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Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2009 - 09:35 am Title: Even Good Girls Get Punished

And I'm back to hating Tessa again. You'er really yanking me back and forth with her character. Still, I don't think I could forgive her for allowing Dawn to be put through that. Perhaps Dawnie being killed was for the best.

Reviewer: Tanja Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 09:09 am Title: Even Good Girls Get Punished

Oh my God! Dawn is dead? I wasn't expecting that! I'm having a great time reading your story and, let me tell you, I'm SO happy to have stumbled upon it when it was already finished. I can't handle wips and cliffhangers and stuff. I'm a wimp. Eh eh eh. I can't wait for the morning shift at work to be over so I can read some more! :D

Reviewer: Ella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2006 - 10:01 pm Title: Even Good Girls Get Punished

oh my god. that chapter was great!
update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! I will be posting very soon!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2006 - 05:42 pm Title: Even Good Girls Get Punished

Oh yeah, Tessa is cruel to Dawn in this chapter. You give what you get, huh? Same thing was done to her. ~ Well but now Tessa is responsible for getting Dawn killed (Yeah, I know you wrote that you didn't know yet what you would do with her and that she would get killed .. or not.). This will be hard for Buffy when she finds out.

Author's Response: Tessa definitely is not a nice vampire, but then again, 99% of them are vile. Buffy will not take it well, but you'll have to wait and see what happens when people find out.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2006 - 01:28 pm Title: Even Good Girls Get Punished

great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2006 - 05:03 am Title: Even Good Girls Get Punished

good update

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: katakata Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2006 - 03:44 am Title: Even Good Girls Get Punished

Ok so I'm swinging more towards hating Tessa than feeling any sympathy for her at the moment, LOL! Please tell me this a mistake...you're not going to kill Dawn are you? Will be eagerly waiting for the next instalment.

Author's Response: Hating Tessa is the best choice at this point- she's a horrible vampire. Dawn is dead, though - for purposes of the story, I wanted a character to die, and Dawn seemed to fit the bill the most because she's so similar to Tessa. I hope you will stick with the story despite Dawn's death.

Reviewer: Cas Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2006 - 03:42 am Title: Even Good Girls Get Punished

Good original plot so far, but please tell me it isn't so, not Dawn!

Author's Response: Thank you! Sadly, though, Dawn is no longer alive. Generally, I can tolerate her character, but for purposes of the story, she had to go.

Reviewer: pj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2006 - 02:26 am Title: Even Good Girls Get Punished

A dark and promising beginning - it's too bad Tessa doesn't realize she's doing the same thing to Dawn that happened to her. I can only imagine what Buffy is going to do o_o

Author's Response: Thank you! Tessa is repeating what happened to her over a century ago on Dawn, and I think she revels in that. Buffy's reaction definitely will not be a good one.

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