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Reviewer: linz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2006 - 07:37 pm Title: Ch 22 - Happy at last

cant wait for the final chappy, ive loved this fic from beginning to end, great read!!!

Reviewer: Kerry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2006 - 06:59 pm Title: Ch 22 - Happy at last

absolutely loved it :D:D:D:D:D

ace fic xxxxx

Reviewer: Suzee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2006 - 04:30 pm Title: Ch 22 - Happy at last

They're so sweet...and can I just say, you like my writing? After reading this story that becomes so much more of a compliment than it already was...and thanks for giving us an epilogue too :-)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2006 - 01:03 pm Title: Ch 22 - Happy at last

Their first time was emotional and playful, I enjoyed the spontaneity.

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2006 - 07:29 am Title: Ch 22 - Happy at last

Great ending-- I'm going to be sad to see this one go. It was a fun ride-- thank you!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2006 - 06:32 am Title: Ch 22 - Happy at last

perfect ending to a perfect story. loved it.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2006 - 06:05 am Title: Ch 22 - Happy at last

Terriic story! I'll be waiting for the epilogue!

Reviewer: Chanel #5 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2006 - 04:43 am Title: Ch 22 - Happy at last

thankyou for sharing that fantastic story!!!

Reviewer: Chakal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2006 - 04:04 am Title: Ch 22 - Happy at last

Gah, I'm sad to see this one go, definitely. But I don't think a great story such as this could have had a sweeter or more perfect ending! I'll be awaiting the epilogue! Congrats, dear!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2006 - 03:54 am Title: Ch 22 - Happy at last

Ah, that was a nice sweet ending. looking forward to the eppy.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2006 - 02:22 am Title: Ch 22 - Happy at last

Aww, that was sweet! So very glad there will be an epilogue! :)

Reviewer: Weeza Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2006 - 02:15 am Title: Ch 22 - Happy at last

That was so great! and so sweet. I'm glad there is gonna be an epilogue because I'm still craving more.

Reviewer: Shell Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2006 - 08:12 am Title: Ch 21 - The next morning

Glad he brought up William never lying to her since Spike already did with saying that when he and Dru were dating they "only" just kissed. A little lie, I know - but still he did lie. (This the time in a discussion when my husband would say to me, "Would you just let it go?") Besides that, I really liked this chapter and I think his telling her that he was in love with her in a roundabout way is what really helped him in this case.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2006 - 02:46 pm Title: Ch 21 - The next morning

William's explanation was heartfelt and vividly drawn. What an excellent opportunity to backhandedly confess he's in love with Buffy. This chapter was intensely emotiona, and I especially enjoyed William pulling back from the Spike persona to highlight his sincerity.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2006 - 10:05 pm Title: Ch 21 - The next morning

I hope she believes him and takes him back! Don't they still have that room? Update soon please!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2006 - 08:06 pm Title: Ch 21 - The next morning

loved it. hopefully, spike forgives buffy for her so little trust in him. loved it lots. i wonder if dru will make another appearence. if she does, i hope buffy punches her lights out!! oh, i know that's mean but i guess i'm not in too good of a mood. lol. loved it. this really cheered me up. post soon.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2006 - 08:02 pm Title: Ch 21 - The next morning

Well, here's a good sign! I don't have any memory of this chapter whatsoever! Wheee! LOL! Maybe our psychic connection dissolved.

Love the chapter, looking forward to more. :)

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2006 - 03:58 pm Title: Ch 21 - The next morning

That was an awesome chapter. It's just so cool how, till the end of this chapter, I think, even we had forgotten that in the end, he is still William, the same guy from the beginning, from the first few chapters, and that you can make us get that lost, and that into the story... dude that's just rad :D

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2006 - 03:53 pm Title: Ch 21 - The next morning

Wow, Pulling our the big "William" guns, way to make her see the light there Spikey ol' boy! Still hate the Dru screwed up what would of been a hellava night for Buff & Spike, but hey, they are alone, in her bedroom for the day with Joyce gone and there's "in love" in the air now, And Buffy believes William would never lie to her so..... dare I hope for the planned evening to begin now? They are just too precious together to stay apart any longer, and lovemaking between Buffy and William (with a little bit o Spike thrown in) should be beautiful. More please.

Reviewer: Suzee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2006 - 03:15 pm Title: Ch 21 - The next morning

'kay, so you're not so evil now...thank you :-) I'm glad that even after they started dating and after things got more complicated, Buffy and William are still the best friends that they always had been....that didn't make much sense sorry....I'm just glad that Buffy and Spike can still trust each other. Thanks :)

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2006 - 01:05 pm Title: Ch 21 - The next morning

Wow-- I liked that William shed his persona to remind Buffy he was still her loyal best friend. William should give communication seminars for men! Something like, "The Powers of Persuasion," or "How to Be Heartbreakingly Vulnerable." I'm glad that Buffy dropped her anger to answer truthfully.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2006 - 12:22 pm Title: Ch 21 - The next morning

First, I'd have smacked him if he told me he would graciously accept my apology lol. I probably would have given him hell on the principle of just that comment! LOL. But that's me, and I'm a b*tch. Second, I like how you put "William" in there. How you defined for us and Buffy that "Spike" is just a persona and William is the real man that is her best friend.

Author's Response: Haha. That comment was deliciously sheeky. But it sure got her attention!

Reviewer: Weeza Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2006 - 12:13 pm Title: Ch 21 - The next morning

Wonderful!!! I can't wait for more of this!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2006 - 11:50 am Title: Ch 21 - The next morning

A little angst... hopefully the Dru thing is over.

Reviewer: klylu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2006 - 11:44 am Title: Ch 21 - The next morning

well... moments like that only happen in the movies... AND in fan fictions! lol
i don't think william would lie to her either... but he did, sort of... when they went thru their dating the other phase, he lied to her about what he had done with dru (not only kissing)



Author's Response: I wondered if anyone would bring up this point, and people will have lots of differing opinions on this one. Here are my thoughts, as the author. Buffy didn't really see that as lying on William's part. She knew he was dating Dru and she knew they were being somewhat intimate. He just didn't feel comfortable giving her all the sordid details when he knew it would hurt her feelings. He wasn't about to say, "Well actually she did put her hand on my crotch." Buffy was hurt that he didn't confide in her but she didn't accuse him of lying. That's pretty much all I have to say about that. Thanks for the review and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

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