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Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2006 - 01:34 pm Title: Flesh-Covered Spike

Yes!!! he says yes, right???

Reviewer: angelic_amy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2006 - 11:42 pm Title: Flesh-Covered Spike

Freudian slip my ass. LOL. Very nice chapter.

Author's Response: LOL Yeah, I don't think I'd come up with a Freudian slip like that whilst writing- hasn't happened yet, at least;)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2006 - 07:46 am Title: Flesh-Covered Spike

*big grin* I love the UST at the begin of the chapter :) Oh my, Buffy slipped! She wrote the wrong name! ROFL What now, William? *gg* Buffy did it on purpose! What will William answer now?

Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see how he reacts LOL I'm glad you liked the UST!

Reviewer: beasleysmom Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2006 - 09:51 pm Title: Flesh-Covered Spike

Poor William is gonna have a stroke! LOL! I love how this is playing out and the part about feeling like you belong to a community when you write fanfiction was so write on. Thank you so much for sharing this amazing fic with us, you are a Goddes! Kuddos!


Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate the compliment! I sincerely believe the part I wrote about fan fiction and being in a community- it's like a big family. I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2006 - 05:29 am Title: Flesh-Covered Spike

Just loving our forward Buffy and very proud of our William for not falling off of his chair at her advances. A brilliant little device sticking his name in there at that ever important moment. Love it!

Author's Response: LOL Those two are just so wonderful together, especially when there's the tension building up:)

Reviewer: pj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2006 - 05:05 am Title: Flesh-Covered Spike

mwahaha, i love it and good thing I'm reading when ch 4 is already up!

Author's Response: LOL Double the fun when there are two chapters up:)

Reviewer: Ashlee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2006 - 04:11 am Title: Flesh-Covered Spike

Now that was just a mean cliffie *runs off to read more*

Author's Response: LOL I do enjoy my cliffies ;)

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 11:43 pm Title: Flesh-Covered Spike

And we get to the action! Maybe. But, you know, if you make us wait longer, it would just be cruel!

Author's Response: LOL There will be action in the next/final chapter, I promise you:) I'm glad you enjoyed the update!

Reviewer: klylu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 11:34 pm Title: Flesh-Covered Spike

i'll have to say this... it's only your fault if i could never, ever again read his name without visualizing the unforgettable flesh-covered spike! damn! lol
... and tragically my visions are going to be of a ha ha ha variety, and not even a little lusty... poor me!
i totally enjoy this chapter... and i's soo waiting for the next! :D
PS the last 'what' sounds a little squeaky to me... she really does have an effect on him, uh? lol

Author's Response: LOL That phrase will be popping up again:) Sorry for the odd visual... but I'm right there with you on laughing about it instead of finding it sexy. You're very right about the "What?" at the end- he's more freaked out than angry or anything else. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter so much! :)

Reviewer: katina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 09:52 pm Title: Flesh-Covered Spike

Love it cant wait till u add on...

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll definitely be updating soon! :)

Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 07:17 pm Title: Flesh-Covered Spike

Read the first three chapters now and I love it. such an evil thing to do to william though. I sorta feel bad for him but I'm sure eveyrthing turns out in the end.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story so far! Don't feel bad for William- things will turn out very well for him in the end:)

Reviewer: caatje Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 03:00 pm Title: Flesh-Covered Spike

oh, this is just TOO good! lol. love it to bits

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you're enjoying the story so far! :)

Reviewer: Tuesday Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 02:34 pm Title: Flesh-Covered Spike

Oh! How evil! Why did you stop there?! lol

More soon!

Author's Response: LOL Sorry for the cliffie, but the wait for the next chapter will be worth it. I'm glad you're enjoying the fic! :)

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 01:36 pm Title: Flesh-Covered Spike

That was just too good. I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the update! :)

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 01:03 pm Title: Flesh-Covered Spike

she finally got it out in the open... waiitnf ro william's reaction.... waiting for more!

Author's Response: It was time for Buffy to tell the truth, and I promise William's reaction will be worth the wait. I hope you continue to enjoy the story:)

Reviewer: vitalis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 12:03 pm Title: Flesh-Covered Spike

go Buffy! its good to see she is taking an active approach!

update soon please


Author's Response: LOL It was time for her to grab the bull by the horns and be honest. I'm glad you liked the chapter!

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 11:51 am Title: Flesh-Covered Spike

great chapter

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed the update:)

Reviewer: daisy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 06:59 am Title: Flesh-Covered Spike

like he doesnt know what she's talking about. and go buffy with the bluntness. can' t wait for mroe,

Author's Response: LOL Will's not daft- he knows damn well. I'm glad you enjoyed the update! :)

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 06:20 am Title: Flesh-Covered Spike

That was very evil stopping there. Excellent chapter. Loved the title too. Looking forward to some Spuffiness in the next chapter. More please.

Author's Response: Thank you! It was evil, but the wait for the next chapter will be worth it. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, and I hope you like the Spuffyness ahead:)

Reviewer: bloody bint Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 06:16 am Title: Flesh-Covered Spike

HOOHAA! loll Naughty!buffy is quiet the blunt one innit she! *loves it* I'm telling you this is the fanfic mantra! lol. I wish writing fic got me a hot guy! lol.

Beautifully done! SOOOOO funny as always! Angel and Cordy are HILARIOUS!

Keep it up I can't wait for the remaining chaps!

Author's Response: Thank you, Carly! Buffy's been a hoot and a half to write for- you never know what she'll say or do:) I, too, wish I'd get a hot guy out of writing LOL I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 06:12 am Title: Flesh-Covered Spike

Oh wicked wicked.......just down right wicked.......




Author's Response: LOL Sometimes being wicked is oh so fun:) I promise the next/final chapter will be worth the wait!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 05:52 am Title: Flesh-Covered Spike

good update and cliffhanger

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it:)

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 05:31 am Title: Flesh-Covered Spike

now that was just MEAN! LOL.....

Author's Response: LOL Sorry:) I promise the wait will be worth it!

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 05:31 am Title: Flesh-Covered Spike

Hmmm... am I the only one here who's not really clear on William and Buffy's relationship? I'm assuming they are roommates and Buffy likes William, and so does he, but they haven't made a move yet. And this is Buffy's way of getting William's attention. Am i right?

Author's Response: Yep, you're entirely correct. Like it says in the summary, Will is her roommate, and while they both are attracted to one another, they're not dating. You'll find out more about their back-story in the next chapter:)

Reviewer: spikeshunny Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 04:21 am Title: Flesh-Covered Spike

Eee,

Loved that chapter !!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :)

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