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Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2006 - 01:27 pm Title: A Hands-On Approach

uh-oh...William thinks she doesn't want him, yet he couldn't be more wrong...

Reviewer: angelic_amy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2006 - 11:25 pm Title: A Hands-On Approach

Naughty, NAUGHTY Buffy. LOL. I LOVE that William changed the length of Angel's erection, that's just too funny. And both of them geting themselves off and wishing it was the other person doing it to them was great as well. Fabulous chapter. (And nice chapter titles - ROFL)

Author's Response: Thank you! The chapter titles were so fun to come up with, and the bit about William changing Angel's length was just too hard to pass up:)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2006 - 07:36 am Title: A Hands-On Approach

*gg* William was saved by his cell phone ;-) So William is 'suffering' now under the second chapter :) But naughty Buffy! Using Angel's name.. now William is jealous I dare to say :)

Author's Response: LOL Yes, Will's very jealous... but he'll get over it soon enough:)

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2006 - 07:14 am Title: A Hands-On Approach

You are a girl after my own heart-- Love how she's toying with him. And I like that he's really very "William," complete with all the insecurities. Excellent chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! Bold, frank Buffy versus shy, sheepish William is always a fun combo:)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2006 - 05:21 am Title: A Hands-On Approach

Such a divine plan she's got to seduce her roommate. Can't wait til it works.

Author's Response: Thank you! Sometimes it's those little plans of seduction that are so interesting to see:)

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 09:49 pm Title: A Hands-On Approach

Yes, she should definitely try it! Haha, keep going, this is great!

Author's Response: LOL You'll have to wait and see if she tries it or not;) I'm glad you're enjoying the fic!

Reviewer: amanda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 09:37 pm Title: A Hands-On Approach

Hey Allison i love this story its great your amazing you.. wonderful girl you...lol...can't wait for more!!!!

Author's Response: LOL Thank you! I'm happy you like the story so far:)

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 05:39 pm Title: A Hands-On Approach

great chapter

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it:)

Reviewer: spuffette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 03:42 pm Title: A Hands-On Approach

OOOOO you are so naughty!

I wish William would just go get to it with Buffy!

I really like this.
spuf

Author's Response: LOL I try, I try:) There will definitely be Spuffy goodness in the near future, I swear. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far!

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 01:59 pm Title: A Hands-On Approach

This is such a cute story! I love it so far, and it makes me grin from ear to ear each time. *LOL*

Believe it or not, I had the same reaction as Spike when I read "foot long"! That is really funny!

Author's Response: LOL I couldn't help giggling when I came up with the "foot long" part the other day, and what's worse is that I was stuck in traffic and brainstorming:) I'm glad you're enjoying the fic so much!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 12:51 pm Title: A Hands-On Approach

Great chapter! Update soon please!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you liked the chapter, and I'll be updating soon! :)

Reviewer: Opal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 12:26 pm Title: A Hands-On Approach

The tension is great! I love how Will slipped in a bit about "romance" in they style of writing he was accustomed to.

Anxiously awaiting next chappie!

Author's Response: Thank you! I think adding in the romance bit makes him seem a bit more sensitive, which can be a wonderful thing in a man. I'm happy you're enjoying the fic so far! :)

Reviewer: Saltygoodness Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 07:10 am Title: A Hands-On Approach

Awesome update! Can't wait for more...

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, and I'll be updating very soon! :)

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 06:17 am Title: A Hands-On Approach

love it!! you just have the most amazing plots when you write your stories!! thanx

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you're enjoying the fic so far! :)

Reviewer: klylu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 05:31 am Title: A Hands-On Approach

yeah, that's right! go girl, says his name! give him another good chapter while you leave for a "date", dress to kill... and we you come back, let him caught you moaninig your name! This could be evil... the poor guy wouldn't stand a chance!! lol
good work, keep on! :D

Author's Response: LOL Very right- I think William's just about to explode from sexual tension as it is. I'm glad you're enjoying the fic so much! :)

Reviewer: Ashlee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 05:01 am Title: A Hands-On Approach

Well, now I want to take an erotic literature course ;-) And I nearly spit out my drink the same time poor Spike did Lol! Poor sexually frustrated Will. I especially love the fanfic within the fanfic moments ;-) Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: LOL I don't think UWM offers one, but I know I'd sign up for it if they did. And you know me when it comes to getting you to laugh when you're drinking something- it's my mission in life;) I'm glad you're enjoying the fic so far, (almost) birthday girl!

Reviewer: Rae/UncagedMuse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 04:45 am Title: A Hands-On Approach

Enjoying muchly!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you're liking it! :)

Reviewer: bloody bint Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 04:35 am Title: A Hands-On Approach

ohmygah! HOTNESS!

This story is too good. The random bits of fic-smut is so great in there and William is hilarious! I can't wait to see waht naughy!Buffy does next! lol.

Great job sweets! *pounce*

Author's Response: LOL Thanks, Carly! I'm glad it was hot- I'm not used to writing things like that. I'm happy you're enjoying the fic, including the fan-fic parts woven into it:) I hope you continue to enjoy the story!

Reviewer: beasleysmom Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 04:18 am Title: A Hands-On Approach

Well that was just HOT!!!!! Por Buffy, all she wants is a littleWill luvin', LOL! I can see that William won't be able to resist Buffy's taunting too long, or at least I hope not cause I am one of the readers that is all about the smut! Kuddos!

Author's Response: LOL Thank you! I'm glad it was hot- I was a bit skeptical of how I was writing it. Don't worry about waiting long for smut- it'll be appearing very soon:)

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 04:12 am Title: A Hands-On Approach

Very yummy chapter. More please.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it! :)

Reviewer: neo_trinityknot Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 03:56 am Title: A Hands-On Approach

Yes you should!

Author's Response: LOL You'll have to wait and see if Buffy slips up;)

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 03:44 am Title: A Hands-On Approach

keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you're liking the fic! :)

Reviewer: marstersgirl13 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 03:14 am Title: A Hands-On Approach

more soon please!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'll definitely be updating soon:) I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 02:57 am Title: A Hands-On Approach

This is great!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you like it! :)

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 02:23 am Title: A Hands-On Approach

Great story, as all of yours are. Needed something to make me laugh. Loved Spike's comment to "a foot long"".. Jean

Author's Response: LOL Thank you! I think those lines were too hard to pass up using:) I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

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