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Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2007 - 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 43

Been away from reading for a while, so had some chapters. It's lovely to see Aimee so miserable. One can only hope it will get worse. Loved the update. Darla is putting the screws to Aimee, am looking forward to her turn. Hope Giles and Don Alcazar make an appearance soon. Hope Snyder is having a miserable time. Is Maria by any chance William's mother? Love the story. It's so satisfing to read a really good author. Look forward to next chapter. Thanks so much for sharing your talent with us.

Author's Response: Hee, I think everyone is in agreement about Aimée. And yeah, I think it can only get worse for her. Poor Aimée. *giggles* Giles and Rodrigo are going to make an appearance very soon. I'm looking forward to that too. Same as with Snyder's return. ;) And no, María is not William's mother, Anne died when he was a child, just a few days before Giles brought him to Campo Real for the first time. Thank you for your lovely review, it's very flattering to know you consider me a good author. *smooches*

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2007 - 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 43

Yay! A new update! The chapter was wonderful! I love that you have something exciting for us up your sleeve, can't wait to find out what is is! :D

Author's Response: Hee, you'll find out sooner than I thought. Muse is all revved up with this story again. ;) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2007 - 10:29 am Title: Chapter 43

I want him to find her, but I want her to play hard to get!!!

Author's Response: Hee, of course she will play hard to get. We'll just have to wait and see if Spike lets her. *weg* Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2007 - 06:13 am Title: Chapter 43

Seems that all good things come to those who wait but Buffy is not cooperating! Hope Spike tracks her down before she takes the plunge into the nuns habits for good. Aimee is such a greedy girl to desire that which she can no longer have, she really must hate her sister to ruin her life and not lose any sleep over it. Buffy should find the strength in her love for Spike to fight for him and more so because Aimee has never had Buffy stand up to her. Fight for your man woman! If Aimee wants to fight dirty, then let the dirt fly and see who has the dirtiest laundry to bare. As for Dona Darla, it seems that she too has her reckoning waiting in the shadows for her.

I feel sorry for Angel in his mistaken belief that Aimme loves him, I can only hope that he gets some well deserved compassion from Cordelia.

Thanks for the update, enjoyed it immensely.

Author's Response: Heee, yeah, good things come to those who wait, even if Buffy is not cooperating. *giggles* And no worries, Spike is all for finding her as soon as he possibly can. He's not about to let her escape that easily.
Aimée is a greedy girl, yes, but she's about to learn that she can't get everything she wants. And don't worry about Buffy, in maybe 2 or 3 more chapters you'll discover a very different woman than she's been so far. Everything is going to change now.
Thank you for reviewing. I loved to know what you thought of the chapter. :D

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2007 - 05:47 am Title: Chapter 43

loved the update!!!!!! Cannot wait to see how spike and maria discover where buffy has gone and what will the convenant do when it comes into contact with spike!!!!!!!! Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for you review! Hee, and I think you won't have to wait for too long to find out what's coming next. Muse is all revved up. ;)

Reviewer: DrkDevin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2007 - 05:45 am Title: Chapter 43

I know that Darla has her motives to do as she has done but I'm still happy that her selfishness is helping, at least a little bit, Buffy and Spike.
I can't help but wonder how Joyce is going to take Spike asking her if it's okay for him to pay court to Buffy, lol.
I'm happy for Spike, that he's getting his father's last name and accepted by Angel, and though I don't agree with most of his thoughts, I do understand them.
Buffy's scene broke my heart 'cause I can feel just how hurt she is. I'm still hoping that when the time comes she'll at least hear William out.
Aimée, oh Aimée, I don't even know what to say about that girl anymore. She's delusional still and is more than a bit narcissistic. But as much as I can't stand her character I am utterly in love with the way you're writing her.
You are evil, teasing us with that little A/N at the end, lol. I'm actually a bit nervous about this 'unexpected twist' but oh so eager to find out. I can't wait to see what you have planned next :D

Author's Response: Hee, no one is happier than Darla's selfishness is helping them than me. Doesn't mean she'll get off the hook for all she's done before though. lol
I'm glad you understand Spike's, even if you don't agree with some of his thoughts. I think I might not agree with some of them, too, but he's kind of taken over so there's not much I can do but follow his lead.
Buffy's scene was so hard to write, I was crying the whole time I wrote it. But I think it worked out in the end and portrayed the depth of what she's feeling. About her wanting to hear William out? Well, that's coming on the next chapter, you'll find out then. *evil grin*
Oh, I'm very flattered that you like the way I'm writing Aimée, it's quite fun to write her like this. :D
And moi evil? No, not at all. *giggles* Actually this 'unexpected twist' took me by surprise, too, but it hopefully will be so good.
Thanks for your awesome review, Devin!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2007 - 04:23 am Title: Chapter 43

Oh, lovely update.......I believe Spuffy will prevail.....I'm more anxious to see what happens to delusional bitch sister.......and what happens when Daddy returns and makes it known that William is his true heir.......I will hate how this will hurt Angel but I think with him and Wiliam being so close so soon.......it too will work out....

