I'm realy liking the direction of this storey so far. The characters and the plot are incredibly engaging, and the dialogue is well-written and believable. I would suggest using a beta, though, because there are quite a few misspellings and grammatical errors that create unnecessary distractions.*

Author's Response: Thank you, I haven't posted an new chapters in a few months because I was busy. I do realize there are a few errors *blushes* but I'm currently looking for a beta for the story so hopefully I'll have one soon. :)