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Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2006 - 02:08 am Title: Act III; Scene III: 'A Devised Dastardly Plot Begins'

Great chapter! Hope things don't get too out of control!

Author's Response: Thank you. Sorry but things will get angstsy. spuf

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2006 - 08:21 pm Title: Act III; Scene III: 'A Devised Dastardly Plot Begins'

Ah Spuf..You know I love this story..SO I was glad to see an update : D

This was a pretty funny chapter aside from the "plans" that Harmony has in the making. I loved Buffy's " Okay, nobody talks about my Spike like that!”..then the put down about Harmony's hair and nose! lol

So..Buffy is going to Sunndale U? Guess that's that...

HAVE A GREAT VACATION!


Author's Response: Thanks. I love silly sappy High School fics! The plans seem harmless for now but when Riley is involved??? Thanks again, spuf

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2006 - 06:47 pm Title: Act III; Scene III: 'A Devised Dastardly Plot Begins'

Thanks for the tip, I am just hoping that it all blows up in the nasty group's face, ane they get what they deserve. GReat chapter, always looking for more, but enjoy your vacation and thanks

Author's Response: Thank you. It will blow up in their faces, yes, but ppl will be hurt before then...so please be warned. spuf

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2006 - 05:34 pm Title: Act III; Scene III: 'A Devised Dastardly Plot Begins'

Gotta say I enjoyed the Harmony bashing in this chapter, I just can stand that annoying character so anytime she gets bashed is of the good. It's a shame it lead to the four losers to team up against our favorite pair though. Loved Buffy's interaction with the Giles family. Great chapter!
p.s. I hope you have a fun vacation! :D

Author's Response: Yeah, it's always fun for me to bash that bimbo! Anyway...look for the angst to begin soon. Things will spiral out of control. Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2006 - 04:47 pm Title: Act III; Scene III: 'A Devised Dastardly Plot Begins'

Uh-huh... Harmony and Riley are bonding to get revenge? Ah no, more Samantha, Faith and Harmony (and then Riley)? Not so good for Buffy. I hope she'll win. :) And Jenny knows her son very well ;-)

Author's Response: Riley is a prick, sorry but he is. The others are just clueless... The angst is coming soon, Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2006 - 04:08 pm Title: Act III; Scene III: 'A Devised Dastardly Plot Begins'

Jeez, what the hell did Buffy do to any of them? They need to worry about their own pathetic lives and forget about her. It's just really sad, and at least Spike would never hit her. This just makes me so glad to be done with high school...lol! I hated it with a passion. I hope they won't do anything too drastic. I'm not such a huge fan of angst. I'm glad the dinner with his parents went well and that they might be going to the same college. Good chapter=)

Author's Response: Well, it's the old story: jealousy and all. Things will get rough because like all ill-laid out devious plans, this one will get out of hand! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2006 - 02:18 pm Title: Act III; Scene III: 'A Devised Dastardly Plot Begins'

Finally caught up on this story. Well done :) These two are so incredibly sweet together. Man, I wish I had someone like Spike that was so devoted! Great job :)

Author's Response: Thanks. I know, I wish I had a Spike too! spuf

Reviewer: Spikesonlychilde Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2006 - 03:29 am Title: Act III; Scene II: 'Come To My Window'

I really love this story. It so sappy and happy -it's perfect. You really made me hate Riley even more than I normally do. So good job. lol. That takes talent. Can't wait to read more. I am so in love with this story.

Author's Response: Thank you. Yeah, it's sappy but it's going to get angstsy later! spuf

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2006 - 08:25 pm Title: Act III; Scene II: 'Come To My Window'

I'm a bit late reading but a last I'm here :) Awe! 'William and Buffy 4ever' Good that indeed Buffy father didn't notice her writing this :) *gg* It when so well when Spike stayed the night at Buffy's house (no one seemed to notice) but Dawn did. Clever one! ~ And don't worry: the chapter was worth the wait.

Author's Response: Thank you. MOre angst later, but for now... spuf

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2006 - 09:05 pm Title: Act III; Scene II: 'Come To My Window'

Such a sweet chapter! Loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you! More soon, spuf

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2006 - 05:02 am Title: Act III; Scene II: 'Come To My Window'

Aww. Sweet. I guess the writing in the cement seems to becoming true. Nice touch.

Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, cement writing can be quite prophetic! spuf

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2006 - 04:43 am Title: Act III; Scene II: 'Come To My Window'

Nice. Gotta admit, I'm surprised they could be so quiet, but I think it is sweet that they are in the honeymoon stage still. I'm just waiting for the next big fight, though- I can smeel it brewing. :-) Thanks for a good update!

