Date: 09/22/2013 - 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
Story has potential but really needs a beta. Plot jumps around and there are a lot of mechanical writing errors. Also, the rating is wrong, this is really PG-13.
Date: 01/25/2006 - 06:12 am Title: Chapter 2
good story
Date: 01/24/2006 - 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
What a cute story! I love that Buffy finally went after Spike. It's about time that she did something for the relationship!
Date: 01/24/2006 - 07:59 am Title: Chapter 2
okay i'll be the first to review. i really like the story. i hope you take this well and not think i'm being mean but you could have spred this out more. some of the things you had were just thrown together and was confusing on how they got to where they were. but overall i think this was great. the rating might have been a little higher than needed also. hope you keep writting cause this is deffinatly a good story. keep it up.
Author's Response: Hi Daisy,
I wrote this very early in the fic writing game. This was before i knew how to pace a story. But hopefully i'm getting it lol.