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Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2007 - 02:59 pm Title: Mortal Enemies

OH I am so glad Willow asked to look before they called Angel.

Reviewer: Nemo Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2006 - 08:11 pm Title: Mortal Enemies

Oh lookie! Updates, two chappies for me to read! I'm so glad that Angel didn't have to come to sunnydale, for them to know that he isn't the vamp for the job. But how is Spike going to react? I gotta read that next chapter.. Very good, again weyrwolfen ~Nina

Author's Response: I tend to post every two or three days. Once the story's written, it's hard for me to not keep up a fast and furious posting pace. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Greenhair00 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 08:51 pm Title: Mortal Enemies

I like where this is heading! I can't wait to find out how Spike feels about helping the Scoobies.

P.S.: Coming from a one-time Philosophy major, I love that you set the mood of the chapter with the quotes!

Author's Response: I'm taking a more serious approach with this story than I did with Serpents, and the quotes seemed like a good way to make my points. I'm glad you're liking them. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Time of Change Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 02:10 pm Title: Mortal Enemies

Lovely battle scene with Kaede and Takeshi. And what's this? Angel might not be the vampire in question? Hee.

Author's Response: Yeah, who would have guessed? Oh wait... :-D Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 05:15 am Title: Mortal Enemies

Very nice fight scene. Beautifully choreographed; it flowed more like a dance. Heh-- it's all they've ever done! Nice way to contrast and compare the two sets of heroes.

I like the view inside Buffy's head in this chapter. Very believable. Her distraction was completely in character. I can't say that Spike as the consort is a surprise (this *is* the spuffy realm!) but well done in showing that.

Looking forward to the next chapter!


Author's Response: I do love writing sword fights. And yeah, I didn't even try to hide who the "consort" was going to be, but it was fun writing the characters' reactions. Thanks for leaving a review!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 09:43 pm Title: Mortal Enemies

Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 09:40 pm Title: Mortal Enemies

Interesting, now if you would be so kind as to put in the year of the japanese thing in normal years so i would know when exactly this is taking place :)

Author's Response: Kaede and Takeshi's story takes place in 1692. I'll stop being perverse and post that at the beginning of the next chapter in the author's notes section. ;-) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Morrigan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 07:18 pm Title: Mortal Enemies

Oh, this is going to be good!  Loving this story so far.  :)

Author's Response: I hope so. :-) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 07:05 pm Title: Mortal Enemies

great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 06:16 pm Title: Mortal Enemies

I must say I love the glimpses to the past very much too! Only the end is sad but it leads to our two bottle blondes. Hehe.. at last Giles knows now that Angel isn't the vampire he is looking for! This story is addicting. It always let me behind wanting more :) Till next chapter!

Author's Response: You don't need to see my identification. This is not the champion you are looking for... I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 05:55 pm Title: Mortal Enemies

"What now?" indeed...

I thought the battle Takeshi and Kaede fought against Orochi was beautifully depicted. It came across in an almost slow-mo Crouching Tiger-esque way. The silent slicing of the mystical blades, the state of zanshin Kaede reaches, the dark presence of her vampire mate... I was rather saddened therefore when, at the very end, Kaede turned to Takeshi... thinking of him as, ... the man who had been her husband. I suppose that is a reflection of the blinkered education of all Slayers throughout time. *sighs*

When you switched to 1999 Sunnydale, I was not uncomfortable with the three Scoobies you showed us. Buffy's introspective seemed like her to me. I did frown a little at the, "Just call me attento-girl from here on out.” Not sure if 'attento(?)-girl' is quite what I'd expect her to say, and I'm not sure if she'd expand the response to include, 'from here on in out'... I'm not a writer though, just being a picky reviewer trying to be helpful like my story author asked...

Nothing was really OOC though. It all flowed really nicely... and you put the cherry on top of this slice of cake with Spike's totally useless attempt to look all nonchalant and indifferent *smiles warmly at weyr's Spike*

More, I say... I want MORE!

Author's Response: Stupid watchers mucking everything up! Hmm, the dialog... I'm going to ponder on that line and maybe tweak it. Thanks for the input, because yeah, I find Buffy's head to be a strange and confusing place. Thanks also for the review! I'll be posting more soon.

Reviewer: Terra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 05:41 pm Title: Mortal Enemies

Hey, i really like your story, especially the bits back in the past. It's surprisingly easy to follow the backwards plot, which i guess is a testament to good writing. the sunnydale parts are really good, too. i was wondering how they'd figure out the consort was spike, i liked how it wasn't so much them, as the sword telling them. More chappys soon please!

Author's Response: I hope the story set in the past remains easy to follow. It's fun, but kind of weird, to introduce characters and events backwards. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 04:27 pm Title: Mortal Enemies

It's really exciting can't wait to see what happens when they handle the swords.

Author's Response: Give me a few chapters. :-D I have to convince the reluctant couple that fighting together might be more fun that fighting each other. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 04:24 pm Title: Mortal Enemies

Not surprisng at all about finding it easier to get into Spike's head. He's fairly easy to read -- if you pay attention. I find him easier than Buffy also. Tehre's something about her that . . . she's in denial about more than a few things and . . . well anyway, I'm really likeing this. can't wait for more

Author's Response: The funny part is that Joss seemed to be trying so hard to make Buffy into a character that people could really relate to. Oh well. It's good to know that I'm not the only one with this particular quirk. Thanks for leaving a review!

Reviewer: maryperk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 04:02 pm Title: Mortal Enemies

Nice chappy.

Author's Response: Thanks!

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