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Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2006 - 08:39 am Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

Too bad-- It's so sad when one builds up expectations of how a thing is going to go down, that nothing will ever live up to those expectations. I hope Buffy gives him a chance to explain.

Author's Response: Absolutely. You so got that! Yay!

Reviewer: Weeza Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 09:12 pm Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

NOOOOOOO!!!!!!! OMG, he better have a damn good explanation for this!! *hands on hips, tapping foot* Great story! I can't wait to see how things turn out between them.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 07:02 pm Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

Just read this from the beginning and I wanted to thank you for taking such care with the story and characters. The dialogue is realistic and snappy, and the characters are smart and delightful to read. The strong friendship between William and Buffy has been believable, and their attraction and subsequent romance was well paced. The young love theme is well realized, including roller coaster emotions and lust addled encounters. You're peppering in a lot of humor between these two, and it's fun to read. This latest twist was inevitable - if there's no conflict, there's really no plot.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this wonderful review. It's always a big thrill to gain new readers. To be reviewed so highly as well is a huge bonus. I hope you enjoy the end of the story.

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 02:03 pm Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

not fun...fix it!

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 01:22 pm Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

Trouble in paradise...damn that Dru. Unless you're evil and had Spike really kissing her...lol. Great twist!

Reviewer: M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 11:49 am Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

Poor Buffy! And Spike's hands on Dru's waist doesn't support his she was kissing me and I wasn't into it. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: SpikeLover213 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 06:03 am Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

holy crap! whyyyy???? more plz? ^.^

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 04:25 am Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

can't say that i'm surprised that happened. loved it though. feel bad for buffy. drusilla is one mean homewrecker. i really cant' stand her. anyway, post soon. loved it.

Reviewer: jennybean Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 03:20 am Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

Darn it! Buffy should know Dru's probably up to no good (at least I hope).

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 03:12 am Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

I knew that HoBag would screw everything up. And now poor Buffy won't let Spike explain. I know he would've pushed here away and spat out her nasty old kiss if Buffy would of come bay just 1 second later. I know he would of done that. So now we gonna have big time angst while hobag laughs her ass off at Buffy and Spikes pain? Maybe while she's laughing so hard, she won't see the big mack truck barrelling down the road just as she steps out and smaking her into a bug spattered hood ornament while taking her far far away from Sunnydale. I hope Spike and Buffy talk soon, surely Buffy knows what a manipulative bitch Dru is and will believe Spike in the long run? More please. It's most excellent!

Reviewer: sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 02:14 am Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

dammit, why did you have to go and do that for? i hate spike right now, even if drusilla did start the kiss, he should have pushed her away the second it happened. please, make it better soon.

Reviewer: jennifer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 02:05 am Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

ohhhhhhhhh how mean! of course, things can never go right for those two, not matter what 'universe' it's in! :)

Reviewer: Suzee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 01:42 am Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

Not to copy gypsy_jin or give you too many reviews for this chapter..but I felt like that too...but I still say an update is necessary ;-) and hey, at least its finally being someone other than me being evil ;)

Author's Response: Too many reviews? There is such a thing as too many reviews?

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 01:26 am Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

Oh no....that's horrible! I hope Spike catches up tp her. Don't just let her walk away. Update soon please!

Reviewer: mjspuff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 01:08 am Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

omg.... please update soon

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 01:06 am Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

I guess it must be one of those two... lol! If you have writer's block, lemme know, maybe I can clue you into what you should write, lol! Take care. :)

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 12:50 am Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

See, you've just posted this chapter and I know I've read this! Did you post it on those other sites before this one? It's still weird because this is the main fanfic site I read from. I dunno, maybe it's just a big ol' deja vu.

Anyhoo, the condom bit was funny, priceless even. :P

Also, sorry I forgot to mention it before (the deja vu thing is getting to me, lol) but a big HUGE congrats on baby Liam! That's very exciting!! :D

Author's Response: Actually I wrote the first draft of this chapter earlier this week in an A5 note book with a blue ballpoint pen. I was sitting in bed at the time having a nice cup of tea and hoping Liam wouldn't wake up before I finished. So either it's deja vu or we have a freakish psychic connection. : ) Thanks for the review and the congrats. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

Reviewer: ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 12:46 am Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

aww...stupid dru...ruining everything...he had better be telling the truth cuz he really just screwed himself...poor buffy.. great chapter.

Reviewer: Suzee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 12:43 am Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

In case you missed the memo, you're horribly evil and therefore must update very, very soon so that I don't have to be mad at Spike anymore ;-) And Buffy was so cute with the being nervous and planning and everything...yep, update is necessary here :)

Author's Response: Ohhhhh horribly evil. I like that. *wink*

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 04:08 am Title: Ch 19 - The big decision

I just love this story. I could swear I've read it before though, have you posted this on another site maybe? I dunno, but it's really good and I love reading it. Looking forward to more! :)

Author's Response: Hey gypsy_jin. This story is being updated on Sweet Temptation as it's being updated here. Parts of it are also available at the BSDiaries and Sinister Attraction. Maybe you read it at one of these sites? Thanks for the review. I hope you enjoy.

Reviewer: ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 08:52 pm Title: Ch 19 - The big decision

havent had the chance to read this in a while...i loved everything...looking forward to another great update

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 07:52 pm Title: Ch 19 - The big decision

Please don't let dru screw up Buffy's Sadie Hawkins dance plans! THat would just be too tragic. Love the tale. Looking forward to more. I love how at ease they are now that they got over that friends to lovers (without the sex) hurdle. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 04:43 am Title: Ch 19 - The big decision

i really don't believe that dru is just....dru. i think she's a man-stealing hobag!!!! oops! was that a little harsh??? sorry. lol. anyway great job. i really hope spike doesn't fall for dru's trap. she's evil!!! well, maybe not in this story but i wouldn't put it past her to try and get spike to betray buffy. post soon.

Reviewer: Jennifer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 02:51 am Title: Ch 19 - The big decision

Oh, please hurry! I just read the first 19 chapters & now I need to read more!

I'm not sure how old the posts you've made are, so I apologize if my congrats on your baby are really really belated!

Author's Response: It's never too late for baby congratulations. : ) My son is now a bouncing, smiling 3 and a half month old. Thanks for the review. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 02:43 am Title: Ch 19 - The big decision

Hehe...she's such a naughty girl! I hope it goes well for them! Update soon please!

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