Author's Response: Yeah, we should all be 'that' quiet, eh??? Don't worry too much about Spuffy fights; it's the outside factors that might cause problems. Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2006 - 04:22 am Title: Act III; Scene II: 'Come To My Window'

That whole date that was in the last 3 chapters was just perfect....from beginning to end. Though I am sure Mom and Dad wouldn't like..I am glad Buffy and Spike were able to spend the night together. YOu can't say that it went to fast for them. They have obviously loved one another since they were little kids.. Amof..A couple like that are great for getting married young..and striking out on their own together..*hint hint* lol Great update!

Author's Response: Good, I'm glad that the date stretched out for 3 chapters. I remember dates that I wanted to do just that! Yes, Spike and Buffy have loved each other for years. Spoiler alert: I think you might be on to something here! Thanks again, spuf

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2006 - 04:10 am Title: Act III; Scene II: 'Come To My Window'

Awww... this was such a romantic chapter. William and Buffy's names etched in cement was so sweet. Fantastic update... I really enjoyed it! :D

Author's Response: Thank you. I thought the etching thingy would be a nice touch! spuf

Reviewer: eireanne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2006 - 03:56 am Title: Memories

hey, first off i wanted to say that i love all of your stories, and while i did like it, it sort of seemed like it got off to a shaky start, it was a little choppy and hard to follow in some parts, im keeping with it and will read the rest because again im a fan of yours, and it might be just me everyone else seems to love it

Author's Response: Thank you and I hope you stick with this fiction. I think it will get easier for you to read as you go. Sometimes I have to find the right path to take while I'm writing and posting. spuf

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2006 - 02:40 am Title: Act III; Scene II: 'Come To My Window'

You know, I always got annoyed of all the students that would constantly make out at school. I would tell them to get a room...lol! I guess I was always in a mood since I wasn't getting any, but they are just too sweet in this story. You have me in awe mode and I'm glad they did that in front of everyone. Great chapter, glad for the update=)

Author's Response: I know what you mean. It can be out of place sometimes. Spike and Buffy just go hand in hand though so I think it's okay, right? Thank you, spuf

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2006 - 11:57 am Title: Act III; Scene I; 'Sweet Love'

You did pretty good with that love scene..but you should write what makes you feel comfortable and feel natuaral. That being said, however you decide to write them, keep the love scene frequent. I LOVE this Buffy and Spike together. They are so sweet together! Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Thank you. Sometimes I just get shy??? Yes, Spike and Buffy are very good together; I agree. spuf

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2006 - 09:02 pm Title: Act III; Scene I; 'Sweet Love'

Nope, I didn't hear that news (your answer for my last review). But around the time I read that fic a school in Berlin (I think it was Berlin) was in the media. They wanted to close it because of problems, but they didn't yet. ~~ Awe, the first date was cute :) And they even skipped the cinema for better things ;-) *deep breath* Angst to come? You will made up for it, I'm sure :) Loved the chapter, don't worry.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I can always count on you! The problems in the schools here has to do with immigration situations in California, etc. It's quite a serious situation and very votile! Thanks again, spuf

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2006 - 08:44 pm Title: Act III; Scene I; 'Sweet Love'

Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you. spuf

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2006 - 07:32 pm Title: Act III; Scene I; 'Sweet Love'

I loved this sweet chapter.
It was just perfect the way it was. No need for the sex scene's to always be NC-17. :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I try to write NC-17 but it doesn't always work out! spuf

Reviewer: Whitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2006 - 06:38 pm Title: Memories

Oooooh! This looks like so much sugar, and i love sugar...feed me more...lol. But please kill Reily soon!

Author's Response: Yeah, you might get a cavity! LOL! Thank you. Don't worry about Riley (evil blood sucking a**hole that he is!) spuf

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2006 - 06:52 am Title: Act III; Scene I; 'Sweet Love'

Awww....sweet chapter! I liked the love scene. A secluded moonlit beach was such a romantic setting for Spike and Buffy's first time together. Nice job! ;-)

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm trying to catch up on my responses. spuf

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2006 - 05:07 am Title: Act III; Scene I; 'Sweet Love'

Why do you think yo're inept at the love scenes? I think this was really sweet! Things don't have to be NC-17 graphic to be good... I think this was actually a really good chapter, and much better than some of the more detailed chapters i've written by other authors. :-) Good job on this- and I won't have you knock another thing about it. :-D

Author's Response: I'm a bit insecure about sex scenes. Thank you for your support, spuf

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2006 - 04:41 am Title: Act III; Scene I; 'Sweet Love'

i thought that you did a good job on the sex scene

Author's Response: Thank you. Sorry for the late response! spuf

Reviewer: StrawberryJam Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2006 - 08:28 pm Title: Act II: Scene V: 'Can't Seem To Help Myself Around You!'

Ooh! Update soon, I BEG you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Sorry I didn't respond sooner. RL is a bugger! Thanks and heres some more chapters for you. spuf

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