Author's Response: What will happen to delusional bitch sister? Hee, I think you'll find her punishment looooong and very satisfactory. I know for me it will be. ;) And Daddy will return pretty soon, I think he might start to reappear as early as on the next chapter... Thanks for reviewing, darling!

Reviewer: Amelia-Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2007 - 03:33 am Title: Chapter 43

Like you really need to ask... of course I want to know what the unexpected twist is! :D
Darla's plans are playing out nicely, she really made Spike an offer he couldn't refuse. Can't wait for Spike to find Buffy, that's gonna be one exciting confrontation. The Aimée scene was interesting, seems like she's crossed into as Spike would probably say 'sack of hammers land.' Loved the chapter!

Author's Response: Hee, yes, I needed to ask. Although, I have the feeling you're all going to like what Spike is planning. ;)
Yeah, there was no way that Spike was going to refuse Darla's offer. Now convincing Buffy could prove to be a little more difficult to do. ;) Poor deluded Aimée thought life wasn't fair with her, but it's about to turn even worse in many senses. ;)
Thank you for your awesome review, I truly appreciate it! *smooches* Mari

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2007 - 03:00 am Title: Chapter 43

You know this chapter is brilliant. It's packed full of raw and intense emotions all the way around that were running on high for so many people. Heartbreak, betrayal, love, determination, jealousy, surprise, hatred and the list goes on. Poor delusional Aimee, *shakes head*, the girl just doesn't know when to quit. Denial much? Sighs, ah well - she'll get hers I suppose and you know I'll be right there on the sidelines clapping like a maniac. I feel for Buffy, i really do and Spike? Well, it's good to see his determination is letting growly possessive Spike out, yum. It's been a thrill editing this chapter for ya honey - wonderful job. Smooches.

Author's Response: Awww, thank you for your lovely words, sweetie. You're too good to me and truly, if it weren't for your help this chapter wouldn't be what it turned to be. *smooches* Yes, poor delusional Aimée, if only she knew what's coming her way. *giggles* I loved writing Spike like that, it was too fun to see him in this new light. All growly and possessive. Yum indeed. ;) Thanks again, cariño.

Reviewer: spikette55 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 42

OMG! Now I feel for poor Buffy. What Maria told Spike about the relationship not fair to Buffy with his jealousy over Buffy's engagement. It seems Spike if he does marry her will have a very hard time convincing Buffy he truely loves her. thanx luv and wait for more updates.

Author's Response: I know, Spike's being quite irrational with his jealousy, but he can't help it. ;) I feel bad for Buffy, as well, but I promise she won't be suffering for too long now. Thank you so much for reviewing, sweetie!

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2007 - 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 42

About time the wench got put in her place. I love me a determined Spike. Poor Buffy, if she had any idea what was going on she'd flee to another country instead of a convent, giggles. My, my... I do wonder how they'll react once they deiscover she's gone missing Beautiful job sweety.

Author's Response: Hee! Yeah, and she's going to be put in her place again and again and again. *giggles* Thanks for your lovely review and for all your help, sweetie. *smooches*

Reviewer: Amelia-Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2007 - 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 42

Spike's confrontation with Aimée was awesome, I absolutely loved it! I'm a bit worried by Aimée's reaction though, a desparate, determined and deeply delusional Aimée can't be of the good. Can't wait to read more. Fantastic chapter!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, honey. And hee, yeah, Aimée might still try to create problems, I don't think she will like what I have in store for her though. ;) Thanks for your lovely review!

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2007 - 11:30 am Title: Chapter 1

Definitely a one in a million story, the angst is well done but hopefully not for too long lol. Fantastic writing keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thank you, darling. I'm glad you enjoyed it and no problem, I truly hate to drag angst for more than I have to. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2007 - 08:52 am Title: Chapter 42

You did a great job with the Spike/Aimee confrontation. Aimee's reaction was interesting to say the least. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Hee, thankee for the wonderful review. I'm glad that everyone seemed to enjoy it. I was a bit worried if I had gone overboard. ;)

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2007 - 05:34 am Title: Chapter 42

good update

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2007 - 05:08 am Title: Chapter 42

The confrontation between Aimee and Spike and Darla was something she richly deserved. She plots and schemes and doesn't care who she hurts as long as she gets what she wants. Poor Buffy, all set to give up living and hide away to shelter her broken heart. I can only hope that her horse shows better sense than her and returns her back to Spike.

