Date: 06/29/2023 - 03:30 am Title: Rats
Nice! Angels conception of the Initiative and Willow and his situation is so creepy and incredibly well done!
Date: 04/13/2007 - 09:03 pm Title: Rats
So Angel got caught by the initivitie, that is a good question would Spike have been able to bite and aminal on the show, it is living.
I noticed you has Willow as a vamp or is it just seeming like it.
Author's Response: Yes Willow is a vamp. And it was never really clear what Spike did with all those kittens he won at poker, so who knows if he could hurt an animal or not.
Date: 01/20/2007 - 06:17 am Title: Rats
oooo this is soooo good, is there more coming , i hope so! i can't wait to see what happens. Do you mind letting me know when you up date it? thanks
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Date: 01/12/2007 - 11:21 pm Title: Rats
Ah.. I should have thought about that: In this world it was Angel that got the chip and not Spike like in the series. No wonder Darla told Spike that Angel was ill. :)
Date: 01/11/2007 - 03:24 am Title: Rats
Good background, look foward to Buffy's return
Date: 01/10/2007 - 09:43 pm Title: Rats
Oh my, Bizarro World Willow and Angel with a chip in his head!
You write an incredible POV for Angel's damaged mind; the language is so very emotional. The last couple of paragraphs from Spike's perspective are also very telling.
This chapter is absolutely superb and really touched me.
PS. Angel's right: Spike is pretty!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. This chapter was kind of a pure indulgence for me. I mean I could have left it out and simply explained that Angel had been chipped, but once the idea had taken root in my head I just had to play around with it. So I'm glad you like it. And Spike is pretty.
Date: 01/10/2007 - 09:37 pm Title: Rats
Interesting twist, having Angel be the one to undergo the Initiatives special brand of mind control. Look forward to the next chap.
Date: 01/10/2007 - 03:35 pm Title: Rats
I like your concept of their little society. Very nice. Eagerly awaiting the next bit!
Date: 01/10/2007 - 04:43 am Title: Rats
So Angel has a chip. It's interesting to read Angel's experiences in the "white room". Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks. Poor Angel had it worse than Spike. Partly because he was in worse shape when they captured him, but also they did more experiments on him than they did on Spike. I hsould have more soon.
Date: 01/10/2007 - 03:32 am Title: Rats
great update. Is Buffy going to help fight the war?
Author's Response: Thanks, and you'll have to wait until the next chapter to find out.
Date: 01/10/2007 - 01:35 am Title: Rats
I am going to hang in there with you as you finishe this story. I have enjoyed it from the begining becuase the premise is very interesting.
Author's Response: Thanks. And these days my life is much less hectic so I'm sure I'll get it finished sooner rather than later.
Date: 01/10/2007 - 12:31 am Title: Rats
Thank you for the author's note, it did make things clearer. This is all very good but the last part was wonderful. Spike's thoughts on their relationship, the feeling that he is intruding on something intimate, that last sentence...God. Lovely writing. Looking forward to more. Kudos.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. I actually had to go check what the last sentence way, cause I couldn't remember, and you're right it is good ;). This chapter was kind of my induldgence of my love of Darla and Angel.
Date: 01/10/2007 - 12:17 am Title: Rats
Thanks for the author's note at the beginning. I really liked this chapter. Can't wait to see all the players as you've alluded to some we are quite familiar with...I assume.
Author's Response: All the pieces should start falling in place soon. And you're welcome for the note.
Date: 01/09/2007 - 11:19 pm Title: Rats
hi, i've been reading this fic since last month and have been waiting patiently for new installments. and you haven't disappointed. i really love this story and look forward to reading some more. well done!
Author's Response: Thanks, and there should be more in about a week or so.
Date: 01/09/2007 - 11:17 pm Title: Rats
Well, the tables are turned... somewhat. Angel became the lab rat... Can't feed at all...worse. And Doppelganger Red and Whimp.. are still torturing Angel.
Waiting to see what happens with Buffy. Did anyone make a Wish??
Author's Response: Angel isn't doing well in this 'verse it's true. As for Buffy, you'll see what she does in the next chapter.