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Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2006 - 05:09 am Title: 10 - Warm Feeling

Naaaa...SPike's not REALLY gonna' kill Buffy......Right?

That's some strong thrall Lothos has..What's it going to take to get Buffy to snap out of it? Looking forward to you next chapter!

Author's Response: Hopefully you'll like how Spike deals with the Slayer and Lothos.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2006 - 08:47 pm Title: 9 - Saints and Dances

New chapter :) *reads on* *gg* Date-Spike, huh? At last this way Buffy will get to her dance and Spike/they are able to protect her, too. And hot date with Spike? Has its benefits too :) Enough girls are jealous as of Buffy it seems. ;-) Oh, Buffy had such a good times! Till the vampires attacked. ... And know Buffy is gone. Hope you'll update soon :) Loved the chapter.

Author's Response: Yup.. date Spike is all yummy.. ^_^ Thanks.

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2006 - 04:04 pm Title: 9 - Saints and Dances

wondering where she went.. love the update!! waiting for more!

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2006 - 09:30 am Title: 9 - Saints and Dances

great chapter

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2006 - 05:32 am Title: 9 - Saints and Dances

*sigh* Can't say I was suprised to see Spike and Buffy's night being ruined.. Btw..Spike in a suit and sports car...YUMMY...lol

Great update...Looking forward to the next! : D

Author's Response: Yup... yummy nummy Spike.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2006 - 05:21 am Title: 8 - Slayer Blood

ooooo...Good job of setting up the sexual tension there..You could cut it with a knife in this chapter! Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you. Wasn't sure the dance and Spike as a date was convincing. But yay!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2006 - 10:13 pm Title: 8 - Slayer Blood

Oh, a clever way of playing twenty questions.. with the fighting (sparring) against one another :) Loved the glimpse of what can be at the end of the chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks. Yup.. spuffyness beginning

Reviewer: messy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2006 - 03:39 pm Title: 6 - The New Slayer

at first reading "ceffo", I wasn't sure but then with "faccia da culo" I collapsed ROTFLMAO.
I'm italian and though the online dictionary isn't exactly correct, it was a very funny scene :D
btw, "ceffo" means something like "dangerous mug" and "faccia da culo" literally is "ass face" ;-)
almost forgot, I'm enjoying your story very much :P
hugs

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you're liking it. Yup... have to rely on an online dictionary. But I'm glad it was close to what I wanted. Hope you keep on reading.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2006 - 11:04 pm Title: 7 - Meeting Buffy

Loved the first meeting :) So Buffy will work as a slayer now and accepting her bodyguards too. Well hopefully she won't accept too much (means she really seems to be fascinated by Angel .. We'll see how it goes. Not that I look forward to see Buffy fall for Angel. ... Till next time.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review... but don't worry.. angel fascination will not last long.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2006 - 09:25 pm Title: 7 - Meeting Buffy

Just read through for the first time...This is just a great idea! Very Fresh..I'll be watching for new update ; )

Author's Response: Thanks. I hope I can keep it up.

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2006 - 07:21 am Title: 7 - Meeting Buffy

yay! they finally meet! i can't wait to see the suprise on thier faces when she lives past the year and kicks some serious ass in the process! i am loving your story and can't wait to read more! please update soon?

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you like the story.

Reviewer: katakata Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2006 - 05:33 am Title: 7 - Meeting Buffy

Heh! Good update. Jealous petulant Spike is a yummy Spike, so do draw that out for all you can LOL. I like Buffy's open attitude and willingness to try and adapt to the pretty out-there changes to her circumstances. I always thought her dogged determination on BtVS was an admirable characteristic but when taken to extremes it becomes rigid inflexibility and that's NEVER an attractive quality. Oh and please - while I see the utility of Angel as Spike's competition for Buffy's affections please spare my Spuffy-lovin heart the trauma of having to read too much explicit Bangel content. Pretty please? 8-)

Author's Response: Don't worry... originally this was suppose to be bangel for a while.. but I just can't write bangel so it will be spuffy pretty soon in fact.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2006 - 10:06 pm Title: 6 - The New Slayer

So now Buffy is in the play too. Looking forward till the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Thanks. ^_^

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2006 - 09:27 am Title: 6 - The New Slayer

love the update and thx for the translation..... was always wondering when ever it comes to different languages other than english... love it and waiting form more!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2006 - 09:26 pm Title: 5 - Chosen One

Yeah, sounds as if Helena is tired of being the slayer. *sniff* Spike was right, she didn't last long after this. And now to the next one. Just a job, huh? Till next chapter.

Author's Response: Yup... to Angel its just a job

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2006 - 03:48 pm Title: 5 - Chosen One

great update! love it and waitng for more!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: katakata Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2006 - 06:35 am Title: Prologue and Chapter 1 - The New Position

Interesting premise you're playing here. Vampire guards huh? I can see why Angel would do it. Is Spike's motivation going to be Helena perhaps and the friendship they shared? Here's hoping it's enough to keep him on the straight and narrow anyhow. Oh and I'm wondering...if the Chosen (which will eventually include Buffy) are aware that their history includes Vampire guards (all except for Angel being sans soul) then will that mean Buffy will also be without the whole 'no soul means you have no real feelings and therefore don't need to be treated with any respect'? That WOULD be a refreshing change LOL! 8-)

Author's Response: Thank you. Each guard has their own motivation. Angel - soul, Caden - fell in love, Spike - friendship with the Slayer at the time, plus not wanting to be dusted and hunted... Slayers don't know about vampire guards until they are called.. and yup, in this fic, just cuz you don't have a soul doesn't mean you don't have feelings.... Hope you like where I'll take this.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2006 - 10:42 pm Title: 4 - Retribution

William didn't kill his mother.. but the other humans that treated him wrong. Well.. vampire. Glad that Spike seems to find his path :)

Author's Response: Yup yup. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2006 - 07:29 am Title: 4 - Retribution

a great update! waiting for more!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2006 - 05:35 am Title: 4 - Retribution

i am a little confused with why helena is the slayer and not buffy, but it's your story so keep up the good work! i can't wait to read more! PLEASE UPDATE SOON?

Author's Response: Helena is the Slayer at that time... Buffy will arrive in 1996, which should be coming soon. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2006 - 02:20 pm Title: 3 - Turning

Then I'm looking forward to find out how Angel and Spike will get along. Oh, Helena feels guilty because she talked William into talking to Cecily? I see. William seems to get slowly used to his new life even if he still has problems controlling the demon. And he still remembers his old life, he worries for his mother. Lets just hope he can control the demon if he sees her.

Reviewer: desertrose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 02:40 pm Title: 2 - Change

Okay I'm hooked this is pretty darn interesting.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Blazing Fire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 01:20 pm Title: 2 - Change

So in this story Angel is Spike's sire. I saw a story like that a long time ago named Stranded.

I loved that one too. Great work. Keep posting.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and hope you like where I take this story.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2006 - 10:03 am Title: 2 - Change

That was unexpected... not really Cecily telling William that he was beneath him: That when Dru tried to turn William Helena came and staked her.. and Angel is the one that is Spike's sire. (Technically it must be him because he gave his blood to him, not Dru draining him, right?) Looking forward to the next part.

Author's Response: You're right.. Angel is Spike's sire in this one.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2006 - 08:52 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter 1 - The New Position

Do you know what I don't like in the fics I'm reading? (It will eventually be Spuffy.) But I love your stories and will read on. :) Seems to me that (maybe?) this one will be a long one if you count the years (starting in 1875). Looking forward to the next one.

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