Author's Response: Oh, yes, Aimée is starting to pay the consequences for all she's done, and will continue to do so. It's most satisfying to plan her punishment. *evil grin* Hee, yes, Buffy will find a place where she can shelter her broken heart, but I promise it won't be broken for too long. I hate to drag angst for more than I have to. Thanks for the review, honey!

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2007 - 04:40 am Title: Chapter 42

The confrontation between William and Aimée was... something quite fierce, but I doubt she would of understood that William really doesn't want anything to do with her anymore if it had been written any other way.
Aimée is still delusional to think that Spike will be hers again, but I'm kinda glad she's still trying since it lets her slip and make mistakes that will later help to bring her down :-P
I'm really hoping that Buffy finds the solace she seeks, at least for a little while. I'm hoping it may help to diminish her anger and hurt so that when William finds her (he will right? lol..) she might be at least a bit more willing to hear him out.
Awesome chapter. I'm patiently, yet eagerly, waiting for the next :o)

Author's Response: Yeah, that confrontation was quite fierce, but it needed to be like that. Now about Aimée understanding...well, you'll have to read the new chapter to see if she did. ;)
Oh, Aimée will be brought down, several times, I think you will enjoy how. *weg*
Hee, yes, she will find solace, not for long though. And you'll have to wait and read to find out if William finds her or not. *giggles*
Thanks for the awesome review!

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2007 - 04:29 am Title: Chapter 42

i was very shocked at how forthcoming spike was with the "if blood has to be spilt then so be it". this was very I will do what has to be done which is the attitude he will need to win buffy back. the timing was good for the spike/aimee confrontation. i can't wait to see how this unfolds

Author's Response: Believe me I was shocked as well, but he refused to be written in any other way. He can be quite convincing when he wants, hope that helps him with Buffy. ;) Thanks so much for your wonderful review, honey!

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2007 - 04:04 am Title: Chapter 42

Exce;;emt chapter, I enjoyed the confrontation between William and Aimee, mainly his response.

Buffy needs someone to trust in, have anyone in mind? Great story.

Author's Response: I'm very glad you enjoyed the confrontation, it was quite fun to write it like that. ;)

Oh, Buffy will have someone she can trust soon, no worries. Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2007 - 04:00 am Title: Chapter 42

Oh happy happy joy joy, the wicked ho bag was jammed not once but twice.......Now we need to get the lovers back together....and bitch sister disgraced and working at a whore house some where far far away, LOL........I think the confrontation with William and heartless bitch was perfect timing.......it''s true to her nature to screw up like this..........hope to read more soon.......

Author's Response: *lol* I think you will enjoy what I have in store for the wicked ho bag, it will be very satisfying. ;) Oh, the lovers will get back together sooner than I expected, Spike is too impatient to let me drag this for too long. *lol* I'm glad you enjoyed the confrontation. :D Thank you for the awesome review!

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2007 - 03:41 am Title: Chapter 42

ahh poor Buffy. Nice update

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing. And I agree poor Buffy, but I promise she won't be for too long. ;)

Reviewer: Valery Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2007 - 02:37 am Title: Chapter 42

I waited for this chapter so long!!! I love it. The confrontation between William and Aimee was violent, I think we just saw an aspect of him that we never seen before. I cant wait for the reunion between William and Buffy.
Please update as soon as you can

Author's Response: Hee, I'm very happy (and relieved) that you weren't put off because of the violence. I agree, I hadn't shown that side of Spike before, but then again there hadn't been that much at stake for him either. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2006 - 05:55 am Title: Chapter 41

I feel bad for Buffy, and William's probably gonna go mad when they realize she's not at Campo Real anymore. I can't wait to see how Darla's plan unravels. Great update :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! And I feel bad for Buffy, too, but I needed this to happen so I can actually move on with the plot. At the moment, it seems like that this day will never end. *sighs*

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2006 - 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 41

Poor Buffy, she's in such a bad place right now, I hope things get better for her soon. Loved the Spike/Maria talk. I'm actually rooting for Darla, I hope her plans work out. Good update!

Author's Response: Yes, she sure is in a bad place right now. And I think things will improve, although they won't completely resolve. I'm glad you liked the Spike/María talk, I had a great time writing it. :D Hee, I guess rooting for Darla is understandable here, considering what her plans are. ;) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2006 - 05:36 am Title: Chapter 41

Ops, Spike find God's house and you'll find Buffy.......can we test the theory that lightening will strike hoooooo girl if she even came near the convent.......hmmmmm.


Kimber

Author's Response: *lol* I guess we could put that theory to the test. Hmm, I'll have to give some thought to that. ;)

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