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Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2007 - 04:20 pm Title: Covert Operations

oh can't wait to see what happens.

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Date: 02/23/2006 - 10:04 pm Title: Covert Operations

Awe, that is the way they met? I'm glad Takeshi tried to see her again even when her watcher tried to avert that. There was only one thing he knew to be true. Buffy was more than just the slayer to him, and he was more than just a vampire to her. He just didnâ??t know what that meant. Well I'm looking forward to find out! That really went well, their little excursion even if Willow's spell wasn't flawless :) Looking foward to read about the upgrades too :)

Author's Response: Are Willow's spells ever flawless? ;-) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2006 - 09:10 pm Title: Covert Operations

Loved the chapter! I'm glad Buffy and Spike are starting to get along!

Author's Response: That was one of the goals all along. :-) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2006 - 11:39 am Title: Covert Operations

More greatness. At least the Polgara didn't say anything!

Where do I know the name Amaterasu from...?

Takeshi and Kaede's meeting was classic. He had no chance. *grins*

Author's Response: I mentioned Amaterasu earlier. She's the Shinto sun goddess. And no, poor Takeshi never did have a chance. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2006 - 10:33 am Title: Covert Operations

great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2006 - 08:45 am Title: Covert Operations

I love Takeshi's story. Really fills in the blanks of what you've shown us so far; and it's fascinating!

Uh-oh. I sense trouble for our heroes! Demons can see them-- they should have know better that to expect a spell of Willow's to work as planned!

I'm curious to see what Ai's spell does though... But only two more chapters! I'm going to miss this one.

Author's Response: Tsk. Willow and her wonky spells... I promise to try to make the final two chapters good ones. ;-) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2006 - 08:04 am Title: Covert Operations

Oh, the blossoming of young love... a not unexpected way for the young Takeshi and Kaede to meet, but the tenacity of Takeshi in seeking out the intriguingly mysterious girl was quite romantic. *smiles & sighs*

Love the way Spike and Buffy are already starting to work as a team. Something that wouldn't have been picked up from their journeys into the swords, but is already there within this pair... they're comfy together, they fit. Makes me smile.

Nice, angst-free chapter. Thanks, pet.

Nit picking:
Spike and Buffy followed on his heals s/b 'heels'
For an elite military unit, of perhaps because of that fact s/b 'or'

Author's Response: For all my love of a good fight scene, I'm a romantic at heart. (Like that hasn't become obvious.) And yeah, laying off the angst for the last few chapters. I did promise a happy ending after all, didn't I? Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Nemo Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2006 - 07:11 am Title: Covert Operations

Uh oh! I really don't like the thought of them down in the initiative when the security alarms rings... Riley and his buddies? can't trust those... But they've got ther spell and their swords, so I'll guess everything will work out.
Another great chapter, can't wait for more

Author's Response: I can promise everything will work out. I just can't promise that it'll be neat and clean along the way. ;-) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2006 - 05:06 am Title: Covert Operations

--“I think things are about to get really interesting.”

I think so too! Not that they weren't interesting before, because they really were! They're just getting more and more interesting now! Yes, blabbering is my middle name, what of it? =P

Anyway, still lovin' the story! =)

Author's Response: Hee hee. I think I understand what you're trying to say. Thanks for the review!

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