you Buffy's reaction to finding out how far Aimée and William's relationship went, will be better than William finding out that Buffy was in love with Angel, even if nothing happened between them. but as you say, María is still there, and she will help Buffy out. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 30

still loving the story............I hope Buffy at least has a clue about what went on between Spike and Aimee. I think she already has an idea. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Hee, I'm glad you are. :) ... I think Buffy's far too innocent to imagine how far William and Aimée went. It won't be easy for her to accept when she finds out. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Klai Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 30

Will Aimée be able to sit after the final treatment of Tegua? That is the question ;)! Possibly, but very, very carefully...

So, look who is he coming! Riley... A man who has monetary problems and who is Angel's friend.

Hum... Angel who says Joyce and Aimée that he could find a suitable husband for Buffy. A Buffy he gaves a generous dowry.

So, we have a man who needs money and who likes (very much) beautiful women, and a beautiful woman who has a generous dowry. In middle of that, Angel. A man who is already on the way to make happily the most beautiful mistake of his life, marrying little Aimée. And, when we see his wisdom concerning love affairs... He could think he would make a good action marrying Riley and Buffy. God, he would be ever able to think he is himself very clever to have had such idea :(! Can't help myself ;)!...

And Spike, thanks to Xander, has a lot of things to think about.

Yes, Buffy could be hurt to know that he went so far with Aimée, but she has already shown wisdom when she had learnt about their "affair". And maybe has she already some doubts...

Little Aimée. No doubt our pirate will be surprised to learn that his former (and very short-time) lover will be... err... his future stepsister, and twice! Officially, by Buffy (Aimée's sister and his future wife), and unofficially, by Angel ("unknown" Spike's brother and Aimée's future husband).

But to think Aimée will keep quiet herself, having a marriage on the way, would be a mistake. As said Willliam Congreve: "Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned".

You said it will be a little misunderstanding? I'm very curious :)! And I already have my head full of question! Thanks ;)!

Author's Response: Hee! You'll find out if she will be able to sit soon enough. ;)

*lol* Yeah, I couldn't have put it better than you did. Angel is certainly on the way to make happily the most beautiful mistake of his life and he's convinced Riley is the best option for his future sister-in-law. Of course, as you can imagine, Angel is not the best in judging a person's character, is he? ;)

I think Buffy will be understanding, up to a certain point, there's going to be something that could change her mind about being so understanding.

I agree with you about Aimée, too. It will be a surprise for William to find out that little Aimée was playing with him, not that he wasn't doing the same with her. ;)

About Aimée being able to keep quiet, well, you'll find out soon. ;)

Yes, there's going to be a little misunderstanding, which will happen in chapter 32. Thanks so much for reviewing, cariño!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 04:09 am Title: Chapter 30

I can't wait to read what Aimee's little surprise is.

Things are heating up, can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Hee, little surprise comes in chapter 32. ;)

And things are still going to heat a lot more. Thanks for reviewing, cariño!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 02:12 am Title: Chapter 30

Darn it! I just went back and read your response to the last chapter review I did..I am slapping myself up side the head! lol So..Of course Spike is going to talk to Rupert, and........Damn it!

So..Riley has the hots for Darla..Is he the one that Angel is looking to set Buffy up with? Thank you for the great update!

Author's Response: Exactly, but I promise I'll try not to drag the misunderstanding more than I absolutely have to. There's still too much I have to tell to focus on that.

Riley has the hots for any woman that's beautiful and rich. Although there will be an interesting relationship between him and Darla. And yes, he's the one Angel is looking to set Buffy up with. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 01:53 am Title: Chapter 30

I gotta say it again, I love Tegua.
So Spike still has a bit more confessing to do, huh? Though it seems like he's not really planning on telling her, just hope everything works out in the end. Great update, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Hee, I love Tegua, too. And this isn't the last you'll see of her. ;)
Oh, yes, Spike has more confessing to do and I can tell you that it won't be pretty.
Thanks for reviewing, I just posted another chapter. :)

Reviewer: Amelia-Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 01:34 am Title: Chapter 30

Oh my gosh! I just reread Spike's confession about his affair with Aimée and I hadn't noticed that he said he "thought" about marrying Aimée and not that he "was" engaged to her... Buffy's reaction should be interesting.
I continue to love the Aimée/Tegua scenes. I can't wait to find out what the mysterious "little something" is that has Tegua smiling.
I liked Cordy and Angel's first meeting. And Riley and Darla... that's an interesting combination. Wonderful chapter!

Author's Response: Hee! Well, yes, I think it will be quite interesting, although not as interesting as Spike's reaction to knowing that Buffy fancied herself in love with Angel. ;) Oh, you'll find about the mysterious little something on chapter 32, I'm still trying to decide how much I want to make Aimée suffer. ;) I'm glad you liked Cordy and Angel, hope you like them more as the story advances. :) And Riley and Darla, yeah, it will be interesting how that would evolve, at least I hope. Thank you so much for reviewing. :D

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